Star Wars: Chapter 1: Birth of Chaos

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Shade felt the the message and hurried to new aldeeron"im coming"he replied

Cato Neimoidia:

R2-D3 (Finduilas' astromech droid) knocked the main gate of the ancient palace of the Viceroy of the Trade Federation. A camdroid hushed us to identify the droids and the people who enter. Since Finduilas knew that criminal organization is a subsidiary of the Sith Lords and controlled directly by them, she went under the guise of a bounty hunter. The organization don't know any bounty hunter that is a Hobbit, so it will be pretty easy to get in.

Camdroid: Who is it?

Finduilas: My name is 00052htam Ezrot. I am conveying a prisoner.

Camdroid: You may pass.

Finduilas found herself facing the security guard, a Gungan who doubts of Finduilas' real intentions. She does a mind trick on the Gungan hussar (a Gungan light cavalry soldier)

Finduilas: You will take me to Dardo Gunray now. You serve him well. You are sure to be rewarded.

Gungan hussar: Mesa take you to Dardo Gounraï now. Mesa serve essa well. Mesa be sure to be rewarded.

As the ship landed, Darth Fenix gave his speech.

"We have landed at New Alderaan, I can fell Fisto's dark auro. It appeares that my Master's forsight was correct. Search this city. Find the enemy, and destroy him. Once found relay his location to me Via commlink. Good luck, and may the darkside be with you!!!"

The soldiers swarmed out of the transport ship and made their way toward the city. Fenix watched them they were out of site, and then jumped on to his personal swoop bike to join the hunt...

The Gungan hussar brought the three of them in front of the room where Dardo Gunray is holding his reunions. The room contains many prisoners frozen in carbonite.

Dardo Gunray: I told you NOT to admit Hobbit bounty hunters! Kerl Tarpals, you're a weak-brained fool!

Finduilas: I demand a reward for this Jedi, Kieran Ilora. I ask for 100,000 credits.

Dardo Gunray: I will not give you more than 50,000 credits.

Finduilas (through a mind trick): You will give me 100,000 credits.

Dardo Gunray: I will give you 100,000 credits.

She stays up late and finds both Kerl and Dardo's respective rooms. Surreptitiously, she enters in their rooms and put a thermal detonator inside each one of these and she goes off to free all the frozen prisoners afterwards.

(janick, have you ever heard of punctuation? And i didn't know we were playing Lord of the Rings! You're posts make very little sense and noone but you cares... only Blaxican, Bluedoughnut and I are playing a proper game heere!)
Fisto felt as the Jedi and Republic troopers scouted the area and watched from shelter as shade's ship came to land, then Force- Flew up towards the ship!

(Blaxican, are you Jedi or Sith?)

(Fore more information, the one of few things that are alike between LOTR Hobbits and Hobbits here are their size. In LOTR, it is just because of the nature of them, here, it's because their homeworld (Ralltiir) is high-gravitied (three times and a half Coruscant normal). What are my puncutation problems here?)

(sorry, not punctuation: tenses)

(Sith)

shade saw fisco and jumped out of the cocpit."whats going on here i saw republic ships entering"he drew his lightsabre and waited for them to come down

(ZOMG WTF IM NOT REPUBLIC IM SITH!!! READ THE DAMNED EARLIER POSTS!!!)

(what the hell are you talking about)

(I'm asking what should I do if I wish that my involvement makes more sense)

(Ok, you say you saw "republix ships" landing on New Alderann, who are about to attack Fisto. Those sships are MY ships. And Im NOT republic. Im sith. The republic is not attacking Fisto I AM.

(oh sorry fisto is sith to)

Then, all the freed prisoners are taken into a shuttle. Finduilas notices that all of them were seeking Sith lords. Through the Force, she located them on New Alderaan. In her "flagship" (for she is an admiral as well), the Will of the Rightfulness, she hails all ships in her fleet.

Finduilas: All ships, set course for New Alderaan!

Fisto leapt into Shade's ship:
"Fly!get us out of here... my rival, Darth Fenix, is coming!"
(Janick, this game has 2 Sith and you can't just make up Darth Gungray)

(Note: Dardo Gunray isn't a Sith. He is controlled by the Sith)

shade sat back in the pilots seat and punched the controls(my ships alot like bobba fetts ship)they flew into the thick of the ships unnoticed because he had put on the cloaking devise."we'll be out of here in moments, whats going on"

"A traitor Sith is after me... he must be eliminated, as must the Jedi on Yavin IV!"