The unwanted girl

Started by danagrint5 pages

very true

yeah, you guys are right🙂

so you read this too? how'd you like it? i think it is well done, and i want to see more.

I like it! I want more!!!!!!!

the reader is always right.....
you have two people reading this....and we are dying......

*choking* need ... more

wonder who voted needs more work...

I didn't I voted "It was absoulutly fantastic"

who posted that? show yourself. *looks everywhere* this does not need work. this is perfect!

lol, thanx🙂 but you cant expect everyone to like my story!!! yah so happy more people are reading🙂 i will try and post more as soon as i can🙂

okie dokie, i will be waiting

I'm reading your story too and i really like it! keep up the good work!

awww thanks, im touched🙂

yay you gots another reader

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Hilary woke up, grumbling to herself as she could not recall herself putting her alarm on, as she reached out to her cellphone, she realized that it was not her alarm. She sat up in bed her uncombed hair hanging all over her face, her eyes adjusting to the light, she turned her head and to her surprise saw Liola frantically banging on the window, Hilary was so confused, she got up and tried opening the window, it was broken. She mouthed that the window was broken to Liola.

Liola started mumbling to herself, she was so stupid she thought to herself. ”Of course my mum would not do that”, she whispered, and for a second she thought everything was going to be all right. But she realized her mum was going to be asking why was she on a ladder looking into her window. Liola had a feeling that this day was going to be long and hard.

Hilary walked into the kitchen grumpy and tired, she switched on the expresso machine and waited, remembering what had happened last night. Liola walked into the kitchen, and plastered a smile on her face “morning mum”, she said, in a fake cherry voice.
“Morning”, said Hilary, not making any effort to be nice. Liola sighed she was right this is going to be a long day she thought to herself. She found her cereal in the cupboard and happily munched on it. “Was it true?” Hilary asked liola, without making any eye contact to her.
“What, was it true?” asked liola, even though she already knew the answer.
“About what happened last night, the things you said, were they true”, said Hilary
“Well mum –“, said Liola.
“Yes or no Liola, I just want yes or no”, said Hilary raising her voice.
Liola sighed “yes”. She took a breath and said “I did not mean it mum, I really didn’t its okay, I love our new house its great, and I’m glad we are having a change, really I am”, said Liola with a pleading voice.

Sorry its so little, but I will be posting soon🙂

Great🙂

well at least it is something...i've been DYING...

im soooooo sorry people🙁 i will b posting soon, but i have got exams comin up and i have to study really hard!!!!🙁

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