The Works Of A Devil

Originally posted by ShapedByWords
As you stand in front of me
I am watching my every dream come true
I have got to find a way to make you mine
even if it’s the last thing I do
The love you have already shown
is felt by my heart all the way to it’s core
But still you leave me
wanting you to give of yourself something more
I have to question why you would hesitate
to fulfill what is truly meant to be
How do I sway your heart into believing
what you’ve been searching for is me
For the chance to walk by your side
I would even turn away from heaven’s door
But still you leave me
wanting you to give of yourself something more
Here I am still trying to convince you
that these feelings may never go
Just how much I really do love you
I need you to know
Your eyes have told me
how much you care many times before
Somehow that seems like it should be enough
But still you leave me
wanting you to give of yourself something more

Originally posted by ShapedByWords
As you stand in front of me
I am watching my every dream come true
I have got to find a way to make you mine
even if it’s the last thing I do
The love you have already shown
is felt by my heart all the way to it’s core
But still you leave me
wanting you to give of yourself something more
I have to question why you would hesitate
to fulfill what is truly meant to be
How do I sway your heart into believing
what you’ve been searching for is me
For the chance to walk by your side
I would even turn away from heaven’s door
But still you leave me
wanting you to give of yourself something more
Here I am still trying to convince you
that these feelings may never go
Just how much I really do love you
I need you to know
Your eyes have told me
how much you care many times before
Somehow that seems like it should be enough
But still you leave me
wanting you to give of yourself something more

id never leave you

Originally posted by Enslaved
id never leave you

Originally posted by snehin
a fight or just a comment?

a comment to the poem...

I said I wouldn't do this, but GAH!!! A suggestion, not necessarily the right one, but a suggestion none the less.

Yours:

As you stand in front of me
I am watching my every dream come true
I have got to find a way to make you mine
even if it’s the last thing I do

Revision:

There, before me stands my every dream that permeates my inner soul, come true. The struggle, Herculean in scope that I must endure, the hope infinitesimal as I strive to make you mine…………………

Again! A suggestion, no more no less. Take it or leave it, s'up to you.

I finally see what you mean. My lines are prosaic. 😖 Too bad this knowledge came so late. I am leaving KMC. Bye ppl.

I hope you don't mean for good or anything 😕

Originally posted by ShapedByWords
I finally see what you mean. My lines are prosaic. 😖 Too bad this knowledge came so late. I am leaving KMC. Bye ppl.

Originally posted by Coldfire
I hope you don't mean for good or anything 😕

Originally posted by Coldfire
I hope you don't mean for good or anything 😕

Originally posted by Fëanor
aah...they all say that, but they come back eventually with their tails betwixt their legs.

i think he'll be back..even if its just to post more poems..

Originally posted by Enslaved
i think he'll be back..even if its just to post more poems..

Why is he going his poetry is cool

Originally posted by Fëanor
aah...they all say that, but they come back eventually with their tails betwixt their legs.

Originally posted by Unknown Girl
Why is he going his poetry is cool

Originally posted by Unknown Girl
Why is he going his poetry is cool

Originally posted by Coldfire
*sigh* si si....

Guess he's sick of this place *shrug*

i hope he does his poetry is nothing compared to poetry that has been published he should make abook.

Originally posted by Unknown Girl
i hope he does his poetry is nothing compared to poetry that has been published he should make abook.

Yeah i guess ur right

I wrote a song ppl.

alone and afraid hide me from today
shattered it hurts to live
lost in this I die
If you stay
can you see, can you see

visions of you, visions of you
visions of you, visions of you
give me all I need
visions of you
take me where you lead
you know I'd follow, you know I'd follow
with visions of you
I close my eyes
they can't save, they can't save
they won't save me

empty thoughts fill my head
I need you here where have you gone
Said you'd take the pain away
But I'm alone and afraid
can you see, can you see

visions of you, visions of you
visions of you, visions of you
give me all I need
visions of you
take me where you lead
you know I'd follow, you know I'd follow
with visions of you
I close my eyes
they can't save, they can't save
they won't save me

visions of you
they can't save
they can't save

alone and afraid
can you see, can you see
visions of you
they can't save, they can't save
they can't save, they can't save
lost in this I die

It's so sad 🙁