SM's Poetry..

I'm back 😱

I've already begun on a new poem. 🪩

Originally posted by Spawn_Master
I'm back 😱

I've already begun on a new poem. 🪩

Sweet! 😄

Well, this one took awhile but I finally got it..

Hidden

Why do you stay hidden?
I've already found you.
There's no use hiding,
Everyone knows your there.

Your secrets out,
Out in the open,
It can't be hidden,
Just like you.

Nothing is hidden from my eyes.

It's short, I know, but it's cool. 😬

Originally posted by Spawn_Master
Well, this one took awhile but I finally got it..

Hidden

Why do you stay hidden?
I've already found you.
There's no use hiding,
Everyone knows your there.

Your secrets out,
Out in the open,
It can't be hidden,
Just like you.

Nothing is hidden from my eyes.

It's short, I know, but it's cool. 😬

Originally posted by Coldfire
Short, yes, but good, also yes. Although in the part "Everyone knows your there." It should be a 'you're' not a 'your' 🙂

Originally posted by Spawn_Master
Yes, I noticed that, but I couldn't edit at the time. Thanks for pointing that out though 👆

This one reminded me of an opening theme to a show I watch, Ghost in the Shell. Don't worry, I didn't copy the words, that would just be plain wrong in a poem. I just thought of the plot of the show and it gave me some ideas ✅

Silent Bullet.

Marching in a row,
We walk to our deaths,
As the Silent Bullet stretches out,
And touches the skin of the living.

Taking our positions,
We scramble to defend,
Only to find our numbers dwindle,
To one Silent Bullet.

When the day's end comes,
We've breached his forces,
And this one Silent Bullet,
Has turned the tide of battle.

😛