My poems

Started by DreamingWarrior22 pages

Yeah.... wtf is going on yo?

Originally posted by ShapedByWords
I guess I should say goodbye to all of you.

Goodbye.

and to Stacey...

I love you..today, tomorrow, forever and after....still

oh wait! let me count how many times that's been now *counts fingers*
Originally posted by Coldfire
WHA?!?!

I'm so confuzzled 😕

hmm...not hard to do babe! 😛
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
Yeah.... wtf is going on yo?
it's like watching daytime soap! or a very bad spanish novella...your choice

a bad spanish soap is more like it! 😂

Originally posted by Fëanor
oh wait! let me count how many times that's been now *counts fingers* hmm...not hard to do babe! 😛 it's like watching daytime soap! or a very bad spanish novella...your choice

lol 😛
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
a bad spanish soap is more like it! 😂

You got that right 😂

My soul is full of anguish
The pain has become unreal
Just wish that I could end it
I cannot survive the way I feel.

Why don't you take
A long sharp knife,
Stab it thru my heart...
And quickly end my life?

Life is not worth living
Without you by my side.
There would be no more secrets
That you would have to hide.

Death would be a comfort
The horrible pain would end
The angels would be waiting
To help me round the bend.

tht was realy good...keep it up

thanks

nice yo. hrmmmm hopefully NOT what you are really feelin...

Originally posted by Unknown Girl
My soul is full of anguish
The pain has become unreal
Just wish that I could end it
I cannot survive the way I feel.

Why don't you take
A long sharp knife,
Stab it thru my heart...
And quickly end my life?

Life is not worth living
Without you by my side.
There would be no more secrets
That you would have to hide.

Death would be a comfort
The horrible pain would end
The angels would be waiting
To help me round the bend.


Yikes hope you're ok hug It's really good btw 🙂

i'm fine thanks 🙂

good. 😄

I'm trying to figure out
what love is supposed to be about
In the beginning you're always so nice
But in the end, you're as cold as Ice

In the end, when you look in their eye's
That's when you realize all their lies
In the beginning you would never think
That they could be so mean in a simple blink

I told you once
I told you twice
that when you love you pay the price
You feel so empty
Cold and blue
So stressed out
And so confused

The one who made you so happy and glad
Is the same one who is making you sad and mad
When one tries to talk about wanting them to stay
The other just turns and walks away

When you smile
For a little while
you realize it's fake
You're just trying to hide your heartache
After you realize that love was a mistake

Once you realize they're gone
you automatically ask yourself what you did wrong
Your heart starts going insane
From all their pain
You ask yourself how you're gonna stay sane

Your heart keeps tearing
Because, you're the only one caring
You try not to care
So you try to glare
You try to get away,
and you try to convince yourself that you'll be okay.

that is a cool poem girl. very cool. much display of a deep wound on your heart..... (it is not always so, but it does take time to find a good love to be with... when you find em, hold on tight!)

i think i did but i blew it i guess

I have two problems,
Only two;
One is depression, the other is you.
Or maybe my problem equals one;
But one or two, it weighs a ton.

So all in all, it's pretty bad;
All in all, it's kind of sad
To choose a road that I must take,
To make a decision, that has no faint.

I think I'll stay, and live miserably;
I think I'll pay, and keep living.

Originally posted by Unknown Girl
I'm trying to figure out
what love is supposed to be about
In the beginning you're always so nice
But in the end, you're as cold as Ice

In the end, when you look in their eye's
That's when you realize all their lies
In the beginning you would never think
That they could be so mean in a simple blink

I told you once
I told you twice
that when you love you pay the price
You feel so empty
Cold and blue
So stressed out
And so confused

The one who made you so happy and glad
Is the same one who is making you sad and mad
When one tries to talk about wanting them to stay
The other just turns and walks away

When you smile
For a little while
you realize it's fake
You're just trying to hide your heartache
After you realize that love was a mistake

Once you realize they're gone
you automatically ask yourself what you did wrong
Your heart starts going insane
From all their pain
You ask yourself how you're gonna stay sane

Your heart keeps tearing
Because, you're the only one caring
You try not to care
So you try to glare
You try to get away,
and you try to convince yourself that you'll be okay.


awww 🙁
Originally posted by Unknown Girl
i think i did but i blew it i guess

That sucks hug

Originally posted by Unknown Girl
i think i did but i blew it i guess
no, just a young love that is come and gone.... you shall see what i mean.
Originally posted by Unknown Girl
I have two problems,
Only two;
One is depression, the other is you.
Or maybe my problem equals one;
But one or two, it weighs a ton.

So all in all, it's pretty bad;
All in all, it's kind of sad
To choose a road that I must take,
To make a decision, that has no faint.

I think I'll stay, and live miserably;
I think I'll pay, and keep living.

keeping with the living, good choice. do one thing though hon, and that is go forth! Live, don't just survive. you have much ahead of you! (look at me im talkin like i am 30...... jeez.... ) and smile yo! you got all us here backin ya up! hahahha!

Originally posted by Coldfire
awww 🙁

That sucks hug

hug thank u

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
no, just a young love that is come and gone.... you shall see what i mean. keeping with the living, good choice. do one thing though hon, and that is go forth! Live, don't just survive. you have much ahead of you! (look at me im talkin like i am 30...... jeez.... ) and smile yo! you got all us here backin ya up! hahahha!

hug thank u

Originally posted by Unknown Girl
hug thank u
you're very welcome yo. hug a heck, c'mere guys! group 😂 now smile for us, and have a great day! and eat candy!!!!! droolio ahhhh cannnndddyyy.... LOL!