Grade My Essay!

Started by Jabba the Hutt3 pages

Wait, a two page paper in college? Wow, college is gonna be easy for me.

Don't be delusional Jabba. Nothing is ever as easy as it seems.

Go to it Rick. I salute you for doing an essay on Captain A.

It's not bad, of course you'll get raised eyebrows at the subject matter, but the sentences are too short and choppy with little consistancy in the style. Try combining some of the sentences and flowering it up with dashes, colons, and especially semicolons, as you could use a handful of those little buggers.

Originally posted by Rick/Genis
dee yah blo, man?

well? Do you? 😛

man how did u figure that out ? shoot i hope you answer that correctly on your essay. lol

Originally posted by Rick/Genis
I go to the Art Institute of Seattle! 😄
Canada? or is this Washington?

(Things like this I seriously don't know for some reason. That's how you know I'm barely out of Grade school...)

It's Washington 🙂

And just so you all know... AIS is kindof a slacker school when it comes to essays and core classes. So don't expect two page papers in OTHER colleges.

See Jabba? Nothing is ever easy.

exactly... the tough stuff for ME is in the videos I have to make..

That's funny. The tough stuff for ME is in the videos Rick makes too.

What are the odds?

Man, I wish I could POST the video's I make 😛

Originally posted by Rick/Genis
Man, I wish I could POST the video's I make 😛

I'm glad you don't. Quite frankly we get enough smut on here without you flaunting your private parts all over the place. Some of these people aren't even old enough to watch that stuff. Pervert!

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but I've got a paper BAG over my head!!! 😮

Originally posted by Rick/Genis
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but I've got a paper BAG over my head!!! 😮

Which head? 😮 Sorry.

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh SNAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dude, are you a Cyber Ninja!?

Yes... yes I am..

hey nice doing an essay on Cap A! I myself have done a speech in my public speaking class that was all about the juggernaut.

Sweet.

A Juggs speech!? Cool... Scarecrow756 had a thread about his Batman speech a while ago... LOL.

Sadly I only got a high C for it. Here is a link for the speech if anyone wants to read it. http://www.killermovies.com/forums/showthread.php?s=&threadid=393964&highlight=batman+speech