My poems

Started by ShapedByWords22 pages

@Unknown Girl

Suki desu, Unknown Girl-chan

Transformed love
Came from nowhere
Whispered lightly
Love so real

The love so real
My soul had wandered
All these years
I felt so lonely

My heart was aching
Broke into peices
Shattered everywhere
Only to be found
And put back together

I like this one!!

thank u (gives u kiss)

Originally posted by Unknown Girl
Transformed love
Came from nowhere
Whispered lightly
Love so real

The love so real
My soul had wandered
All these years
I felt so lonely

My heart was aching
Broke into peices
Shattered everywhere
Only to be found
And put back together


aww cute 😊

Originally posted by Unknown Girl
thank u (gives u kiss)
hm. ha... show me how that's done, Girl.

Originally posted by Unknown Girl
thank u (gives u kiss)
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
hm. ha... show me how that's done, Girl.

Ok, to clear up some Bulls#$t before it gets too far gone, i hit the wrong fking quote, meant to hit the quick quote under the poem, and my post shoulda read like thus:

My heart was aching
Broke into peices
Shattered everywhere
Only to be found
And put back together

hm. ha... show me how it's done.

sorry for the confusion, i hate this damn computer i amon right now... not the first thing it has fked up lately.

good work! Much better than mine i should think.

ty 🙂

Hopeless
Permanent tears
On a ashen face
A star falls
Into the palm
Of a hopeful child
And it burns
Through his skin
I watch as he screams
Into the black hopeless night

oops i didn't mean to post that here i thought i still was on mine. 😕 😮 😮

Sok

I never asked for anything
no matter how much I wanted it
No matter how bad I needed it
I never asked for it.

I always kept to myself
I didn't want to attract attention
And then you came and had
the audacity to give what
I dont want to mention.

What you said made me cry
What you said made me think
What you said made me wonder
Is this boat gonna sink?

Nobody ever gave it to me
so I'm going to ask you why.
Why did you give me your love
and not say goodbye?

I never asked for anything
and yet you still gave it.
I'll still never ask for anything
but I will make a demand
Here goes a ring
put it on your hand.

lovely!

THAT is a great poem... subtle, and direct. very cool!

😄 thank u both

yeah well, i'm still not too happy bout you not submitting one to the contest disgust

Many things
Both good and bad
Make me happy
or make me sad
For people talking
behind my back
I won't cut you
any slack
but for the one
I truly love
is from the heavens above
I hope you find my words
acceptable to heed
for he is all I ever need

good. both the poem, and the poem's point.