Ya Krunk'd Floo's Dazzlingly Delicious Discursives...

Less chat more poemz.

Originally posted by Ya Krunk'd Floo
Hmm, let's see...Hmmm...Oh! Here we go:

- You admonish me for a lack of manners - whilst calling me nasty, nasty doo-doo names.

Don't preach if you're not a holy shit yourself. It's most unbecoming.

I never called you 'doo doo names' cry

And I am holier than thou bluequeen

*notices Lil B*

😕

Yeah, more poetry! 😱

You started it...Nuh-nuh-ne-nuh-nuh...

I started it, yes ✅

Now, finish meh 😱

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! I swear, you two act like a married couple of many years!!! Don't know whether to feel elated or remorse!

Eeee-eeee-eeeeeeeeeeeeee-eeeee-eeeeeeeeeeeeee-e...and I'm finished.

The Natural Four

Blow with me, Dr. Wind...
As you medicate from the back.

Share the shine, Ra The Sun...
Your wealth is forever golden.

Hit me heavy, Reverend Rain...
As life acts like water.

Shield my eyes, Cloud The Guard...
My brow is all wet-beaten.

Merge your talents, The Elemental Four...
And lives are left less-broken.

But...

Even by your murder, You bring us more,
So, the circle revolves in motion-motion...

Fabulous, just fabulous darling!

I like the lack of depression and morbidness in your poems.

Thanks.

Although terrible tragedies can occur and there are millions of people suffering from poverty, I feel that life is essentially good, so people should celebrate it.

Star City

Star City, the lights so bright,
The Pollution has covered what remained of natural light,
Star City, the lights so bright,
Electricity flowing giving planes the twinkling sight,
Star City, the lights so bright,
Not a lost soul unguided by the wattage height,
Star City, the lights so bright,
This nursery is finished and if this continues, then so we might...

dude! cry i'd hate to be the first to hand out empty platitudes, so i'll just say it like how we boiz say it here...dat bettah dan poi-poi, yah...shakah brah'!!!

Originally posted by Ya Krunk'd Floo
[B]The Natural Four

Blow with me, Dr. Wind...
As you medicate from the back.

Share the shine, Ra The Sun...
Your wealth is forever golden.

Hit me heavy, Reverend Rain...
As life acts like water.

Shield my eyes, Cloud The Guard...
My brow is all wet-beaten.

Merge your talents, The Elemental Four...
And lives are left less-broken.

But...

Even by your murder, You bring us more,
So, the circle revolves in motion-motion... [/B]

This is wonderful, Krunk... I especially like the way you've jumped from one element to the next, providing only one reference to each. It's strong, although short. And also, the fact that you've combined gratitude with regret makes the piece ever more powerful.

Ya Thanx ya people!

I thought up Star City as I paced around the roof of my apartment building, after my g-friend had a 'turn'...It brought a stillness to my mind.

Originally posted by Ya Krunk'd Floo
Ya Thanx ya people!

I thought up Star City as I paced around the roof of my apartment building, after my g-friend had a 'turn'...It brought a stillness to my mind.

Please, sum mo-ah dem dat stooff...and who knows, maybe the tables will turn and I shall suppose a prose unlike me but like you, and you unlike you but like me, y'see? NEXT!!!

I'm not human, but I do feel, fo' real. Wurd.

I do lick summa yo' stuff, dough.

This is a load of junk...

My boll

Ocks are sweat and my Rich
Ard is hard, all a result of wanting to cop
Off hard, slow, quick, but firm
Sticking my wick in your r
Ear sweet nothings through as I lift your skirt and see your
Tu-tus are for the Ballerina-kind, who can bend - heart, body and
Mind the gap as you step-off, horizontal
Limbo, what I really want is to f
Uck a Bimbo - blonde and shrill, happy to suck Co.
Ck-a-doodle-doo me one more time as I get bored so quickly of playing
With mine, so bend
Over my dear, do you like my doggy
Style is purchased from the streets take
It home and give her a bone, she likes it
Hard.

