My poems

Are we friends
or are we not
You told me once
but i forgot
Of all the friends i've ever met
You're the one i won't forget
And if i die before you do
I'll go to heaven and wait for you.

God in heaven
God above
Please prtect the one i love
Sent with a smile
Sealed with a kiss
I love my friend who is reading this

Those are pretty good 🙂 Are you new at writing poetry, or have you been at it for a while?

i am new here so i will have to get used to writing poetry but thanks for the comment

If dreams were dreams
And dreams came true
I woulnd't be here
I'd be there with you
If distance is one thing
That keeps us apart
Always reemeber you'll
Remain in my heart

A lil bird told me you were here. Sorry I can't stay. I just wanted you to know that I like you stuff.

THANK U

hmm ur pretty good

I ain't that good i don't write much poetry

Good stuff here, they sound like limericks... well, not quite, but the same rhythm. Well done.

Anything abit longer? enjoy the short stuff, but a nice long poem once in a while is great! Keep it up. 🙂

Originally posted by Unknown Girl
THANK U

U know i think i will stop with the poems i can't do this and i am to emotional to carry this on.

In my experience it's always best to have something you can do as a release... writing poetry has got to be better than doing something silly, or dangerous. Please carry on 🙁

do u think i should?

Definitely, if you have the inclination. I'd like to see more, we always welcome new poets 😄

thanks i'll think about it i am having a hard time ATM

I know it's hard to deal with but I always found I could write really well when I was emotionally drained. It helped me to put things into perspective. I haven't written anything in ages, well nothing good anyway, because my life is ok right now. It's weird...

yeah only thing is i ain't good at writing poetry at all.

I suggest you leave the judgement up to our lovely bunch of poets 😂 Just do your thing, write some more and we'll let you know 😉