The Works Of A Devil

Started by snehin29 pages

Originally posted by Oiram62205
well that was then what about now?
now im done for the day hmm not bad 1 and a half paragraphs in a couple hrs of thinkin and writtin did me good!!

it was only a matter of time

The knives of sorrow that I cling to kill me
long before the clinched daggar pierces my skin
I watch the red liquid flow bringing to the surface
all that I have hidden from the world
No one heard my screams for help
Maybe they'll take notice in my death
pain and sorrow
We were friends for so long
But I will not miss you
Those who claimed to care will welcome you
I hate to end thing here
but my time has come
to say goodbye

Originally posted by Oiram62205
The knives of sorrow that I cling to kill me
long before the clinched daggar pierces my skin
I watch the red liquid flow bringing to the surface
all that I have hidden from the world
No one heard my screams for help
Maybe they'll take notice in my death
pain and sorrow
We were friends for so long
But I will not miss you
Those who claimed to care will welcome you
I hate to end thing here
but my time has come
to say goodbye

Oh wow.... that's so deep.... 🙁

i hope those knives come at me and hard!sadwalk

Originally posted by snehin
i hope those knives come at me and hard!sadwalk

Don't say that hun 🙁

Originally posted by Coldfire
Don't say that hun 🙁
well not like i hav much to go against it everythin i worked for is now gone!!sadwalk

Hey hey hey......

Originally posted by snehin
well not like i hav much to go against it everythin i worked for is now gone!!sadwalk
none of this sh#t. You haven't lost your soul or life yet, ok? look a bit up ok? ((tryin to lift some spirit...) 😄

Originally posted by snehin
well not like i hav much to go against it everythin i worked for is now gone!!sadwalk

It is gone, but its not like you can't get it back again. And I know it will take a lot of work, but I know you are capable of it 🙂

why has my poetry thread become a damn chatroom?

My Name is Marc

The Aftermath

I was given life today
At the sacrifice of another's
The souls differ,
But the shell lingers unchanged
Though faint
The lies
The unrealized dreams
The inability to trust
All still remain
From crumbled ruins
I will start anew
Rebuilding what was lost
The journey will be long
My only companions
A journal and the words left in it
Words that I must never forget
Hope is not that far away

Originally posted by Oiram62205
why has my poetry thread become a damn chatroom?

You know what, I have no idea lol. But we can take it over to my thread if you don't want it here hun 🙂

Originally posted by Oiram62205
The Aftermath

I was given life today
At the sacrifice of another's
The souls differ,
But the shell lingers unchanged
Though faint
The lies
The unrealized dreams
The inability to trust
All still remain
From crumbled ruins
I will start anew
Rebuilding what was lost
The journey will be long
My only companions
A journal and the words left in it
Words that I must never forget
Hope is not that far away


notworthy

Originally posted by Oiram62205
I'm okay
Thats my favorite lie
I tell it to you all the time
While pretending it doesnt hurt
I see the how you look at him
With eyes that never look away
I see how you embrace his every touch
like a puppet at his command
I wish I could stop the longing in my heart
It gets tiresome fighting back tears
Faking a smile
so no one sees
I'm okay
Thats my favorite lie
I tell to it to myself
while trying to convince myself it doesnt hurt
I see the way you could never look at me
with eyes that only know love
I see how you'll never know my touch
My hands following the curves of your body
I wish I could stop the longing in my heart
it gets tiresome fighting back tears
Faking a smile
so no one sees
I'm okay
Thats my favorite lie

this one is pretty good...lol

Originally posted by Oiram62205
The knives of sorrow that I cling to kill me
long before the clinched daggar pierces my skin
I watch the red liquid flow bringing to the surface
all that I have hidden from the world
No one heard my screams for help
Maybe they'll take notice in my death
pain and sorrow
We were friends for so long
But I will not miss you
Those who claimed to care will welcome you
I hate to end thing here
but my time has come
to say goodbye

wow! i love your poems there awsome awsome awsome!

Originally posted by Oiram62205
The knives of sorrow that I cling to kill me
long before the clinched daggar pierces my skin
I watch the red liquid flow bringing to the surface
all that I have hidden from the world
No one heard my screams for help
Maybe they'll take notice in my death
pain and sorrow
We were friends for so long
But I will not miss you
Those who claimed to care will welcome you
I hate to end thing here
but my time has come
to say goodbye

THAT is what you call an emotion....🙂

Originally posted by Oiram62205
Falling Without Knowing

My feelings for you have started to change
I find myself wanting and needing you,
In ways I have never for any other
I dont know how much more my heart can take
With you not knowing
So let me pretend
Lie to me if you have to
Just tell me you feel the same
I care about you for reasons I cant explain
I think possibly I have already fallen
And I never saw it coming
You see I am observant of many things
Thats why its so surprising that I never noticed this
So let me pretend
Lie to me if you have to
Just tell me that you feel the same

i always get a new favorite with you....lol

Originally posted by Coldfire
You know what, I have no idea lol. But we can take it over to my thread if you don't want it here hun 🙂

notworthy


lol
Originally posted by RaeRox
i always get a new favorite with you....lol

yep you do

Originally posted by Oiram62205
lol

yep you do


😛

More poems please 😄

Originally posted by Oiram62205
lol

yep you do

What am I going to do? *faints dramatically*

Originally posted by RaeRox
What am I going to do? *faints dramatically*

lol 😛 Don't faint on us *gets a bucket of cold water* 😄 😂

Originally posted by Oiram62205
why has my poetry thread become a damn chatroom?
sry thts my fault ahh well atleast the trip was good had loads of peace and quite so its kinda refreshing!!nice new one by the way!!