I've managed to post the start of my story. 😄
Here's hoping everyone will read. 😄
I Will Be Posting Regular Reminders Of My Final Drafted Fic Here.
The First Part Is Coming Along Magnificently. Gone Are The Childish Moments And Poorly Written Parts.
"Dudley, Why Don't You And Harry Go To The Park." 🤨'Dudley opened his mouth intending to ask what had just happened, but stopped himself when he saw 2 ice creams flying towards him. One hit him in the head, while the other harry caught and began to eat. Dudley didn’t say anything, but began to eat.' eer
Gone.
The First Two Chapters Are Now One. I Haven't Thought Of A Title, But It Will Be Different.
I'm Currently At The Part, Where Harry Has Just Apparated To The Weasley's House. (If You Read My First Draft, You Know What I'm Talking About.)
Originally posted by `~lion_heart1~`
I've read the Curse of Doom and I really liked it. Actually,I'd like to suggest that others read it as well and you'll see what I mean. Great story, ~*Lover_girl1*~ ! 😄And I seriously can't wait till you post yours hotsause. 😛
it is no mere coincidence that they have similar names. how IRONIC is that?
A Short Piece Of My Revisions:
Rough Draft:It was now bright outside again, although harry was slightly panicked, because the Weasleys had not answered the door after a few minutes of knocking, and the fact that his guardians of 16 years were now dead. Discouraged, Harry turned to disapparate. He was just wondering where he could go when he heard several loud pops around him. Harry whipped out his wand quickly, ready to fight as many death eaters as he could. But It wasn’t death eaters that had just apparated in front of the Weasley’s house, but the Weasleys themselves.
Final Draft:Harry Frowned, His Anxiety Growing. Three Minutes. Three Minutes Of Knocking, And No One Had Answered The Door. Perhaps The Weasleys Were Out? Sighing, He Turned Around, And Took In The Fullness Of The Country. Around The Dwelling, Birds Chirped. Harry Could See The Devious Ghomnes Poking Their Heads out Of Their Holes. Rolling Hills Surrounded The House, and Harry Thought He Could See A Small Lake Off To The Right. Behind The House, He Knew There Was A Large Hill, Overlooking A Small Town. He Supposed He Was Lucky That No More Death Eaters Had Found Him. Setting his Mind On Heading Back To Privet Drive, He Suddenly Heard A Couple Loud Popping Noises.
He Whipped His Wand Out, Ready To Fight As Many Death Eaters As Had Come. But Instead Of Seeing Several Large, Hooded Men, He Saw A Large Crowd Of People, Ranging From Large To Small, Red Haired To Blonde. It Was Only The Weasleys.
Underlined Sentences Are Basically The Same. Which Isn't Much 😬
Hate To Say It, But It's Turning out A Bit Different. I Like It This Way Though, So If You Don't....Read Sauce's Fic. droolio
Originally posted by Saratn
it is no mere coincidence that they have similar names. how IRONIC is that?
Originally posted by hotsauce6548
I think I know what you're trying to say. I was thinking the same thing...
What are you going on about, Saratn ?
And what were you thinking hotsause?
Besides, I've heard that you aren't allowed to creat to accounts on one person from Saratn himself.
Originally posted by `~lion_heart1~`
What are you going on about, [B]Saratn ?And what were you thinking hotsause?
Besides, I've heard that you aren't allowed to creat to accounts on one person from Saratn himself. [/B]
I think you know.
Originally posted by Barker
It's A Habit Now. 🙁 I'm Trying To Break It Though.
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