A story about Revan, and some questions.

soooo how's it coming?

56 pages, 16 chapters... Going nicely..

But I still have to proof read it once, if not a million times because i'm sure a lot of it makes no sense at all. I type faster then I can think sometimes, and othe times I can think faster then I can type.

I can help you create the post-KOTOR stuff, but it's your call.

Originally posted by Fishy
I thought about making the Exile female, but that will make the relationship with Atris harder unless of course I make them both gay, which I could do of course... Okay, thats fixed.. Exile is female.. Still don't have a name for her though

Not that I have anything against lesbians, but Atris saw the Exile as a Champion, not a lover in my opinion. She was a master and the Exile was one of her many pupils. The Exile went to war with Revan, which totally went agaisnt everything Atris and most of what his/her teachers (including the masters you have to find in KOTOR II) had taught him/her. Thus making Atris the cabby B**ch she is the game.

As for a female name for the Exile. Ummm.... Serrica, Falcara, Selerendra, Illiarin, Maxine, Erianna, Shakara, Saphira, Jorine, Aladry, Deltroy Tajera...

Those are just some from the top of my head. I can think of more, just PM. These are more normal names (Qui'gon to me is an odd name, for example).

Also, is this a short story? Because 56 pages and 16 chapters would make 3.5 pages per chapter... which makes really short chapters.

I don't know how i'm going to make the relationship between Atris and the Exile, but there has to be something between the two. And Atris might have seen the Exile as a champion but both Vrook and Vandar don't think of him like that, probably for a reason. So I don't think the Exile was all that special, whatever the case the two will get some kind of relationship but if its really love, I don't know. And I don't care about it either, at least not yet.

And yes the chapters are still all short, but what i'm writing is mostly the basic outline, a lot of things will be added and made bigger, describing more. I just need the basics before I start writing the rest. Besides I think of most of this crap while i'm writing. Including the name of the Exile. So its kinda hard to make chapters bigger, because I have no idea on what to write about that anymore and just want to jump to the next chapter.

Once i've gotten to the end of the Pre-Kotor stuff, i'll start making it all bigger and better.

Ah, you confused me for a sec, but now I see. ✅ Different style. Nice.

When you feel its good enough, I'd like to see it (along with whoever else has asked). Very curious, I am. Never really got into reading any other fan fiction but my own. So good luck.

Originally posted by Fishy
56 pages, 16 chapters... Going nicely..

But I still have to proof read it once, if not a million times because i'm sure a lot of it makes no sense at all. I type faster then I can think sometimes, and othe times I can think faster then I can type.

I can help you edit it Fishy, just PM me when/if you want me to start editing and I will give you my e-mail so you can e-mail the story to me. If you want me to do anything else, just ask

Thanks Darkstar, i'll keep that in mind, but I'm going to continue writing first because I want it all to be finished before I start editing. Otherwise some things might not make sense, because its contradicted later in the book.

It seems like everyone is writing a Revan fanfic now of days...I mean I have written several.

Have you written one about his entire live?

Originally posted by Fishy
Have you written one about his entire live?

I am writing a three part series that starts at the begining of the Mandalorian Wars and goes all the way through KOTOR 2. If KOTOR 3 ever comes out I suppose I will add a fourth part.

Of course it is unfinished.

Originally posted by Veneficus
Of course it is unfinished.

lol, welcome to my world.

That always happens...

Fishy, I believe you were expecting a 'Revan vs. Kavar' from me. or is it already done. . . ?

No still waiting

You'll have it soon then. Thursday, perhaps. Right now I'm up to my eyeballs in work.

Originally posted by Darth Faunus
You'll have it soon then. Thursday, perhaps. Right now I'm up to my eyeballs in work.

Hey don't drown yourself with work for me, take your time..

how soon until we can read some of your work?

Originally posted by nuscande
how soon until we can read some of your work?

After I start proof reading, which might take some time.. Or as soon as I feel like posting it.

I can't believe you found the motivation and the time to do all that. I haven't written anything more than a page or two in years.