Fox13's shorts

ok..i have been making short stories lately in the rp's im in. and i think i like the way they turn out.

the beating of a fox kitsune, the first short

"CMON! GET UP MUTT!" yelled Jackson, a wolf, and a leader of his pack "....." Jackson kicked James into the wall "I SAID GET UP!" james kept trying, but kept getting kicked, over and over. "p..please...." Jackson picked james up by the throat "aww, the little mutt tired? dumb fox's... think they are fancy" Jackson said "they always say that they are better than us wolves." Jackson threw james into a wall and started kicked him again "Cmon, les jus kill em" ped said, ped was jackson... little helper. "Nah, i like watchin the mutt suffer" jacckson and his pack continued beating on james, continued calling him mutt. he delt with them for more than a month, until he ran away from his home. on the way out of town, he saw the pack one last time, they looked at him and smirked "Hey mutt, where ya goin'?" Jackson asked him "uh..uh...." james stammered as he stepped backwards as they walked towards him. Thats when james' eyes turned blood red "Woah! look at the mutts eyes! he's actin tough!" james lunged himself at jackson, tackling him down. when they hit the ground, James ripped jackson throat out. "holy shit!" Ped said "the mutt's gone rabid!" at his words, the pack started to run. ever since then, james hutned them down, killing the pack.. one by one....

a flashback of a horrible moment~~~

James looked at Sanya, she was kind of drunk. he stood up and looked at her "have you been drinking??" he asked her. "only a little.." she replied. Sanya picked james up and started to kiss him and james pushed her away "WHAT ARE YOU DOING!?" he yelled " im just kissing you..." she said. "WHY!?" james asked "Becuase your cute...." James sighed and started to walk away, but sanya tackled him "Cmon shorty.." she said "im bored, and your the cutest guy here..." "what1?" james asked frantically trying to get away from her "go away!" Sanya sat up and had tears in her eyes "pleease???" she pleaded "why me!?" james asked. "becuase.. iv known you your whole life.. and i know you like me" James sighed and finally gave in ~~fade out~~

~away to war~

"ill miss you...." rose said "ill miss all of you...." James replied as he hugged rose tenderly "good bye...." Rose had tears in her eyes. "p..promise me you will come back.... alive..." she said as she ran up to him "dont worry rose... i promise.." he kissed her on the cheek and started off again. "i.. i love you james...." she cried as she fell to her knees, her cheeks red from sadness. James smiled and stopped "I love you too.... ill be back in exactly one year.... good bye..."

~the next year~

"Gee, you must be happy actually getting to go home eh, James?" Finny asked him "Of coarse... but i broke my promise... i was supposed to be back in one year.... oh my god!!!" James looked at the window of the Bus, tears instantly came to his eyes. his town was now nothing but rubble and smoke, covered in fire "WHAT THE HELL HAPPEND?!" he jumped out of the moving bus, as did Finny. "J..JAMES! WAIT UP!" finny yelled trying to catch up with his war buddy. when finny finally caught up with him he found James on his knees crying, and before james was a body.. of a young, dead female kitsune "r..rose...." james said as he cried "im so sorry.... please.. im.. so sorry...." Finny kneeled down beside james "James... im so sorry..." he tried "NO!" james interupted "THIS IS ALL MY FAULT! IF I WOULDNT HAVE BROKEN MY PROMISE......." Finny sighed and helped james up. "James... shes... your love.. isnt she?"

Interesting...

This is good for starters, and it is interesting

maybe you can some how bring all of these different things together and make a story out of it. i could help if you'd like. It'd be interesting, instead of seeing bits and pieces of things you've written.

i dont see how to peice them together... if you read them you would notice in two of them, he has a different girl 😛 and in one he is getting beat. if you can peice them together, be my guest ^-^

well simply put it, it all depends on where you go with the character. it could be for instance at different ages.

or.......

He's like 38 years old for instance, and he has a way to go back in time to fix something drastic that happened. When he goes back in time, he's with his best friend or something, but things don't turn out well, so he's back in the present. things are changed, so when he goes back into the past, his past is different too, so he's with another woman.

actaully, iin the one with him getting beat by the wolves, he is only 10 years old in human years, seeing as how he is half human half fox, he is around 11. and in the going to war one he is 17. and in the one with Sanya, he is around 8 months old.

it's just a thought. he could be a certain age, and he has a chance to fix things about his life.

hmm... i will work on that 😊

okie dokie.
in the mean time, i need to memorize a poem.

see ya

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iitzak, how bout you explain why you did the 😐 face... your not much help...

Agreed! Awesome shorts james!

heh... thanks guys 😊

Originally posted by Fox13
iitzak, how bout you explain why you did the 😐 face... your not much help...

Because you spelled my name wrong. 😐

uh huh.. how bout you just rate the stories

I don't wanna. 😐 I'm too bored to do that. 😐

then stop postin here 😠 your just spamming 😠

Yes Sir! captain

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