Hypothetical vs thread

Started by pr198349 pages
Originally posted by willRules
I can't wait. Just make sure you don't make the same mistake I did. A while back I had a storyline where I had most of the major or popular characters in the MU vs the sentinels. I was so preoccupied with making sure every character did something, all I had Sentry do was repeatedly fly through things ✅

lol, nah, that's why i'm taking so long, i want to make sure everyone has at least some proper part to play...

Originally posted by Symmetric Chaos
. . . so much . . . innuendo . . .

would you have it any other way? 😛

Originally posted by ExodusCloak
😆 Ahh...images...noises....look what you did to my mind. 🙁

BTW Nice work pr.

😮

Originally posted by pr1983
lol, nah, that's why i'm taking so long, i want to make sure everyone has at least some proper part to play...

would you have it any other way? 😛

😮

So when is part 3 coming 😛

Originally posted by Newjak
So when is part 3 coming 😛

soon dude, i promise... at the latest, it'll be tomorrow night... life slowed me down big time, but i'm back at it...

i could give you a preview if you like...

Originally posted by pr1983
soon dude, i promise... at the latest, it'll be tomorrow night... life slowed me down big time, but i'm back at it...

i could give you a preview if you like...

Thats alright I'll wait for the whole thing 😛

Originally posted by Newjak
Thats alright I'll wait for the whole thing 😛

sure... i do have the majority of it done... i'm working on a couple more individual fights (kitty v drew, etc), and then the conclusion, but thats half done too...

Originally posted by pr1983
sure... i do have the majority of it done... i'm working on a couple more individual fights (kitty v drew, etc), and then the conclusion, but thats half done too...
Sweet I cann't wait your other stuff ahs been awesome so far 😛

Originally posted by Newjak
Sweet I cann't wait your other stuff ahs been awesome so far 😛

then why the smiley?

sarcasm? 🙁

Originally posted by pr1983
then why the smiley?

sarcasm? 🙁

Maybe 😖hifty:

No I just use that smilie for everything

Sarcasm, Happy, Good Job.

With that one smilie I showcase a million emotions

😛

Originally posted by Newjak
Maybe 😖hifty:

No I just use that smilie for everything

Sarcasm, Happy, Good Job.

With that one smilie I showcase a million emotions

😛

ah, i get it...

Originally posted by pr1983
ah, i get it...
I knew you would 😛

Originally posted by Newjak
I knew you would 😛

yep, that's me...

Originally posted by pr1983
yep, that's me...
😆

You know it has been awhile I need to write another story soon 😛

Originally posted by Newjak
😆

You know it has been awhile I need to write another story soon 😛

you do that... i'm off to bed... maybe i'll work out what to write next...

Nite...

Originally posted by pr1983
you do that... i'm off to bed... maybe i'll work out what to write next...

Nite...

Cool man cya

Green Arrow runs the gauntlet

Part 3. Green Arrow vs Merlyn

After smacking around Deadshot for a little while GA finally manages to coax out a name for who hired Deadshot and Grundy and who stole Connor.

Before sinking into unconsciousness Deadshot utters one word. "Luthor."

GA approaches the skyscraper that houses the Lexcorp branch of Star City. GA fires a grappling arrow to the roof. He is about to reach the roof when a single black arrow falls from the roof edge cutting GA's line. GA begins to plummet. Merlyn stands at the top of the skyscraper with a smug look on his face.

GA is rapidly falling. "Lucky I brought a spare." He comments firing another line up where it lands next to Merlyn. GA then swings into one of the office windows, crashing through onto a conference table. Fortunately it is the middle of the night and therefore empty.

Merlyn abseils down on a line of his own through the same window. GA is ready. Firing a single arrow he cuts Merlyn's line. Merlyn manages to leap into the building, performs a forward roll and then fires several regular arrows at GA. GA jumps behind the desk as arrows whizz over the top embedding themselves in a nearby wall. GA emerges from the desk returning the onslaught.

Merlyn tilts a table on it's side using it as a barricade from GA's shots. Meanwhile he returns fire from behind the table. GA looks between Merlyn and the arrows Merlyn fired earlier that hit the wall.

Merlyn looks over the table ready to fire but is too shocked by what he sees.

