Star Wars: Chapter 1: Birth of Chaos

Kay Fisto began to meditate, reaching into the Force... there was a flash, a disturbance even he could not understanfd, and Fisto slumped, senseless!

Finduilas landed, but only because her fighter could do so.

Major Crisis: I think we should go out to where Fisto is.

Fisto is an enemy to Tinuviel and the Hobbits, for he/she killed one on a mission.

Darth Fenix felt the twitch in the force, as his prey jumped to light speed. he had lost them. Fenix turned on his comlink. "All units, report back to the ship. They have escaped." Fenix stared up at the sky, thinking. He unknowingly crushed his comlink...

Originally posted by Twilight Janick
Finduilas landed, but only because her fighter could do so.

Major Crisis: I think we should go out to where Fisto is.

Fisto is an enemy to Tinuviel and the Hobbits, for he/she killed one on a mission.

is this thread dead now

(I told you everything: Hobbits here originate from a high-gravity world, I played the same Hobbit character on other RPs who are in other forums without problem. There are too many differences between Hobbits here and LOTR Hobbits. And Finduilas' full name is Finduilas Tinuviel)

(Oh god... you're one of THOSE guys who uses the same, carbon copy character for every RP and name their character AFTER A LOTR CHARACTER!!!!!!!!!!! This thread os dead when itb dies...)

Fisto couldnt see anything... someone was blocking his Force visions... suddenly, his head was ringing! he clutched it, a Jedi Force Mental assault? Was this a new tactic? He screamed out...

[sorry for bad spelling and I might be a little off sence others were screwing up the story]
Darth Goku arrived on New Allderan in a small tie fighter. She sensed that jedi were attacking. She sprinted to the dark energy she felt. As she Sprinted she struck down random civilians.

yeah..leme guess. the hobbit races doesn't wear shoes? And they have a distinct liking for mushrooms?

Twilight Janick's idea for hobbits in star wars world doesn't match up. Mixing hobbits and Starwars is like mixing fire with gas.vampire

this is dead.

This is an extra difference between LOTR Hobbits and Hobbits here: Hobbits wear shoes (spiked shoes in Finduilas' case) and have no particular liking about food (here).

Finduilas found some more traces of someone called Darth Goku.

Finduilas: To everyone in range, if you are Darth Goku, I challenge you!

(Dude, learn to RPG and the guy who is obviously Goku-all the Sith spots are taken by the way- complains f someonecopying something. Dragon Ball Z+ Star wars= Water+electricity

Originally posted by Knightfall93
(Dude, learn to RPG and the guy who is obviously Goku-all the Sith spots are taken by the way- complains f someonecopying something. Dragon Ball Z+ Star wars= Water+electricity

(It's like if we can't mix up any universe with SW)

(yeah, butyou SOLsmethigyou didnt mix)

Pal Jetsam and his squad waited patiently in the transport headed for New Alderaan. Nomi (The Jedi in the squad) looked troubled. Pal was going over to talk to her, when the pilot's voice spoke through the terminal saying "We are entering New Alderaan, and there appears to be an unknown squadron of ships in it's orbit". "Follow proceadures", replied Pal. The transport approached the squadron, and the pilot said "unknown ships, identify".

"this is sean jones, capiton of the red haven rouges..." said sean calmly" me and my squadren are here for your protection. i will personaly see that you, and the squad you are transporting, will make a safe landing."'

"I don't trust him" said Nomi, but Pal disagreed and said through the speaker "roger that, cover our decent". Pal then cocked his rocket-launcher, and waited.

"roger, take the lead" the transport entered the atmasphere, the red havens set in a defensive perimiter.
" pal, my sensors are picking up oncomming starfighters, me and my squad will take cair of the fighters, then i will land and assist your assult. the rest of my squadren will give us airial support."

Sean could see the claw craft fighters, it was merely a squadren. a simple task for a jedi master. sean opend his s foils and pored stuter fire into the center of the grope peircing the shilds of one causing it to side swipe into the craft behind and causing the claw craft squadren to sepperate. " i got the leader" said sean in a calm voice" haven 2 your my wingmate, havens 3 and 4 take the right, and havens 5, 6, and 7 take the left. i got the leader."
the havens broke, and sean could sence the concentration in his fellow pilots. sean swung his x-wing around to persue the leader of the oposing squadren, he senced the fear in the piot, and fired twice taking out the crafts perpulsion. he watched as the burning craft fell into the jugle below. "Pal, im on my way, Sean out."

Pal Jetsam and the rest of the crew unboarded their transport and looked at their surroundings. It was a jungle planet, one which Pal had heard a lot about, but he had never actually been to it. "Alright break up said Pal "Figo take 5 and go east, Nomi take Hummer and Redd and go west, the rest of you follow me."