Originally posted by rox
u guys have given a lot of cons what about some pros. i know there has to be somethin good
Well, I like the electricity thing, in my opinion there arent enough good electrical based characters, that said, yours isnt one of them.
If you want tips for improving the character;
-First, actually create a character, some personal details and personality would be effective.
-a decent back story would give a good idea of who the character is and where they come from.
-Lose the telepathy, vague references to contolling the various types of creating electricity, (Since most of those dont actually create electricity, they just supply the heat or momentum to power turbines which generate the electricity), keep the magentism if you want, but lose the instant healing part of the energy form.
-Create more plausible, common weaknesses, not two, very specific situations that might arise. Give definite substances or occurences that can harm him.
-lose the Mega mutant reference, they already have Omega mutants, and I wouldnt try to make him one of them, it shows a lack of imagination.
-try to keep powers and abilities simple, but not so vague and unstoppable.
If I can think of anything else, Ill post it.
Dont give up on the character, just try to modify it until you're happy with it and it sounds like a character you could really see in the story of a comic, not just blasting all the enemies away and showing uo every character in the comic.