omg....guys this next poem is so corney. I made it about a year ago but i guess I'll post it anyway.
Sounds
i lie in my bed listening to sounds
i hear a basketball pounding the ground
i can hear the cars flying by
and my little cousin sounds like she's going to cry
i here kids laughing, screaming, and singing
while my sister picks up the phone 'cause it's ringing
all these sounds i here almost every day
i just sit and listen to what they have to say
Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
omg....guys this next poem is so corney. I made it about a year ago but i guess I'll post it anyway.Sounds
i lie in my bed listening to sounds
i hear a basketball pounding the ground
i can hear the cars flying by
and my little cousin sounds like she's going to cry
i here kids laughing, screaming, and singing
while my sister picks up the phone 'cause it's ringing
all these sounds i here almost every day
i just sit and listen to what they have to say
Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412corny? nahhh.... just you describing your environment. a cool thing to do. good poetic exercise.
omg....guys this next poem is so corney. I made it about a year ago but i guess I'll post it anyway.Sounds
i lie in my bed listening to sounds
i hear a basketball pounding the ground
i can hear the cars flying by
and my little cousin sounds like she's going to cry
i here kids laughing, screaming, and singing
while my sister picks up the phone 'cause it's ringing
all these sounds i here almost every day
i just sit and listen to what they have to say
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
corny? nahhh.... just you describing your environment. a cool thing to do. good poetic exercise.
thanks, this poem is acaually one of the ones that got me started about a year ago. i didn't relize i liked writing poems untill i just sat down and did an assignment for school. next thing you know i have like 20 poems done in like 30 min, since then i stared putting words and feeling into rhymes and well there you have it.
hey guys here is my next poem.
my grandmother never lets us young people go
she said,''Back in our day things were never done that way
you did that back then,
people would consider that a sin
she asked me is that how ya'll dress
is that how you really try to impress
back in our day there was know getting a tattoo
we had so much better things to do
she asked me, whatever happened to English
why does it always seem you young people speak anther language
she told me when she was young there was never a word date
you were married at age 16, that was the right rate
yea my grandma says a lot of things
about how all we care about is million dollar rings
i just listen to her, laugh and then i think about time
because i know maybe one day these words will be mine.
the other poem i did was about my dads mom. This poem is about my other grandmother (my moms mother)Just so you guys don't get confused....
anyway what do you think 🙂
Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412hahaha sounds like most elderly folks i know. 😆 neat.
hey guys here is my next poem.my grandmother never lets us young people go
she said,''Back in our day things were never done that way
you did that back then,
people would consider that a sin
she asked me is that how ya'll dress
is that how you really try to impress
back in our day there was know getting a tattoo
we had so much better things to do
she asked me, whatever happened to English
why does it always seem you young people speak anther language
she told me when she was young there was never a word date
you were married at age 16, that was the right rate
yea my grandma says a lot of things
about how all we care about is million dollar rings
i just listen to her, laugh and then i think about time
because i know maybe one day these words will be mine.the other poem i did was about my dads mom. This poem is about my other grandmother (my moms mother)Just so you guys don't get confused....
anyway what do you think 🙂
WHY
why do people ask why
why do people always have to lie
why in the world is there always crime
and why when it happens, people are at the wrong place at the wrong time
why when it's time to forgive people wait
and when they want to forgive they find out it's to late
why do some men treat women like trash
why do some women just do it for cash
why is one of the richest country's the united states
but still we can't even but food on some peoples plates
i just don't know how many more wars i can take
i don't know how many more bad comments people are going to make
why do some people think killing is for fun
why do some people think when it comes to the point of living, there is none
why do some people play life as a game
and every day the game is played the same
a change has to come, we have to take a chance
even if that means taking a second glance
Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412heh... yeah, well.... the parental units say, you gotta do, until you move out.
ha...sorry for the long wait...got grounded. i guess i'm not that good and sweet as people think...lol..jp. naw, i just didn't clean my room so i got in trouble. i still don't see the point of cleaning it when i just know i'm going to screw it back up anyway...lol. well here is the next poem
Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412ask meself the same question..... all I get in return is "wait" ..... the time shall come.... and we may fight hand in hand when it does. good stuff yo, keep outta trouble! 😆 c ya.
WHY
why do people ask why
why do people always have to lie
why in the world is there always crime
and why when it happens, people are at the wrong place at the wrong time
why when it's time to forgive people wait
and when they want to forgive they find out it's to late
why do some men treat women like trash
why do some women just do it for cash
why is one of the richest country's the united states
but still we can't even but food on some peoples plates
i just don't know how many more wars i can take
i don't know how many more bad comments people are going to make
why do some people think killing is for fun
why do some people think when it comes to the point of living, there is none
why do some people play life as a game
and every day the game is played the same
a change has to come, we have to take a chance
even if that means taking a second glance
Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412no, TOMORROW is. 😂 it's only the 30th today. hahaha but, tomorrow.... heh heh heh devil
thank ya much....and don't worry...I'm staying out of trouble, at least trying to....lol. But today is mischief night so that means it's time for some real fun....mwaahaahahaha(evil laugh)
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