Originally posted by rick01666I know what you mean, luckly I am not writing my book alone, so I it dies not sound lame, my grandma wont let me delete it (my grandma is writing it with me, she's the only person who wants to write a book, and still has a fantasy imagination)
lol im still on plot but im constantly wrighting stuff then waking up in thew morning and think no thats just pathetic and crossing ti out
im a guy and im not taking typing lessons i dont have time lol u should see my hand wrighting lol its shit house its gonna take me like a year to edit my book when its finnished im hoping for book 1 around 600 pages or so maybe more prob write 3 or 4 books in the series my main dude is gonna meet up with a few other people and make a like a fellowship(couldnt think of a better owrd but its gonna be nothing like the lord of the rings) and at the ebd of book 1 i might send em all on there own way and write a book about each of them seperatly sorta thing i was wondering if any of u no any programs i can use to design a world i wont to make like an entire world my main character is gonna get a horse and a dragon in the book but my dragon is gonna be a massive thing its just gonna be like about the size of a big dog/small horse it can breath fire and stuff and atack in battles and is really strong but u carnt ride it its good for carrying msg's in a battle cuz its quick sorta thing what do u recon?????????
Originally posted by rick01666I do know one good program (at least I think that is what you said) and it is called (drum roll please) your IMAGINATION 😄 my world is based on everthing that goes on in my mind, and for a name, you could do something like word scramble. for example EARTH RAETH or something like that (you cant name it EVEZUM, because that is what my world is going to be called) that is what I did for my world.
im a guy and im not taking typing lessons i dont have time lol u should see my hand wrighting lol its shit house its gonna take me like a year to edit my book when its finnished im hoping for book 1 around 600 pages or so maybe more prob write 3 or 4 books in the series my main dude is gonna meet up with a few other people and make a like a fellowship(couldnt think of a better owrd but its gonna be nothing like the lord of the rings) and at the ebd of book 1 i might send em all on there own way and write a book about each of them seperatly sorta thing i was wondering if any of u no any programs i can use to design a world i wont to make like an entire world my main character is gonna get a horse and a dragon in the book but my dragon is gonna be a massive thing its just gonna be like about the size of a big dog/small horse it can breath fire and stuff and atack in battles and is really strong but u carnt ride it its good for carrying msg's in a battle cuz its quick sorta thing what do u recon?????????
Aries grows up as a pick pocket he gets in loads of fights slowly building his skill in fist fights and with short daggers eventually he becomes some what of a bounty hunter free lance fighter going where ever the money was the new king has put a reasonable bounty on 1 mans head Aries takes up the bounty and traces him down getting into a fight with him some 3 days ride from the capital in the forest he learns he used to be the old kings right hand man and general of his armies taking up with him he joins a large free lance army organized to take down the new king the battles consisting mostly of small skirmishes in forests Aries is cut off from the group and ambushed having trained with the general for months he manages to stay alive during the fight though not un harmed it comes down to him and the leader of the group that was set up to foil the skirmish and is beaten gloating before the final stroke Aries is saved by a jet black stallion foal he bonds with this horse really well racing threw the forest towards the castle to rejoin the fight they came upon a cave curiosity over comes Aries goes in and follows a tunnel to inside the castle finds an old room use as a storage steals a treasure chest races back out joins demon(black stallion) racing back to other side of castle fight is over rebellion lost sleeps in dodgy pup manages to open chest?? Some gold coins jewellery and small gold egg about the size of a fist egg ways a lot more than it should egg hatches in night baby red dragon is born forms magical bond with Aries can communicate mentally with him Aries goes to ancient temple in the heart of the of the county has to travel deep with into forests over scorching red desserts final gets there and is attacked but ancient guards blessed buy the gods to protect there temple Aries defeats them but demon is injured Aries goes into temple to talk to the gods he learns that the god of evil has control over the king and will soon come to this world to rule it is not written any ware that this should happen so the gods of good have not had the time to bless one with the power to stop the evil god for to bless a man with out his knowledge takes great power and a long time they do though have the power to help him in a way his horse demon is dieing they use there power to bond demon and Aries dragon into 1 beast dragons in this world only grow to the size of a horse bonding this one with demon has doubled its size Aries is able to fly on his demon which is now a dark red with shinning black eyes the gods having tired them selves greatly not realizing how hard it would be for them to bond to animals completely together so there was no rivalry in the beasts head over which beast would be dominant retreat back to there safe haven though they do recommend that Aries travel north to the old people who its is said were taught buy the dwarfs before they left this world on how to forge metal like no other and taught bye the elves on how to use trees for everything needed in life before they to decided this world was to small Aries travels there but is captured buy a group of rebels while his dragon demon is out hunting in the night Aries escapes but gets lost and comes upon a troll cave still being young and curious wondering about the rumors of what old troll caves can contain he goes inside and rewarded with a amour that covers all his torso and most of his limbs but is no heavier that his clothing later when he reaches the place he is traveling to and goes to the smithy he is told that this is the ancient armor of the high elven king worn buy him when he went to war with the evils of this land he was killed in battle and never seen again it was shortly after that the elves left the smithy agrees to make Aries a sword and Aries gives him the metal to use that the gods gave him to use for the hilt he was told that once a it had bin a great sword but evil had corrupted the owner of it and the sword spilt at the hilt and the blade was never seen again the hilt was returned to the gods realizing what he had done and then walking to the edge of a mountain calling out to the world for forgiveness threw him self off the world not knowing what to forgive him for couldn’t do anything to help him so he died Aries receives his new sword which is great finally balanced razor Sharpe edges but feels like it is not complete demon now being full grown about the size of a small house fly’s Aries back to the war where the king is waging war on the last of the rebellion he had his spies start rumors of him awaking a dragon larger than a house and so when Aries fly’s over the battle all seems lost for the rebellion and the king knowing something is not right pushes his forces to quickly finish the battle Aries fly’s low over the rebellion and out over the kings armies and demon releases a breath of golden red fire onto them killing half the army in 1 breath the rebellion seeing the dragon is on there side pushes forward and the battle is one but not before the evil god finally descends upon the world and with a muttered sentence release a bolt of lighting that strikes Aries dead the rebellion seeing this run and hide retreating to a new world where evil reigns the evil god has created a new evil looking like a large rat but standing like a man with a long face these beats now rule under the evil god demon Aries dragon fled hiding at the ancient gods temple none dared travel there for a hundred years incase they were caught and then tortured for blasphemy demon not being able to fit inside the temple slept out side never moving he slowly turned to rock eventually after a hundred years people start going to the ancient temple and worship the great dragon carving that is rumored to be carved by the ancient dwafs to look like the dragon that nearly saved there world they pray to old gods to return aries to their world and his great dragon Demon to end their suffering
that’s all ive got so far I don’t know weather to bring him back or get demon to awaken and bond with a new hero either way there will be a bit of romance come into it with the old/new hero and a woman let me know what u think