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ShapedByWords Living My Last Days

What? 🙂 😛 😆

snehin Darth wolf

Originally posted by Coldfire
love the pics hun 😄
lol nah you don't

ofcourse i do

ShapedByWords Living My Last Days

I have started to write another song...

and yes its sad 😛

snehin Darth wolf

Originally posted by ShapedByWords
I have started to write another song...
and yes its sad 😛

lol

Enslaved Ice Queen

why do u write sad poems

ShapedByWords Living My Last Days

Because my heart is sad.

DreamingWarrior Knight Errant

Oiram, we need to go have a beer at the Lizard Lounge, and watch some women.

ShapedByWords Living My Last Days

We should do that.

ShapedByWords Living My Last Days

my third attempt at song writing 😉

I lie here alone with images and words
memories that just wont let me go
our love still lives in me
can you see it in my eyes

I never wanted you to know
How this tears me up
Every second apart
leads me back to you
Every second apart
It kills
It kills
It kills...me

I lie here alone with daggers and swords
scars from you that just wont let me go
Our love still lives in me
Can you see it in my eyes

I never wanted you to know
How this tears me up
Every second apart
leads me back to you
Every second apart
It kills
It kills
It kills...me

Our love still lives in me
Can you see it in my eyes

Every second apart
Every second apart
Every second apart
leads me back to you

Every second apart
Every second apart
Every second apart
It kills
It kills
It kills
(fade out)

Enslaved Ice Queen

Its a sad song

DreamingWarrior Knight Errant

Originally posted by ShapedByWords
We should do that.

Ha. pm me and I'll get ya my cell number.

Sad? that is wrenching... dang man. (good but ouch....)

Coldfire <3 <3 <3

Originally posted by ShapedByWords
my third attempt at song writing 😉
I lie here alone with images and words
memories that just wont let me go
our love still lives in me
can you see it in my eyes
I never wanted you to know
How this tears me up
Every second apart
leads me back to you
Every second apart
It kills
It kills
It kills...me
I lie here alone with daggers and swords
scars from you that just wont let me go
Our love still lives in me
Can you see it in my eyes
I never wanted you to know
How this tears me up
Every second apart
leads me back to you
Every second apart
It kills
It kills
It kills...me
I never wanted you to know
How this tears me up
Every second apart
leads me back to you
Every second apart
It kills
It kills
It kills...me
Our love still lives in me
Can you see it in my eyes
Every second apart
Every second apart
Every second apart
leads me back to you
Every second apart
Every second apart
Every second apart
It kills
It kills
It kills
(fade out)

Very sad indeed.... good job

snehin Darth wolf

Originally posted by ShapedByWords
Because my heart is sad.

isn't everyone's

Originally posted by ShapedByWords
my third attempt at song writing 😉
I lie here alone with images and words
memories that just wont let me go
our love still lives in me
can you see it in my eyes
I never wanted you to know
How this tears me up
Every second apart
leads me back to you
Every second apart
It kills
It kills
It kills...me
I lie here alone with daggers and swords
scars from you that just wont let me go
Our love still lives in me
Can you see it in my eyes
I never wanted you to know
How this tears me up
Every second apart
leads me back to you
Every second apart
It kills
It kills
It kills...me
I never wanted you to know
How this tears me up
Every second apart
leads me back to you
Every second apart
It kills
It kills
It kills...me
Our love still lives in me
Can you see it in my eyes
Every second apart
Every second apart
Every second apart
leads me back to you
Every second apart
Every second apart
Every second apart
It kills
It kills
It kills
(fade out)

sad hmm u did this one well

ShapedByWords Living My Last Days

Finally something snehin likes 😛

heavenablaze666 suicide angel

✅ i like it

ShapedByWords Living My Last Days

You dont think its too sad?

Coldfire <3 <3 <3

Originally posted by ShapedByWords
You dont think its too sad?

Well the main objective of a poem is to try and make the reader feel the emotions in the poem... so the sadder the better (?) I dunno.... I didn't think it was too sad tho

DreamingWarrior Knight Errant

just keep writing! haha ! 😄

ShapedByWords Living My Last Days

I need to call someone. Sorry I haven't.

ShapedByWords Living My Last Days

GIRL ACROSS THE SEA

My heart often travels it seems
To a land that I have never seen
If only for a few hours at a time
Trying to persuade you to be mine
And maybe I am a fool for believing
That a girl across the sea
Is all that I need to be complete
If I am, don't take this away from me
Not now when I need it most
It has been a year and a few days now
And still I find I love you some how
I am amazed at how you make me feel
How you convince me that dreams are real
And maybe I am a fool for believing
That a girl across the sea
Is all that I need to be complete
If I am, don't take this away from me
Not now when I need her most