Originally posted by SpunkySmurph
You've got it all wrong. nahuhSoljer copy and pasted off of [b]me
.In advance.
none180 [/B]
I'm sure he did... 😛
Originally posted by SpunkySmurph
Wow... now that I've I've actually read them (ermmha), I have to say, your characterization is great. It's hard to write that many different characters with their lines generally spot on, but you managed admirably. 🙂
😮 thx... i did try to hear every line in my head, and ask myself would that character actually say something like that, but i had no idea whether it would work or not...
Originally posted by Symmetric Chaos
Wow. They really are good.I refuse to believe that Pr wrote them.
and why is that? schmoll
Originally posted by SpunkySmurph
I'll take credit! flex
you could try... 😛
ok, i'll have part 3 up by tonight at the latest, i've figured out what to do with the colossus v cage fight, and i'm typing it up as we speak, or type... or whatever... 😖
Originally posted by willRules
wow great story pr1983 ✅
thx... 😮
now, i am sorry it's been taking so long for me to have part 3 up, but i am working on it, and i have the majority of it done...
it's just a case of ironing out some dialogue and tweaking some of the indiviual fights, but the main donkey work is done... i'll have it up as soon as i can...
Green Arrow runs the gauntlet.
Part 1. Ollie Queen vs Solomon Grundy
Mayor Oliver Queen returns late home one night and enters his basement, ready to change into his alter ego and fight the crime of Star city. Before GA can change into his costume however, he hears a rumbling from upstairs.
Ollie's son, Connor hears rumbling outside and approaches the front door. A gigantic fist punches through the closed door, hitting connor across the face. Connor rolls with the punch and attempts to leap forward at Solomon Grundy who now is towering in the door frame. Before Connor can react, Grundy back slaps Connor, knocking him into furniture. Connor hits his head and is knocked out instantly.
GA hears the commotion. Before he can change, he grabs his bow and quiver. He slings his katanna blade over his back and runs up the stairs.
Solomon Grundy stands over Connor and stretches out his hand towards him. An arrow hits Grundy's hand and and begins to beep. Grundy lets out a yelp of pain but is distracted by the beeping arrow. The arrow explodes, knocking Grundy back. The force of the explosion sends Grundy through the front wall of the house and onto the lawn. Ollie stands in the huge hole in the wall, still in his suit but ready for action. He fires several regular arrows at Grundy's face. Grundy blocks with his arm and the arrows sink into his forearm instead of his head. He then charges towards Ollie like a rabid bull. Ollie forward flips over Grundy. As he flips over him (In slow motion) Ollie fires an arrow right into the top of Grundy's skull. Ollie land behind Grundy who is wailing in pain. Whilst flailing around in pain, Grundy hits Ollie with a backhand. The forces knocks Ollie back into a nearby car. His bow is broken from the impact. Ollie unsheathes his katanna and leaps towards Grundy. Grundy attempts to punch Ollie but Ollie jumps above the swipe and kicks off Grundy's fist to propel himself over Grundy. As he lands behind the monster Ollie cuts at Grundy's back with the blade. Grundy grabs hold of the back of ollie's blazer and uses his hold to swing Ollie into a nearby tree. Ollie is knocked out immediately.
Ollie wakes up much later to find both Solomon Grundy and Connor gone.....
Part 2 coming soon............
Originally posted by pr1983
thx... 😮now, i am sorry it's been taking so long for me to have part 3 up, but i am working on it, and i have the majority of it done...
it's just a case of ironing out some dialogue and tweaking some of the indiviual fights, but the main donkey work is done... i'll have it up as soon as i can...
wow sounds like you have been putting a lot of thought into this ✅
mine are usually just done on the spot 😮
Originally posted by willRules
wow sounds like you have been putting a lot of thought into this ✅mine are usually just done on the spot 😮
lol... the first two i did were largely that way, i just edited the dialogue to make it sound more like something each character would say, well i tried to anyway...
i'm just doing the climax, and i don't want to make a mess of it...