Originally posted by Fëanor
So I guess even the mighty Ya Krunk'd is human afterall...and to be human is to feel and to feel is to wax poetic?

Please, sum mo-ah dem dat stooff...and who knows, maybe the tables will turn and I shall suppose a prose unlike me but like you, and you unlike you but like me, y'see? NEXT!!!

Originally posted by Ya Krunk'd Floo
This is a load of junk...

[B]My boll

Ocks are sweat and my Rich
Ard is hard, all a result of wanting to cop
Off hard, slow, quick, but firm
Sticking my wick in your r
Ear sweet nothings through as I lift your skirt and see your
Tu-tus are for the Ballerina-kind, who can bend - heart, body and
Mind the gap as you step-off, horizontal
Limbo, what I really want is to f
Uck a Bimbo - blonde and shrill, happy to suck Co.
Ck-a-doodle-doo me one more time as I get bored so quickly of playing
With mine, so bend
Over my dear, do you like my doggy
Style is purchased from the streets take
It home and give her a bone, she likes it
Hard. [/B]

Originally posted by Ya Krunk'd Floo
This is a load of junk...

[B]My boll

Ocks are sweat and my Rich
Ard is hard, all a result of wanting to cop
Off hard, slow, quick, but firm
Sticking my wick in your r
Ear sweet nothings through as I lift your skirt and see your
Tu-tus are for the Ballerina-kind, who can bend - heart, body and
Mind the gap as you step-off, horizontal
Limbo, what I really want is to f
Uck a Bimbo - blonde and shrill, happy to suck Co.
Ck-a-doodle-doo me one more time as I get bored so quickly of playing
With mine, so bend
Over my dear, do you like my doggy
Style is purchased from the streets take
It home and give her a bone, she likes it
Hard. [/B]

That's f.ucking fantastic. Jeez... 😱

I'm not preaching - but I am - but I'm not - but I am - but i'm not - but people should care less about being oh-so 'profound' and just experiment and have some fun with their poetry...

How many different ways can you say 'I'm so depressed'?

For The Appraisal

Oh, so yep...Hmmm, there it is. OK! One day as I began my birth I had a positive reflection on days gone by. Sure, it could be misconstrued by the doubting, but I really began my life seconds, minutes, hours, days, weeks, months, years, decades, centuries - that's it for now - before I popped...Let me stop you....there. Mmm, that's better. Before we begin our journey we must mark out the signs that guided us to where we are. So, begins the path of pleasure.

1) Rid Thee Of Thy Shame

Oh-boy! This is a difficult one, but it's imperative for your progress. Get use to not admiring/despising your own reflection. Have a glance, by all means...Consider your faults, if you must...But then...LET THAT SHIT GO! What is the point in considering yourself in the instanteous moment of your life? You're not in a movie. You're not a picture postcard on your perfect wall. You're just you as you live and breathe! There is no library of past poses and nonsense said. Just forget it and breathe. Look. Listen. Laugh. Last, I think you've got pimples.

2) Real-Time Courtesy

Shit, if we all just helped someone in need, then there would be no people in need. It's that simple. Don't wait for someone else to do it. YOU DO IT! Think this way and even cloudy days where you feel you can only see two-steps infront of you will feel less claustrophobic.

3) Simple, Natural Beauty

If you live in a city, look up. If you live on the coast, look far. If you live on a mountain, look down. If you live on the flats, consider the expanse. Everyone covered? Good. Let's move on...

4) You Know That Funny Thing You Said?

Say it again. Then, when everyone is bored of you saying it, say it with a different tone of voice. Mock yourself and the world will follow you. Stand proud and dull, then the living world sucks your soul as you are devoid of light. Not all light is electric or natural, dontchaknow...

5) Positive Reactions Lead To Refractions

What was that I said about shame? Yeah, ya dig? Down-down-down and out. Up-up-up and about. Ya hearin' me?

Is all for now. More shall follow. Add your own, if ya down wid tha flava I'm seasoning...