GA steps on one of the arrow shafts embedded in the wall and steps off of it onto the next shaft and then the next. When GA reaches the highest arrow he pushes off of it leaping towards Merlyn. Merlyn fires a shot at GA. At the same time GA withdraws his katanna blade and cuts the arrow Merlyn fired in half. He continues his descent towards Merlyn, cutting Merlyn's bow in half.

GA stands in front of Merlyn who is unarmed, holding out his blade ready to strike. "Do it." Merlyn jeers. "I dare ya."

GA raises his sword hand ready to bring the blade down. Merlyn cringes ready for the death blow. GA hits Merlyn around the back of his head with the sword handle, knocking Merlyn out......

Lex Luthor watches this through a security camera, several floors above. Connor is strapped into a chair and Lex is suiting up into his Apokoliptian battle-suit ready for a fight.

Part 4 coming soon.............

Alright, first of all, I'm real sorry i took so long to get this up,i had a couple of issues with characterisation and such, but i do hope it's been worth the wait...

For anyone who needs to catch up:

Part 1

Part 2

Now, just to let you know, it jumps around a bit because of how many characters there are, so a second or even a third reading may be necessary to get the full story...

if it only takes you one reading, well, good for you... 😛

without further ado...

Part 3:

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"Not bad Tin Man... haven't been hit that hard in a LONG time," Cage smiled, rubbing his jaw as he crouched, leaning on one knee...

"You should know, I can hit harder... but I do not wish to hurt you any more than I have to..."

"Tough talk, and yet I’m still here," Cage answered standing up straight...

"For now," Colossus said coldly as he readied himself for the oncoming Cage...

Colossus leaned back as Cage swung, Colossus's speed barely enough to dodge or block what punches he could... Cage was no slouch himself, several times dodging punches that would have put him out for the count... Colossus feinted, dodging a left uppercut, but intentionally dropped his left, letting Cage smack him with a powerful right hook, cage smirked at first, only stopping when he realised Colossus had a grip of that same right arm... Peter twisted his arm, striking him in the chest, forcing Cage to one knee, where he was met with a thunderous knee to the jaw... Cage flew back, landing hard. He sat up, his nose gushing blood... "Son of a," he gulped, spitting blood... Colossus stood over him, fist clenched...

"We are done here, now yield, I do not wish to hurt you..."

Cage coughed up some more blood... The Russian had cracked a rib at the very least, and his jaw was most likely broken... and yet he still got to his feet...

"That all you got? My grandma hits harder than you, punk..."

"I am sorry, I truly am," were the last words Cage heard as Colossus hit him with an immense right uppercut, sending Cage flying through the air at least twenty feet until he smashed into the ground, completely knocked out...

"Why are you here?"

"I'm here to show you that what you're doing is wrong Robert... and I think you already know that don't you?"

"But this woman is a threat to the world... she needs to be stopped..."

"Stopped? She’s done what she needed to do, you don't think we are capable of taking care of her and making sure this doesn’t happen ever again?"

"I... I don't know... Tony-"

"Tony Stark is little more than a millionaire playboy with too much time on his hands... he's hardly the person I’d look to where morality is concerned..."

"Capt-"

"An outdated icon from a long dead era..."

"She has to be contained," Sentry said struggling to his feet...

"Her father is taking care of her, and until you arrived she had the finest telepaths in the world looking after her... do tell me how what we were doing was wrong, would you?"

"Too much at stake... too much at stake..." Sentry was now on his feet, his eyes giving off that familiar glow... "Get out of my head, GET. OUT. OF MY. HEAD!!!"

Outside, both women stood, determined faces staring at each other... Shadowcat. Spider-Woman. Both had seen their fair share over the years. Both more similar than they'd admit. Both ready to do what was necessary to do what they believed was the right thing to do. Spider-Woman raised her arm, and even though she'd tried this dozens of times already, it didn't stop her trying again... she got several blasts off at Shadowcat, but Pryde was ready as she dived forward phasing quickly enough to let the bolts pass through her as she rolled up onto her feet...

"You never get hit at all, do you?"

"Not really..." Kitty half smiled, half growled...

"Let's just end this," Drew said breathing hard as she leapt forward...

Their fight was almost like an elaborate ballet... both women moved fluidly, each blow measured, and yet countered with the same amount of efficiency... and although one or the other got the occasional punch or kick to it's target, the victim was quickly able to counter with a move of their own. It had come at a price though... fighting this well, for this long, was bound to take its toll... and it did eventually as kitty overextended with a right cross, which Drew easily dodged, allowing her to catch the young mutant with a high kick to the head, knocking Kitty down... Kitty groaned, Spider-Woman standing over her, ready to finish her off...

