HEY i decided to write my version of the 7th book READ AND REVIEW!

here is my version of the 7th book i dont know what to call it and its only the first chapter PLZ READ AND REVIEW !

Letters and Numbers

Harry awoke with aloud bang and a flash of light, it was raining outside his bedroom in the little suburban home on Privet Dr. Raining actually wasn’t word to describe it, poring would be acceptable. The loud pat of the rain hitting the home and trees could have kept Harry awake on one of his more “sleepless” nights but he was but was very tired and fell back into his warm bed. The events that unfolded towards end of his six year were catastrophic. Dumbledore had died and there was no reversing the impact that had on the wizarding world. Dumbledore was the most intelligent and talented wizard Harry knew, or rather know. The first part of his vacation, Harry spent wondering why Dumbledore let some ass get the best of him. It was true that dumbledore was not in his best state when they returned to the school, but he knew dumbledore could have taken them all down. Those events on that night bothered him physically and emotionally. Harry was in despair, dumbledore dead, spending some time with the Dursleys SUCKED, and he and Ginny broke up several weeks after end of term. It was July 27, about a week after his apparition test which he passed, and four days before his birthday. Harry was coming “of age” and he was a little pacified by this. Harry soon fell back into a deep sleep.

He awoke again but it was now morning and it was still raining. He could not escape the dursleys today, for he had to stay inside. He was hungry and went down to the kitchen to grab a bite to eat.
Aunt Petunia had given up on there diet for Dudley was only getting worse with sneaking things into his bedroom. Eggs and bacon were left for Harry though fairly burnt ones at that. Uncle Vernon and Dudley were gone shopping for his boundless supplies for school.
Harry was eating his breakfast and reading the muggle “news” paper which you could say it was like a muggle daily prophet. Aunt Petunia entered the kitchen and gave a sour look and said ‘Oh, its YOU”
“Yeah it’s only me” Harry responded bitterly (extremely annoyed by this)
“Listen” he began “Aunt Petunia, we need to leave the past behind us”
He had a sense of maturity which could probably be rooted to his mother.
“I’m going to be leaving soon an I most likely am not going to come back” he continued “ and I want to have as much as family as I can every where I can and I ask you to please stop loathing me and my parents and my friends”
Aunt Petunia had a shocked and startled look on he face but began
“U-uh, s-sure Harry”
“Thanks” he said before departing to his bedroom

He entered his bedroom felling shocked about the thing he just did, he just repaired a relationship with his Aunt that was broken for 16 years.
Immediately he notice pig was hooting and hovering near his bedroom ceiling and his beautiful snowy owl hedwig. He also saw several letters on his bed and with pig there he knew his best mate Ron had written him. He picked up the first letter which was written from Ron, he wrote:
Harry,
Hey mate how is your summer we have been traveling around and im currently in china, don’t worry I sent pig when I was at the burrow so just send him there bill and fluer and watching the house.
They will be getting married a week before term and your invited to the celebration at the burrow although I can’t come get you till then so ill send you more letters when I get in the area.
Your mate,
Ron

Harry was defiantly pleased by this letter from Ron.
He picked up the next one and examined it; it was only the regular letter from hogwarts which explained the schools condition. Harry was surprised that they were re-opening it.
The next letter was from hermione Harry opened it eagerly to read…

Harry,
HI! Harry how is your summer, mine is fine ive spent a lot in the muggle library near my home and studied the geography on earth. Very interesting.
My parents said you could come stay with us in the guest bedroom!, only if you would like of course. I will come to get you on the 30th at 6:00 pm
I can’t wait till the wedding and next term McGonnagle is the new headmistress.
I have attached a daily prophet that you will find amazing.
Please send a return letter
Love,
Hermione

Harry was extremely happy to hear this; He would be spending time at hermione’s house!
He quickly took out a piece of parchment ant wrote:

Hermione,
My summer is ok
I would love to come to your house
Thanks,
Harry

He gave pig the letter and a treat and told him to give it to hermione and then go t the burrow.
There were two more letters on his bed
One from hogwarts and one mysterious one
He opened the mysterious first it said:

Harry,
I wait for you in room not known
It hard to get here so help ill loan
The clue I left in room that gives
I still wait in a room that lives
Harry go back to hogwarts
And show hermione this although I know you will
ARES

Harry was so confused by this letter that he stared at it for a while until he finally notice the last letter on his bed and he opened it.

Mr. Potter
You will be joining us at hogwarts
You will need one last thing before you leave
Mr.weasly and Miss Granger may come to
I will speak to you in school
Ares is waiting
Headmistress McGonagal
Harry was in a state of confusion
He did not understand anything in those two letters, but as always hermoine would so he would just have to wait.

