Inside I'm crying

I just thought I had to write for blue friday..... cry

inside i'm crying

I wake up, look around
Each morning try not to make a sound
I pretend I'm not here.

Creep to school - looking back
There are too many things I just couldn't hack,
You walked up to me.

The sneer on your face,
The comment atyour lips,
The crowd laugh at every word.

I turn to run
what do you think you're doing?
you're not going to cry

Taunts follow me for the rest of the day,
For two whole years. I still can't say:
You're bullying me!

Even now I can't face you when I see you
Even now, I run away,
Even now the thought chills me,
Even now I cry myself to sleep.

damn I really cant relate, but its good no doubt.

remember that I (the lovable adorable mario) am the voice of the invisble and I will be around if you need someone to listen.

its good....

Originally posted by starmovie-jaina
I just thought I had to write for blue friday..... cry

[b]inside i'm crying

I wake up, look around
Each morning try not to make a sound
I pretend I'm not here.

Creep to school - looking back
There are too many things I just couldn't hack,
You walked up to me.

The sneer on your face,
The comment atyour lips,
The crowd laugh at every word.

I turn to run
what do you think you're doing?
you're not going to cry

Taunts follow me for the rest of the day,
For two whole years. I still can't say:
You're bullying me!

Even now I can't face you when I see you
Even now, I run away,
Even now the thought chills me,
Even now I cry myself to sleep. [/B]

Good stuff 🙂

Thanks for the comments, I'm really glad that you like it 'cos loads of people think that its a bit weird........ anyways all I'm trying to say is thanks. 😄

So cold

So cold,
So cold outside as the waves crash on the rocks below,
So cold as the wails of the wind lash around,
So cold as I sit here alone.

just something else

ESCAPE

Under the water
I can fly
I can glide
I can live
Silence
It's my silent haven

Under the water
Distorted images
Limbs flail
Bubbles rise
Silence
My silent hell

Burning inside me
The time passes slowly
The need
The urge
I have to breath
Silence is broken
Shatters like glass

I can escape
But only for a moment
I can find a place
That doesn't last forever
I can't escape

Lost

I would take this moment and wrap it in silver,
I would take this moment and wrap it in gold.
I am trying to protect it,
Trying to help it live.
I love...
I need...
I care...
I feed and water and help.

This is me,
I don't know what to say,
I don't know how to say it,
I don't feel...
I don't have...
I don't understand...

Can you hear me?
i can hear only me
Can you help me?
i can't help even me
i am lost.

just some stuff I wrote tonight, what do you think?

Very good. 🙂

I love it that you people care enough to read and comment.....

thanks it means so much to me.....

Sunday Therapy

Melody soars
I fly beside it
The music carries me
High swooping low

My voice rises out,
Up and above,
Beyond and into the deep.

Break.
A pause
I sigh
I dream
My heart high.

For the first time in a week I smile again –

Outside I run,
Slowly jog,
Then pick up the pace
Melodies are flying – I run along side
The rhythms beat out in my heart
As I pick up the speed.
Harder
Faster
STOP

I breathe heavily
My heart sings aloud
My legs are weak as I wait at the door
Silently
Slowly inside and up the stairs
Relief sweeps over me
I lie alone.

I smile,
I laugh,
Light as the sea, wide as the air.

🙂 Poetry is great.

Thanks... I love poems they're like another part of my therapy.....................

Reflections

Glowing…
Radiant…
Flowing…
Starless nights…

Watching hidden faces in the sky,
Watching as the world passes by.

Feel the tension leave,
As here I lie,
Glance in the water
- see -
Together, you and me…
Circles of rain break the perfect image.
Distortion and Imperfection,
As a blur of flame in the distance.

I turn to you.

This was supposed to be happy when I wrote it but it has a bit of foreboding sense doesn't it.... oh well, I still like it at the mo

wow starmovie-jaina your poems remind me of Rei from Neon Genesis Evangelion. I find your work to be beautiful. I feel this unexplainable sadness when reading it. cry

wow they are good!

😮 u make me blush.... thanks so much...

Shivers

Shivers running down my spine
I look around, there's no-one there

Weak knees, legs like jelly
I crouch at the pool side

Heart beating, hand grip the edge
I breathe... in.... out... in.... out

In a second, i take plunge
Arms swing up and

Crash, i hit water, splashes up beside me
Stinging me side burning as i pass through the icy cool.

Down, down, I plunge into the deapths
Turn, look up, see the light so high above.

Slowly, twisting, reaching, I spin away.

Its a bit different, I thinks its quite fun, not 2 sad or angsty really is it now............................................ its more wistful really!

*Sigh*

Don't stop me,
I wait here alone.

Don't see me,
Leave me alone.

You hate me,
I know that.

You taunt me,
I hate that.

You watch me,
I feel you eyes on my head,
daring me to turn around,
questioning my authority to sit on the ground.

I cry inside,
I weep and more,
But not that you can see.

To you I am sitting on the floor.

i'd hate to be the guy that mucked all over your parade, but they're okay...not that good. the imagery are bland. the emotions lack lustre. you convey sadness in a trite way that borders being a cookie cutter feel to it. although the format and style are not conventional, but even in freestyle poetry there is a rhythm and a feel when there is none. the last one you posted is the only i actually liked.

Originally posted by Fëanor
i'd hate to be the guy that mucked all over your parade, but they're okay...not that good. the imagery are bland. the emotions lack lustre. you convey sadness in a trite way that borders being a cookie cutter feel to it. although the format and style are not conventional, but even in freestyle poetry there is a rhythm and a feel when there is none. the last one you posted is the only i actually liked.

you speak the truth....
actually its nice that you do cos it puts me back down, actually people tell me that they are too cliched, i know but find it hard to move away.

i like *sigh*, i wrote it in 2 mins and then forgot about it, finding it again hit me cos... well its too truthful i guess.

Originally posted by starmovie-jaina
you speak the truth....
actually its nice that you do cos it puts me back down, actually people tell me that they are too cliched, i know but find it hard to move away.

i like *sigh*, i wrote it in 2 mins and then forgot about it, finding it again hit me cos... well its too truthful i guess.

i like the poem u did *sigh* its good

thanks mate.....

.... this is nice and festive...... haha

Lonely Waiting

Its so lonely waiting,
Its so cold alone,
In the winter you feel it,
As it gets darker you hear it.

Stop,
Exillarating races.
Stop,
Heart beat pounds.
Stop,
I skid on the icy ground;
And down,
Down,
Down,
Down. To an end on the frozen floor.

Laughter fills my ears as I wait.
Welling up inside of me, that hate.
I errupt,
I explode,
I have no calm,
no sense,
no freedom as I wait for a change.

I wait for a sign

writing Waiting poems have always been a difficulty for me. It's nice to see one finished. 😆