^_^ Keep trying. You'll get it eventually. My tip is on hair: just because it's spiky doesn't mean it has to be unnatural. your first one's hair looks like a jester's hat attached to regular (though close to the head) hair lol! try to even it and don't let it go two different ways so unsmoothly. As for your second one, pretty good, but the big, pink bang hanging down isn't natural either. hair isn't flat, no matter what you do on the bottom, so try putting slight breaks in hair and splitting some ends so it doesn't look so unnaturally flat. As for the pink board (no offense, just trying to help!) try to curve it slightly to the right so it curls nearer to her natural color of hair. This gives it a more together look. Third, no comment..fourth, just look at some proportions for the body and follow my tips on hair, and you'll be getting some of the biggest parts of anime! ^_^ good luck with drawing anime!!