The next few days went on with nothing more interesting, than the 27th. Finally the 30th came, Harry couldn’t wait till 6:00. He rushed through dinner and sat on his bed waiting.
CRACK
Hermione appeared

Its good so far, I am wondering who ARES is and I am also wondering if that room that was mentioned was the room of requirements (sp?).So far its really good. I just think you might need to make it longer, chapters are usually 10 pages long or more. But keep up the good work. I hope you write more to the story cause I am interested to find out what happens 😄

Its pretty good, but this should be in the HP Fiction.

it was SO boring!!!!
fell asleep halfway through, and barely managed to finish it after a long time, you need a break for every line to not die of being bored!!

the truth is; you will never ever become an author, and i can't really see why you wrote a so long text, unless you have totally lack of other stuff to do....

Come on sasee, its not the worst thing I have read, and it is intriguing.

ares99: Please continue, perhaps few tips that would make it easy for the readers:

-Wen you characters read write letters put the text in italic

Well, an actual TITLE would be nice...

Harry Potter and the Letters of Confusion

Originally posted by The Ones
Harry Potter and the Letters of Confusion

sorry, it is just not interesting to me.
if a fan fiction HP story shell be good, there have to be a lot of action, fighting and duelling, because people like ares99 just describe to boring, and usually just write beginnings with nothing interesting in.

well, fighting and action from the beging will look like " The Return of RAMBO", and you don't do that in the first chapter.Do you?

hey sorry the begining is almost always boring in any book, the climax of the story is the end and sorry that i had harry get alot of letters remember the time harry is currently is dangerous and harry really info, plus the one "mysterios" letter was supposed to be confusing
and this isnt just some constant battle that would just be dumb
also im not JK rowling nor any other author nor do i really aspire to be one its just for fun
But i do apreciate the review and do hope that the people who enjoy the story stick with it for it " will" get intresting

Originally posted by sasee tiin
sorry, it is just not interesting to me.
if a fan fiction HP story shell be good, there have to be a lot of action, fighting and duelling, because people like ares99 just describe to boring, and usually just write beginnings with nothing interesting in.

Keep posting please. and this should be in the HP Fiction I think.?

Pretty good! 👆

yah sorry im pretty new to these forums so i screwed up i should have another post by 2marrow

Originally posted by sasee tiin
it was SO boring!!!!
fell asleep halfway through, and barely managed to finish it after a long time, you need a break for every line to not die of being bored!!

the truth is; you will never ever become an author, and i can't really see why you wrote a so long text, unless you have totally lack of other stuff to do....

Dont be so rude.

It's 2:30am and Harry is still awake. Blood gushes out of his scar from pain... something terrible is happening.

He looks around and observes his surroundings. He must be somewhere dark, as he cannot see a damned thing. Nope. Not a thing.

He shouts into the void, "lumios Or whatever!" no wand lights his way. He tries to lift his arms, but they either don't respond, or are so tightly bound they can't be moved. The same goes for the rest of his body.

Worry suddenly strikes harry. He realizes there is nothing he can possibly do to free himself, and it's very likely that if he has somehow found himself in this situation, nobody is coming to help. It is just him, and his toughts, for however long it takes for somebody to visit.

*drip*

What was that?

*drip*

crap...

The End.

Originally posted by Insomnia
It's 2:30am and Harry is still awake. Blood gushes out of his scar from pain... something terrible is happening.

He looks around and observes his surroundings. He must be somewhere dark, as he cannot see a damned thing. Nope. Not a thing.

He shouts into the void, "lumios Or whatever!" no wand lights his way. He tries to lift his arms, but they either don't respond, or are so tightly bound they can't be moved. The same goes for the rest of his body.

Worry suddenly strikes harry. He realizes there is nothing he can possibly do to free himself, and it's very likely that if he has somehow found himself in this situation, nobody is coming to help. It is just him, and his toughts, for however long it takes for somebody to visit.

*drip*

What was that?

*drip*

crap...

The End.

However funny, I dont thinks its polite to do that in ares's thread. He/She is trying to write a FanFic. Please dont ruin it.

Btw, if Harry was of age and passed his apperating test. I would think he could of apperated out of that situation.

Don't you have to walk a few steps?

Originally posted by Unicor777
well, fighting and action from the beging will look like " The Return of RAMBO", and you don't do that in the first chapter.Do you?

bur ares99 hasn't wrote any action at all, neither any fighting!!
of course i know that the first chapter not is supposed to contain those things, but look at it, very few people write entire books at a forum, you rather write short stories, and therefore there have to be action from the beginning!