My Poetry

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lol...yea for you it is but today was mischeif night for us. I live on the east coast of the united states so we might get things earlier than you do. In a way it kinda sucks because i got shaving cream all in my mouth and in my hair but oh well...lol... the peaple who got me....they will pay.....they will pay big time
sly

I'll try for more poems tomorrow
🙂

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
lol...yea for you it is but today was mischeif night for us. I live on the east coast of the united states so we might get things earlier than you do. In a way it kinda sucks because i got shaving cream all in my mouth and in my hair but oh well...lol... the peaple who got me....they will pay.....they will pay big time
sly

I'll try for more poems tomorrow
🙂

😆 hahahahah sorry yo. hahah yeah, well yeah yeah, i live only one time zone from ya, so it is like 8 here, 9 where you are. so shaddup 😂 heh cool. see ya! and be safe yo 😉

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
lol...yea for you it is but today was mischeif night for us. I live on the east coast of the united states so we might get things earlier than you do. In a way it kinda sucks because i got shaving cream all in my mouth and in my hair but oh well...lol... the peaple who got me....they will pay.....they will pay big time
sly

I'll try for more poems tomorrow
🙂


haha niiiiiice 😛

sorry, been really busey. trin to make time but it's been realy hard. i'll try either later or tommorow

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
sorry, been really busey. trin to make time but it's been realy hard. i'll try either later or tommorow
no, now!!!! 😂 ok. take it easy yo.

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
sorry, been really busey. trin to make time but it's been realy hard. i'll try either later or tommorow

take all the time you need 😊 I'm not exactly spilling out the poems either haha 😛

here is another poem that i wrote about a week ago. i wrote it because we lost a game to a town called riverside. But the good thing is that we recovered and won a game on Tues. Now were the division champions and we entered the playoffs...so...yay...lol
but anyway to get back on the topic, here is the poem

The Word DEFEAT

it's not a word that wants to come out of a persons mouth
it's one word that some people might even fear to hear
when some people look at the word, they might see a loss, a failure, a loser
they say the better team always wins, they always defeat
but is that always true
not every team wins
not every team loses
i don't see a defeat as the worst play or the worst team
sometimes the better team loses
sometimes the worst team wins
but sometimes the word defeat
the word that some people think mean a loser,a failure, a loss
that word can only sometimes make you stronger

Yay! Playoffs! Go Lee! 😄 glad for ya hon! and truly enough, defeat can spur you on more than a victory... if you use it right.

A wise man once said, :" Hannibal, you know how to win a victory, but you don't know how to USE it!"

😄 same with not winning, which you have learned, and then to go win right afterwards... haha awesome.

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
Yay! Playoffs! Go Lee! 😄 glad for ya hon! and truly enough, defeat can spur you on more than a victory... if you use it right.

A wise man once said, :" Hannibal, you know how to win a victory, but you don't know how to USE it!"

😄 same with not winning, which you have learned, and then to go win right afterwards... haha awesome.

aww......thank ya much. 🙂

more poems comin at ya on mon or tues. can't post because i have a game and homecoming 😛 🙂

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
aww......thank ya much. 🙂

more poems comin at ya on mon or tues. can't post because i have a game and homecoming 😛 🙂

yay and cool. 😄

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
here is another poem that i wrote about a week ago. i wrote it because we lost a game to a town called riverside. But the good thing is that we recovered and won a game on Tues. Now were the division champions and we entered the playoffs...so...yay...lol
but anyway to get back on the topic, here is the poem

The Word DEFEAT

it's not a word that wants to come out of a persons mouth
it's one word that some people might even fear to hear
when some people look at the word, they might see a loss, a failure, a loser
they say the better team always wins, they always defeat
but is that always true
not every team wins
not every team loses
i don't see a defeat as the worst play or the worst team
sometimes the better team loses
sometimes the worst team wins
but sometimes the word defeat
the word that some people think mean a loser,a failure, a loss
that word can only sometimes make you stronger


That's awesome! 😄

And your poem is so true ✅ 😊

Originally posted by Coldfire
That's awesome! 😄

And your poem is so true ✅ 😊

thanks coldfire 🙂

and i know i promised a poem tonight but i left my poetery book at sckool(stupid me...lol) but anyway there will definitly be some t/m.

😂

Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
thanks coldfire 🙂

and i know i promised a poem tonight but i left my poetery book at sckool(stupid me...lol) but anyway there will definitly be some t/m.


I do that all the time, so don't worry about it!! 😛 😂

Originally posted by Coldfire
I do that all the time, so don't worry about it!! 😛 😂
yes she does... 😂 😛

well here is another poem from yours truly...lol

Hang on to me

I'm calling for your name, can't you hear me out
am i not yelling loud enough
do want to hear me shout
I'm reaching for your hand
please grab it and hold on tight
hold on to it as long as you can, with all your might
your slipping away, please don't let go
I'm screaming cause i see your shame
I'm screaming cause i feel your pain
please don't give up on me now
you can make it through
I've gone through some tough times just like you too
so please just please, hang on to me
the dark and hard times will go away
then soon very soon you'll be able to see
just continue to hang on to me

notworthy nice!!!!

(how goes soccer?)

Nice job 😄

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
notworthy nice!!!!

(how goes soccer?)

Originally posted by Coldfire
Nice job 😄

thank ya much.

and soccer is going pretty well. i'm not playing in the play offs though since it's my first year in high school but it's all good. there is only three freashmen that play in the play offs and there really good but i play for anther team too and we just one a game last week so...yay..lol.

well cool 😄