A story about Revan, and some questions.

Well to anybody that wants to write a fight, I've already posted a part of the story so far in the story thread, there is one fight in there between Revan and Vandar. It could use some extra writing if somebody wants to do that. Also a practice match between Revan and Kavar would be nice, if somebody feels like writing it.

Change as much as you want as long as it doesn't change the back story, what I've written now is primarily a draft until I start fleshing it out so if you want to add more details thats just fine.

Okay people I have a shit load of questions, and I can appreciate every answer or idea you have.

First of all I need names for 12 Jedi Council members. Atris, Vrook, Vandar, Zhar you know the famous guys are all in it, but I need more. So far I have Caligo and Erus.. But I need more names.

Also I really need a name for the Exile, and I want to know if I could put him in the council or not. I have my doubts about it, but I think I will.

Also I need three more planets besides Dantooine and Coruscant that could have Jedi councils on them.. If anybody knows any please tell me. Cause I can't really think of any. I'd prefer some low level planets at important locations but I guess thats to much to ask, just three planets that could have Jedi on them would be great.

And what do you people think of the possibility that Revan created HK before he found the Star Forge, or that he found the Star Forge before the Mandelorian war was over? Because I'm not quite sure on how everything went with the Star Forge... Which do you think is the most likely thing?

Also, (Can't edit anymore) Does Vandar talk like Yoda?

Originally posted by Fishy
Okay people I have a shit load of questions, and I can appreciate every answer or idea you have.

First of all I need names for 12 Jedi Council members. Atris, Vrook, Vandar, Zhar you know the famous guys are all in it, but I need more. So far I have Caligo and Erus.. But I need more names.

The following are based off of an African dialect. But first, something I'd like to point out; Bass, as in Vodo-Siosk Bass, means chief in that same dialect. Anyways. . .

Vuur, pronounced vur, translates into fire. Leier means leader, but I think you should mess with that, making it into something like Leiar. Dier translates into animal, and [/B]Aandor[/B] is a spoof off of aandoening, or emotion. Bes means hurt, but I think Beshik sounds better. Lastly, I think a translation of warrior could work, such as the Sanskrit word 'Kshatriya', improvised into Ksatir, pronounced ksa-THEER.

Originally posted by Fishy
Also I really need a name for the Exile, and I want to know if I could put him in the council or not. I have my doubts about it, but I think I will.

I myself used nethus, but if you want to put him on the Council as a young prodigy or something, the last name could work.

Originally posted by Fishy
Also I need three more planets besides Dantooine and Coruscant that could have Jedi councils on them.. If anybody knows any please tell me. Cause I can't really think of any. I'd prefer some low level planets at important locations but I guess thats to much to ask, just three planets that could have Jedi on them would be great.

Naboo would provide a nice, meditative background. Or perhaps Bothuwi. Unexpected, a place where the Council could find out what's going on around them, etc. I think you should just make one up. Oh, duh. Myrkyr. Or Katarr.

Originally posted by Fishy
And what do you people think of the possibility that Revan created HK before he found the Star Forge, or that he found the Star Forge before the Mandelorian war was over? Because I'm not quite sure on how everything went with the Star Forge... Which do you think is the most likely thing?

I'd say he created HK towards the end of the Mandalorian Wars as an experimental project. And he and Malak likely had clues as to the location of the Star Forge around the Mandalorian conflict's end, but I doubt they knew its precise location until sometime after.

Originally posted by Fishy
Also, (Can't edit anymore) Does Vandar talk like Yoda?

Nope. He's a well-spoken little frog.

By the way, I'll get to those fights you mailed me about soon. Been caught up.

Cool thanks...

Thx for those names and the planets... Those are going to be great, i'm just not so sure on Naboo... I don't want the SW universe to become to small but I can find something else probably.

I was referring to the environment. I myself don't completely agree with the idea of the Council on Naboo, but whatever. Like I said. You can just make one up. This is Star Wars, bud. Anything goes.

Yeah okay, but thinking of planets is harder then thinking of people... You need so much more then just a name.

This is the rough sketch to Revans real face, expect it to be even cooler in the final version!

Originally posted by Fishy
Okay people I have a shit load of questions, and I can appreciate every answer or idea you have.

First of all I need names for 12 Jedi Council members. Atris, Vrook, Vandar, Zhar you know the famous guys are all in it, but I need more. So far I have Caligo and Erus.. But I need more names.

Also I really need a name for the Exile, and I want to know if I could put him in the council or not. I have my doubts about it, but I think I will.

Also I need three more planets besides Dantooine and Coruscant that could have Jedi councils on them.. If anybody knows any please tell me. Cause I can't really think of any. I'd prefer some low level planets at important locations but I guess thats to much to ask, just three planets that could have Jedi on them would be great.

And what do you people think of the possibility that Revan created HK before he found the Star Forge, or that he found the Star Forge before the Mandelorian war was over? Because I'm not quite sure on how everything went with the Star Forge... Which do you think is the most likely thing?

if you need some names for the council here are just 3 names i tend to use in any RPG i play Loki, Azreal, and Lazarus.

also for a council what about one on an asteroid in an asteroid field? like the one yoda was on at the end of EP3 and there was a council on Almas the planet where Darth Rivan not revan made a base and well there's information on wikipedia and other sources.

i think that revan could have created HK before he found the starforge so i wouldn't complain. if you make revan male i think that fits well but i also think that if Revan were a female it'd be cooler just throw somethin out of the ordinary by haveing a chick be powerful and cunning and clever.

Yeah a female would be cool, but I already made him a male and I won't rewrite the entire damn story just to change his sex. It will be a lot more work then simply replacing him into her and he into she... That would mean 79 pages of crap to go through.. Not going to happen.

well whatever like i said being a male fits him better.

I think it'd be interesting either way...but personally I'd have Revan be one gender and exile the other....just cause...I don't even know if you were planning on covering the exile as well

I have too, its a pretty important part in Revan his life, and I thought about making the Exile female, but that will make the relationship with Atris harder unless of course I make them both gay, which I could do of course... Okay, thats fixed.. Exile is female.. Still don't have a name for her though

Im intreseted, give me the basic idea.

Basic idea of what? The story.

Well okay,

Revan is a Jedi
Mandelorian wars start
Jedi don't want to help the Republic
Revan does
Revan leaves Jedi, Revan joins war.
Jedi don't like Revan anymore
Revan turns Dark because of war
Revan goes out to hunt Jedi
Revan gets captured by Jedi
Kotor happens
Don't know yet.

Another question, what kind of weapon did Yussanis have, his blade is in Kotor I. Does anybody remember how the piece of shit looks?

Originally posted by Fishy
Another question, what kind of weapon did Yussanis have, his blade is in Kotor I. Does anybody remember how the piece of shit looks?

Hmm...I think it was a double-bladed Vibroblade.

Are you writing about Revan's WHOLE LIFE? Including after KOTOR which you can make up?

I'm still working on the Mandelorian wars... Which is going to be the most important stuff, I don't know how i'm going to do the Kotor time though... Or if i'm even going to do it. Once I figure all of that out I might start writing shit after Kotor, but it will be small... Because well we don't know anything about what happened after Kotor.