The Works Of A Devil

Originally posted by heavenablaze666
^ that kinda does 🙂

a recent email I got changed the way I feel (hint, hint)

Originally posted by *Georgina_A*
Great work again, Mario 👆

Originally posted by Commando Queen
well i could use a few more words....... 😉 😛

Originally posted by NunYahBidness
mmkay....seriously your work is sophomoric at best and the same subject matter can only be done so many times and so many ways before it starts to sound cliche'. originality is not one of your strong points, but you do have a grasp for the language of what one would call an attempt at poetry. in a word it is prosaic at best, but truthfully good enough to work for Hallmark or Carlton card if that is your goal...

"You can only please some of the people, some of the time."

Originally posted by Oiram62205
The Secrets/Crush

I talk to you all the time
But you try not to say too much
I opened up my thoughts to you
But you never once let me in
I confessed my love to the world
But you turned and walked away
I would've given you all of me
But what it is you want I dont know
I wanted to be the one
But you chose so many others
The secrets you keep I'll never know
But my crush I'll feel it everyday

i LOVE this one

Originally posted by bilb
i LOVE this one

Thnx for checking my thread out.

Originally posted by Oiram62205
😊

a recent email I got changed the way I feel (hint, hint)

Thnx. I'm glad my work is well received.

Whatever 🙄

ok dontgetit

"You can only please some of the people, some of the time."

Originally posted by heavenablaze666
what is that supposed to mean 😖hifty:

😂 hmmm 🙂

Originally posted by Oiram62205

Whatever 🙄

dont you roll your eyes at me mister!

tomato

Your death
It brings pain and sorrow
The tears that mourn
Are not of my eyes
But of those foolish enough to care
I was amused when you challenged death
And cheered as I watched you fall
Blood beneath my feet
As I dance on your grave
You may have laughed once
But its your cold dead heart
That lies clinched in my grasp
You should have known better
Than to take up arms against
One who has survived the wrath of God
I have grown tired of this
So I once again return to reclusiveness
Waiting in shadows for another
Who wishes to dance with the Devil

Originally posted by Oiram62205
Your death
It brings pain and sorrow
The tears that mourn
Are not of my eyes
But of those foolish enough to care
I was amused when you challenged death
And cheered as I watched you fall
Blood beneath my feet
As I dance on your grave
You may have laughed once
But its your cold dead heart
That lies clinched in my grasp
You should have known better
Than to take up arms against
One who has survived the wrath of God
I have grown tired of this
So I once again return to reclusiveness
Waiting in shadows for another
Who wishes to dance with the Devil

Alone and out casted
I sit here pondering
How would be friend
Could turn their backs
Has everyone lied to me
Am I the pawn
In this game of deceit
Silhouettes cast shadows
Across my cowered state
As the relentless laughter
Reaches deafening levels
I clasp my ears,
Close my eyes, shutter
And scream in anger
Soon the thunderous echoes
Become faint whispers
I open my eyes only to realize
I have been consumed by darkness
The air is cold and dry
I feel my lungs gasping
As salty crystals remind me
Of how alone I really am
Have a pushed away all those
that once saw my pain
I hear their whispers
Still no one yet heres my screams
I feel the presence
of others like me
So similar
like reflections in a mirror
We are beautiful contradictions
That the world gave up on
Funny that there are many of us
But Even more walls
to keep us separated
I do wish I had found hope
But I am a man of too many flaws
So alone and out casted
I will sit and ponder
The desires of a boy
Whose words were his voice
Words that only found an audience
In his demise

omg.... hun I know what this feels like, but you can't give in to it. Not everyone's deserted you and not everyone hates you. You are a special person, never forget that. I know you brought lots of smiles to my face when I was sad....

nice work mario 😊

Thank you ladies

Originally posted by Oiram62205
On a cold dark night
The rain pours
I take your hand
Leading you to paradise
The water traces your face
Like crystallized tears
Time slows its pace
As we laugh and play
I get lost in the moment
And think to myself
This must be a dream
Beauty such as yours
Is rare to this world
Your hand brushes my face
As our eyes meet
I already love you
like I have no other
Yet somehow I fall deeper
Soon you are in my arms
And our lips catch
The sky's tears before
Gently touching
The rain stops
As the night greats morning
Signaling the end
To our shower beneath the stars

They're all amazing..especialy the one bilb quoted and this one ^^ ..I love it...😊

Originally posted by Oiram62205
tomato

rofl

Originally posted by Oiram62205
Your death
It brings pain and sorrow
The tears that mourn
Are not of my eyes
But of those foolish enough to care
I was amused when you challenged death
And cheered as I watched you fall
Blood beneath my feet
As I dance on your grave
You may have laughed once
But its your cold dead heart
That lies clinched in my grasp
You should have known better
Than to take up arms against
One who has survived the wrath of God
I have grown tired of this
So I once again return to reclusiveness
Waiting in shadows for another
Who wishes to dance with the Devil

creepy.. but great!! i love this one.. as well as all your others!

damn i missed a lota poems!!

Originally posted by Oiram62205
Alone and out casted
I sit here pondering
How would be friend
Could turn their backs
Has everyone lied to me
Am I the pawn
In this game of deceit
Silhouettes cast shadows
Across my cowered state
As the relentless laughter
Reaches deafening levels
I clasp my ears,
Close my eyes, shutter
And scream in anger
Soon the thunderous echoes
Become faint whispers
I open my eyes only to realize
I have been consumed by darkness
The air is cold and dry
I feel my lungs gasping
As salty crystals remind me
Of how alone I really am
Have a pushed away all those
that once saw my pain
I hear their whispers
Still no one yet heres my screams
I feel the presence
of others like me
So similar
like reflections in a mirror
We are beautiful contradictions
That the world gave up on
Funny that there are many of us
But Even more walls
to keep us separated
I do wish I had found hope
But I am a man of too many flaws
So alone and out casted
I will sit and ponder
The desires of a boy
Whose words were his voice
Words that only found an audience
In his demise

"We are beautiful contradictions
That the world gave up on"

GREAT line!!!

Originally posted by Fianna
They're all amazing..especialy the one bilb quoted and this one ^^ ..I love it...😊

Originally posted by snehin
damn i missed a lota poems!!

Originally posted by snehin
wats goin on here?

Originally posted by bilb
"We are beautiful contradictions
That the world gave up on"

GREAT line!!!