I can't wait. Just make sure you don't make the same mistake I did. A while back I had a storyline where I had most of the major or popular characters in the MU vs the sentinels. I was so preoccupied with making sure every character did something, all I had Sentry do was repeatedly fly through things ✅
HUNT FOR IRON FIST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Iron fist vs Lady Shiva
Location: Daniel Rand's penthouse
Daniel sits ontop of his couch after a long day until suddenly he sees a knife come at him reflecting light bouncing into his face he ducks and front flips forward to kick a woman in the face as she comes towards him and he lands on his feet while Lady Shiva lands on her back and starts twirling her body to stand up to perform a spinning kick at Danny knocking him into a pillar and he immediately staring down Lady Shiva as she was about to go for another attack seeing the other one did not hurt much and she tries to kick him in the stomach but he immediately backs an inch away and steps forward with one kick into her face knocking her back against a wall. He immediately runs at her with no hesitation with his Iron Fist charged suddenly with his wrist being grabbed he gets flipped suddenly into a wall and he lands on his back with his legs up against the wall he suddenly puts his hands up to stop her foot from crushing his throat Danny immediately kicks off the wall and back flips to punch Lady Shiva's throat but gets his hand slapped away and she tries to punch the side of his head just to get her hand slapped away by his and he goes for a **** punt to Shiva but she jumps and does a split blocking his attack and he front flips to stand on his shoulders immediately spinning trying to screw his head off but he spins with her making her deadly strike look more like a circus act he then spins away from her leaving Lady Shiva spinning towards the ground face first when she turns she sees 2 glowing fists coming to her face brought together only to be punched through her face.
Winner: Iron Fist
More Iron Fist vs another Random Martial Artist later if I feel like it.
Green Arrow runs the gauntlet
Part 2 - GA vs Deadshot
After the disappearance of Connor, Ollie decides to put on his costume and go searching. As the culprit was Solomon Grundy, GA decides to check out the nearest marshes/swamps which are on the far reaches of the city outskirts.
As GA travels through the city along the rooftops he hears a woman screaming below. Jumping down into the alley to investigate, GA sees an unfriendly face. Deadshot stands at the end of the alleyway into the city street. He is holding a tape recorder with the woman's voice on. GA fires an arrow which destroys the tape recorder.
"I know where your son is." Floyd begins. "I heard you left your precious city for a year, retrained yourself. Prove it."
Deadshot pulls out twin pistols and opens fire on GA who back flips away from the shots and lands behind a dumpster. Deadshot jumps onto the dumpster and peers over the side. There is nobody there.
About several feet above the dumpster, GA hangs upside down, his legs wrapped around the bottom of a fire escape ladder. He fires a single arrow which embeds itself into the side of the dumpster near Deadshot's feet.
"Boo." GA exclaims.
Deadshot looks down at the arrow and realises there is a timer on it.
"Oh shi-" is all Deadshot can say as the dumpster explodes. Deadshot attempts to escape the blast by leaping away but the force of the explosion bowls him over and he lands on his back in the city street. People begin screaming as they realise a hired assassin is nearby.
Deadshot leaps to his feet and walks up to a nearby car. He points his guns at the owner who complies. Deadshot climbs into the car and drives off. He hears a thump and GA jumps onto the car roof. Deadshot fires several shots up through th roof. Ga avoids all the shots except one which grazes his shoulder. GA removes his katanna blade and plunges it through the roof. The blade misses Deadshot by mere inches, embedding itself in Deadshot's seat just missing his crotch.
Deadshot breathes a quick sigh of relief, looking how close he came to losing his manhood. He takes his eyes off the road and doesn't see the oncoming lorry. GA sees the lorry and jumps off of the car as it crashes.
Deadshot's face becomes badly bruised and he cracks couple of ribs. He emerges from the car and pulls out a gun on GA. GA fires an arrow which cuts the top half of the gun off. He then punches Deadshot again and again. He rips off Deadshot's mask to reveal Floyd Lawton slowly drifting in and out of consciousness form serious injuries. Holding a regular arrow ready to fire into Lawton's head, GA is pulsating with rage.
"One question" Screams GA "Where is my son?"
Part 3 coming soon................