Book update:
Surprisingly, the description of Ice's outfit was a bit awekward...here, read it and see why.
He got up and put on his new uniform, it was a ninja’s outfit its shirt was black with three white patches on the side, the gloves were also white and black; they were long, fingerless and had a white plastic covering on them, the black pants were attached to the shoes, the shoes were black and had a white streak where Carl’s shin was, this uniform also had a belt that had white flaps on both sides that covered his groin and ass, the belt was also white and had a gold lion symbol on the buckle, the mask was the last part of the uniform, it was a very dark shade of blue and only covered the lower half of his head.
...How else was I suposed to explain where the flaps went?
Thanks, and it does add some humor to it, even though all of the books will have that, though it does appear to be a run-on sentence to me. I'll have to fix that. I just hope the publishers will like it. These aren't children's books after all. 😄 I wonder which publishing company will publish a rated R book...hmm...