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Ladyluck .

I have a couple but they aren't finished. I'm stumped for the endings. 😛

I wish I could go back in time
To yesterday's today
To change the things that I've done wrong
And make them go away
I'm aware of what I've done
I just want to take it back
I know I hurt you really bad
With guilt my sky is turning black

That's all I have for that one 😬

Coldfire <3 <3 <3

Originally posted by Ladyluck
I have a couple but they aren't finished. I'm stumped for the endings. 😛
I wish I could go back in time
To yesterday's today
To change the things that I've done wrong
And make them go away
I'm aware of what I've done
I just want to take it back
I know I hurt you really bad
With guilt my sky is turning black
That's all I have for that one 😬

Ooo me likes so far! And I know that feeling all too well, unfortunately.

Revernd Maynard Cummin Soon

Originally posted by Ladyluck
I have a couple but they aren't finished. I'm stumped for the endings. 😛
I wish I could go back in time
To yesterday's today
To change the things that I've done wrong
And make them go away
I'm aware of what I've done
I just want to take it back
I know I hurt you really bad
With guilt my sky is turning black
That's all I have for that one 😬

Exellent and dark. I love poetry droolio

Coldfire <3 <3 <3

I love poetry too droolio

Speaking of which, got any more Lea? 😛

Ladyluck .

Originally posted by Revernd Maynard
Exellent and dark. I love poetry droolio

😄

Originally posted by Coldfire
I love poetry too droolio
Speaking of which, got any more Lea? 😛

I've got a few more unfinished ones but I seem to have misplaced my notebook. 😬

Coldfire <3 <3 <3

Originally posted by Ladyluck
😄
I've got a few more unfinished ones but I seem to have misplaced my notebook. 😬

Oh I did that... made me soooo mad... hope you find it soon!

Ladyluck .

Found it 😄

It's not quite done but I don't know what else to write...

I just might be okay today
If only you were there
If only you had tried to listen
If only you had tried to care

I suffer every night and day
Tears flowing all the time
I blame you for all the blood
I lost and should be mine

Your foolish ways will never stop
This I know is true
It seems that making me happy
Is too much to ask of you

Ritoshi Senior Member

Originally posted by Ladyluck
Found it 😄
It's not quite done but I don't know what else to write...
I just might be okay today
If only you were there
If only you had tried to listen
If only you had tried to care
I suffer every night and day
Tears flowing all the time
I blame you for all the blood
I lost and should be mine
Your foolish ways will never stop
This I know is true
It seems that making me happy
Is too much to ask of you

That was so sad cry. it was really good but so depressing cry *Hugs lea*

Ladyluck .

hug 😄

Ritoshi Senior Member

More shock

Ladyluck .

I'm working on it. 😛

Ritoshi Senior Member

Originally posted by Ladyluck
I'm working on it. 😛

Lol do Poem Fridays 😠 About dreams 😠 Damn you lea 😱

Ladyluck .

I can't just be given a topic to write about. I need to write what I feel. 😛

Ritoshi Senior Member

Originally posted by Ladyluck
I can't just be given a topic to write about. I need to write what I feel. 😛

😖hifty:

Coldfire <3 <3 <3

Originally posted by Ladyluck
Found it 😄
It's not quite done but I don't know what else to write...
I just might be okay today
If only you were there
If only you had tried to listen
If only you had tried to care
I suffer every night and day
Tears flowing all the time
I blame you for all the blood
I lost and should be mine
Your foolish ways will never stop
This I know is true
It seems that making me happy
Is too much to ask of you

😱 Nice one! hug

Originally posted by Ladyluck
I can't just be given a topic to write about. I need to write what I feel. 😛

lol I used to be like that too, but now it gives me a challenge to work under pressure and to be given a couple limitations 😛

Ladyluck .

Originally posted by Ritoshi
😖hifty:

Maybe 😛

Originally posted by Coldfire
😱 Nice one! hug
lol I used to be like that too, but now it gives me a challenge to work under pressure and to be given a couple limitations 😛

Thanks 😱 hug

I don't do well under pressure. 😛

Ladyluck .

I'm thinking about doing drawings to some of my poetry hmm

Coldfire <3 <3 <3

Originally posted by Ladyluck
I'm thinking about doing drawings to some of my poetry hmm

hey, that's a good idea 😄 I tried doing that, except drawings with a story I was working on... but the drawings sucked 😛

Ladyluck .

😂 Aww.

I just wouldn't know what poem to do. 😛

Death_Stalker13 red alert

Originally posted by Ladyluck
I hate you when you're sober
I hate you when you drink
I hate you more than anyone
Way more than you think
The pain you've caused is going to stop
I can't take anymore
I'm leaving and never coming back
I'm walking through the door
These eyes won't shed another tear
These wrists won't bleed another drop
I'm through with you and your drunken ways
All this nonsense has to stop
My bags are packed it's time to go
I never will return
I'm leaving you forever and ever
From this I hope you learn.

Lea.. face it... you have talent 🙂