Fixing the Movie

Originally posted by ickeris2003
the noooo scene isnt that bad. remember anakin is still young and emotional about the whole situation that just happened.

I agree with you on this one ickeris.
BTW PVS women who are very thin often look like that when they're pregnant, my mom did 😉
I wanted to add something to my previous post:
in the book when Obi-Wan finds out Anakin has turned he literally collapses from pain, in the movie his first reaction is a little too blank for me. Perhaps if he hadn't started talking immediately he would have looked stoned. BTW I think the whole idea of making Yoda fight with a lightsaber is a little excessive, it looks cool but......

Completly remove GG and replece his screentime with:

a duel between ani and mace

some 4 on 1 jedi vs sith action in the arrest scene

the jedi putting up more of a fight at order 66

a mace and ani duel would have been class

Originally posted by PVS
-have real actors play the role of doctors at padme's birth scene. do we have to have CG fill every inch of every scene in every moment of the film? OOOOBAAAAA OOOOOOBAAAAAA wtf was that????

😆 exactly, that scene was supposed to be serious and i was sitting ther half annoyed by it and half laughing

also change a few bits of dialogue that were a bit cheesy, like:

obi wan:i will do what i must
anakin:yoou willl trrry

and the NOOOOOOO! bit, sung by vader, that was really stupid

^^ Thanks Elenora

1.) Cut Jar-Jar.

2.) Make Grevious actually stand somewhat of a chance against Obi.

3.) Redo that lame "Nooooooooooooooo!"

1. Better edit (including dialogue), example:

"Anakin...you're breaking my heart!" (Period, cut to Anakin, look of confusion, partial light side shading?, back to evil eyes).

2. Jedi are powerful...POWERFUL. Clone Troopers are rehashed Jango Fett's, men with guns. Jedi eat men with guns for lunch, even at ten to one odds. Show the inside of the Jedi temple in more detail...more of a balanced battle with Anakin helping the Troopers a key factor. Have Troopers getting force thrown, sabered and just a$$ kicked from her to Dagobah, winning only threw unending numbers poring into the temple.

3. Give Grievous his menace back. He should not have been on the bridge telling Droids how to pilot. He should show up when least expected. I thought of him as a robotic hitman, he shows up...people die. Clone Wars may be EU but which Grievous was the better character? Having a Jedi killing robot with alien intelligence and lightsaber training creates TENSION George...someone could actually DIE if they fight him. That way no one knows what to expect when he makes an appearance.

4. Mace Windu thrown out a window? How lame is that? Fry him with lighning, then lance him with a lightsaber through the gut. Watch him slowly realize that Anakin is standing behind him, his blue blade emerging from Mace's abdomen. What have I done indeed...you killed a Master boy...and it felt good you evil, selfish brat. (Cue the first slow Imperial March theme) Betrayal George, plot device sure, but again that tension...wtf will happen next kind of thing..

5. "Let her go Anakin..." Hey Obi, how about a little force push here...I'm choking, see? Look at my hands holding my neck...a little help please. Talk about slow on the uptake. Obi sees Anakin killing Jedi and knows he's killed children (Younglings...ugh!). Naturally, he feels he can still be reasoned with.
I could go on, but..you know already

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-palpatine dicking w/ anakins mind should've happened more extensively in AOTC, that way anakin's change wouldn't be feel so abrupt.
-not making obi-wan look like such a ****ing padawan in the fight w/ dooku.
-included qui-gon.
-let anakin get beat in a better way than that damn-fool flip in the air.
-have the 3 jedi w/ mace put up a better fight against palpy.
etc...

1) although cool, during the arrest scene, the 2 jedi who got owned should have put up a fight. and make palps seem uber strong (like a force choke on 1 of the jedi while fighting the other 3)

2) get rid of the NOOOOOOOO!!!

3) make GG seem a little more cool

4) make it obvious that palps was toying with Windu in the arrest scene

5) extend the movie so we can see more Jedi fighting during order 66 (ie. anakin saber duels with random jedi etc.)

on and on...

but whatever, the movie is at it is...we cant change that so just accept it..

1) Kill Jar Jar

2) Longer Yoda vs Sidious fight. Show more of Sidious getting his arse kicked and show how close Yoda came to beating him.

3) Give Grievous more screen time and power.

Talking about changing the movie... did any of you see the MagnoliaFan RE-edit- re interpretation of TPM and AotC? Sorry wrong thread?

- Remove GG
- More mech Vader
- Change "Nooooo!" to "Argh!" or something.
- Vader kills Mace

Originally posted by ickeris2003
^^ Thanks Elenora

It's Eleonora 😉
So, based on the evidence, I'd say we have a new "Jar Jar case" with GG. 😛

BTW R2 what's wrong with the "You will try" line? I thought it was fantastic, it makes you understand he feels unbeatable 😉

it wasnt what the line was implying, i get that, it was more to do with the line itself, it just sounded cheesy im not sure if it was bad acting or bad dialogue, mayb if he sed "id like to see you try" or "lets see you try" or somthing

-better reaction from OW after seeing hologram

-more duel dialogue(and more duel actually, they filmed plenty)

-more seduction(the book did this very well)

-increase Portman's pay, maybe that will get her going

-more temple raid(stalking Shaak Ti)

-change the "NOOOOO" to a straight scream

-(I will think of more later)

1 Natilie cportman needs serious acting lessons

2 General grievous , needs more bad-ass as someone said earlier set him on shakk ti

3 make it clearer in the mace windu/palpatien fight

4 Go with the original vader scene , where there are real people with the droids healing Darth vader and upon realising that he killed padme (even though he didn't) lets out a force scream that destroys everything in the room droids,people and even flings palaptine into a wall

Let Peter Jackson be in lead of the Art Team.

Put some footage back in the Duel.

- The Senate rebellion forms...after Padme says.."So this is how democracy dies..." have her turn to Bail and say "We have work to do.." or something that sets up a meeting of the Senate Rebels.

- "..I have the high ground..."
- "...you underestimate my power...", then Anakin force pushes Obi-Wan further up the hill, or performs a lightsaber throw, forcing Obi-Wan back as Anakin leaps up the hill..light saber returns to his hand and the battle continues until Obi does something spectacular or Anakin becomes distracted feeling Padme's life slip away...

- OOOoooobaaa OOOObaaa wtf is this, Polis Massa lamaz breathing?

- What did the Wookies actually do in their battle? Did they win? Did they lose? Was the battle over once Anakin/Vader had the droid army shut down? Did the clones turn against the Wookies in their search for Yoda? What...what....whaaaattttt!?!

1.) Cut Jar-Jar.

2.) Make Grevious actually stand somewhat of a chance against Obi.

3.) Redo that lame "Nooooooooooooooo!"

Where was Jar-Jar? He said what 1 line and you saw him twice? The other 2 I agree with and give Anakin a better scene in the Jedi Temple.

Originally posted by Lord Tyrant
Let Peter Jackson be in lead of the Art Team.

Put some footage back in the Duel.

Oh my god....

I forgot about the almighty, do no wrong, uber being that is Peter Jackson. 😛