Originally posted by MrCurt061430better yet, you should have all the chapters you are done with and use Bold with the title of each chapter to know which is which.
Thanks, I'm impressed myself. this is the first time I've attempted to write a book. So all sorts of things are going through my head right now. And that's a good Idea Jacope, I think I'll do that now.
Done and done.
BTW, I just wrote Ice's first fight against 49 people, let me know what you think of it.
The man suddenly dropped down from the pipes and landed right in front of Chris. It was then revealed that he was not a man, but a ten-year-old boy and this boy was Ice. Despite his age, the guards began shooting at Ice, but there bullets froze in mid air when they reached two inches from Ice’s body. When the shooting stopped, the bullets fell to the floor and Ice simply walked to the large group of people. Halfway over to them, a couple of swords, similar to the one he used to kill Chris, appeared in Ice’s hands. Ice still walked slowly toward the large group. The group lowered their weapons and backed away in fear. If this kid could stop bullets in mid air without even moving, then what else could he do? Ice flipped in the air and kicked one of the guys on the temple, killing him instantly. Ice raised his Ice swords in a combat position and the large group, seeking revenge for their two fallen comrades, ran toward the kid with a means to kill. Ice flipped up in the air again and spun back down and sliced another guard in half. The guards continued to charge in on him and Ice was soon surrounded by forty seven guards. One guard reached for Ice but Ice cut his hand off with one of his Ice swords and then slit his throat with the other. Ice then kicked behind him to knocked another guard back and then froze the guard in front of him, grabbed the guard behind him and threw him into the frozen guard. The frozen guard shattered into pieces and several of those pieces hit the other guard in all of his vital areas. Twenty guards aimed their gins at Ice and fired, Ice simply spun around once the bullets froze and threw the frozen bullets back at the twenty guards killing them all. Some more guards charged at Ice. Ice ran up one guard, back flipped off of this guard, stabbed another in the head with both swords, spun around on this guards head and kicked the three guards around him, let go of his Ice swords, flew toward another guard and froze his own arm to increase his strength and punched the guard in the face. The force of the blow cause the guard’s head to fly off across the room. Two guards attacked Ice but Ice simply ducked, tricking them into attacking each other. Ice pulled out his Ice swords from the dead guard’s head, who was still standing, and decapitated two guards at the same time. Now there were only 18 guards left now. They appeared to have not of noticed their decline in numbers in the last 3 seconds because they were all still coming in after Ice. Ice kicked one in the temple, cut off the head of another, froze the head of a third and pushed it off using his ability to control his ice abilities, sliced a fourth and fifth in half, and froze 12 of them and shattered them all. But there was one who was still alive. He looked at Ice in fear and backed away. Slowly, very slowly, Ice looked at the guard, with blood-lust in his eyes. The full grown man dropped his weapon and ran away from the ten-year-old boy, but Ice wasn’t going to let him get away. Ice threw one of his Ice swords at the guard’s back and killed him.
This is a pretty good start. I have no doubt that this book will be great. And hopefully when I get the next RP started, this would have Ice's legacy continue.
I remember there was this big evil your chracter talked about. I think he should have allignment with Satan, Lucifer, and the rest of his henchmen and demons. Jacope X is gonna be evil and neatural but he still ahs a grudge with Satan and also he wont be very friendly no more. Jacope II is alone, Jacope III will now be the next Hero. Tanya is still with the heroes but she has her new generation of incan tribe. Moufang's brother Motar has been killed by one of you and he is coming for revenge. Jacope X is now 45 in the RP, Jacope II is 38, Jacope III is 25.
I really cannot wait to start the next RP. I already have a very good plot. And Brock X is also gonna lead you all since the Elder God will be busy against Satan and Lucifer. He is gonna protect the world himself but defeating them is up to the heroes. Lucy, Jose, and Jackie are all now killing and brutaly injuring and decapitating already one billion humans on earth. Jacope II will fight them.
The RP will be like this
You have that character sign in sheet
Name:
Age:
Sex:
Weight:
Height:
Afflication
Occupations:
Species:
Powers:
Fighting Styles:
Gadgets/weapons (optional):
Appearance:
Favorite food:
Hobby:
Race:
Realatives:
Personality:
Story:
Allies:
Enemies:
And here is a new addition
Group Name:
Afflication:
Leader:
Members:
Allies:
enemies:
Join or create. usually Heroes have to join the heroes
I'll keep Kate, of course. And Ice will be in heaven for a while until he realizes that Jacope X has gone evil, then he'll return to Earth, despite the fact that he knows he'll bring an unstoppable evil upon it if he does. Oh, and along with he Great Evil's return, I'll also introduce a new villain.