I've wrote some rap songs and I need advices

Originally posted by -hh-
darth revan is too gangster to be from compton 😛

and revan did u watch conan o'brien? atmosphere performed

great performance

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wWgbD155zwY

It was good, but they should've played "Get Fly"... I love that song 😎

Jam Master Nate is hella funky afro

dosent eyedea hang around with them?

They're on the same label, they used to tour together and Slug & Eyedea are buddies.

You have to watch this if you haven't seen it before. Eyedea and Slug at the Wake Up show, it's crazy. Eyedea warms up in part 1, then Slug kills it at the end, but in part 2 Eyedea just goes off. Slug does really well to keep up with him, and I think he gets the biggest laugh for the ''werewolf'' line as well.

part 1:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EAtKZiXwPGY&search=Eyedea

part 2:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jtD5pRVB9Zc&search=Eyedea

Listen to Kool G Rap,Rakim, Nas,GZA, KRS-ONE, Eminem,or Big Daddy Kane, then try to rap. Don't try to be like 2pac or any of those rappers you see on tv. They suck ass.

Originally posted by K3VIL
Running The Hood

People gotta prey cause if I'm goin all out,
I'll beat the shit from them in the bout,
born & raised in da hood, don't waste my time
mother****in' looser, I'm gonna make da businesss work and shut down every dork who's gonna cross my path,
trust me it's gonna be a bloodbath.
Every cop in the hood will be me don't shoot,
so mercyfuly I'll kick them with my timberland boot,
Run for your life when da gangsta comes you
man I gotta a bullet with your name on it,
show respect you don't know who you're ****in with
don't mess with me or i'll mess with ya, believe me,
i'll make capone looking like a priest when i'll make ya
taste my fist you'll pray me to let ya go away.
Payback time, victory is mine, I own da hood and other
gangsta are dog food.

dont ever say dork or looser when ur rappin cause it just ruins it