Wrighting Fantasy

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hey rick! good luck!

i have 4 and a half pages of chapter 1 written i will try and post tonight or definatly buy tomorrow

it is quite boring though so dont get ur hopes up

it sounds like it is coming together.

ive finished my chapter 1 i need to type it up on computer now

im about to post more of my plot should be up in 45 mins

woops sorry guys lol forgot to post it lol
here it is
Aries grows up as a pic pocket he gets in loads of fights slowly building his skill in fist fights and with short daggers eventually he becomes some what of a bounty hunter free lance fighter going where eva the money was the new king has put a reasonable bounty on 1 mans head aries takes up the bounty and trakes him down getting into a fight with him some 3 days ride from the capital in the forrest he learns he used to be the old kings right hand man and genral of his armys taking up with him he joins a large free lance army organized to take down the new king the battles consisting mostly of small skirmishes in forests aries is cut off from the group and ambushed having trained with the genral for months he manages to stay alive during the fight though not un harmed it comes down to him and the leader of the group that was set up to foil the skirmish and is beaten gloating befor the final stroke aries is saved by a jet black stallion foal he bonds with this horse really well racing threw the forrest towards the castle to rejoin the fight they came upon a cave curiosity over comes aries go’s in and follows a tunnel to inside the castle finds an old room use as a storage steals a treasure chest races back out joins demon racing back to other side of castle fight is over rebellion lost sleeps in dodge pup manages to open chest?? Some gold coins jewellery and small gold egg about the size of a fist egg ways a lot more than it should

it would kinda help if you had put punctuation marks in there

im not up to that part yet im just trying to get my ideas out of my head

wont be posting for a long time

um...ok?

sorry only had like 10 seconds to come on here and post that i have 4 tafe exams coming up and 2 practicle exams i have to cook a 3 course meal from scratch pluss start and get everything ready for easter dinner :-(

do u want to be a chef

yep im gonna be australias version of jamie oliva
lol

ive met jamie oliver before he came to our school once to talk about healthy food

who is Jamie Oliver?

the english chef

one of the greastest english chefs

im on chapter 2 of my book

lol im still on plot but im constantly wrighting stuff then waking up in thew morning and think no thats just pathetic and crossing ti out