Storm was falling fast, Iron Man's stun blast incapacitating her... "Crap," Iron Man gave chase, his boots accelerating him until they were feet from the ground, but he made it, catching her just in time... he let out a sigh of relief as he lowered himself to the ground... No one dies, he thought to himself, turning to see Cap and Logan engaged in battle...

Both men stood, their bodies’ heavy, every breath a titanic effort... Cap's shield was heavy, blood splashed across the symbolic bright white star... his uniform cut across the shoulders and chest, blood drying on his skin... Logan was just as bad, the whole left side of his face cut to pieces, yet slowly healing... his torso completely exposed, his chest covered in blood from wounds that had already healed...

"Not bad Cap, but you know I’m gonna beat ya... I always could..."

"Yet you've never proved it, have you son?"

"I'm about to," Logan said, roaring as he launched himself at Cap...

Spidey dodged and weaved, swinging through the large woods that made up the rear of the Xavier Estate. Not far behind him was Beast, his agility enabling him to leap from tree to tree almost Tarzan-like.

"Can't keep up with me forever, you do know that right?"

"I don't intend to," Beast answered, snarling a little, anything to try and put Parker's concentration even slightly off. Every so often Spidey would turn in the air, firing several blasts at the X-Man, but somehow Beast was up to the task. They soon arrived at a clearing, and Parker did several somersaults through the air before landing in the centre. Beast followed, leaping from the last tree, remarkably able to make up the distance between him and the web-slinger almost instantaneously, and yet that still wasn't enough. Spider-Man leapt, twisting in the air over Beast's head, coming down behind him, his webs already wrapping Beast tightly and securely.

"Tsk tsk... all that work, and for what? To end up lookin' like Frodo..."

Beast growled as he struggled, but the webbing was too tight for him to get any leverage...

"What, not even a 'this isn't over?' for shame..."

"You do realise that this webbing won't hold me for long, don't you?"

"Of course, I do, but I’ll bet it's long enough for us Avengers to do what we do... speakin of which, I gotta be goin..." Spidey grinned through his mask as he headed back toward the fight...

Cap ducked and rolled, coming up behind Logan as he landed, and as both men turned to face each other, Logan thrust with his right, but Rogers sidestepped, bringing the shield up, the front smashing into Wolverine's face... Logan swung with his left, but Cap ducked, coming back at Logan with a right cross...

Logan was too quick though, ducking and slashing at Cap's torso, catching him just above the kidneys, and although Cap's reflexes were enough to stop himself being impaled, he was left with a pretty nasty flesh wound... Logan went for the kill, his rage taking over him, but Cap was quick enough to react, bringing the edge of the shield across in a hard swing, catching Logan on the side of the face, sending him sprawling... it was mere seconds before Logan was back on his feet, and Cap could see in his eyes the animalistic rage that was threatening to take full control...

Blood pouring from his wound, Cap didn't flinch; he stood tall, even though it hurt like hell...

"Not bad, Soldier..."

"Likewise... but you know its gonna take a lot more than a shield to take me down, don't ya?"

"You really don't think I’m THAT stupid, do you?"

"Well Rogers, for a-" he interrupted himself, screaming in pain as the repulsor blast knocked him across the lawn... "Son of a," Logan groaned as he tried to push himself up...

"Intensify replusor blast output by fifteen percent," Stark said calmly as he hit Logan with another blast...

Logan lay almost comatose on the ground, his skin on fire...

"That takes care of that... you ok Captain?"

"Yes, but I’m not the one you should be worrying about," he said nodding past Tony... as soon as he turned, he saw what Cap had been looking at... it was Colossus, barrelling toward him like an express train...

The first blast hit Colossus' shoulder, but it didn't slow him down nearly enough... "Intensify replusor blast output by twenty percent," he said, almost starting to panic... the blast hit colossus, and although it hurt, it didn't stop the Russian giant, who was too angry to feel the pain, even with the smell of burning metal coming from his chest... cap's shield was next, and it literally bounced of Colossus' head, having almost no effect...

"Tony?"

"Just a sec, I- good god..." was all he could muster as the Sentry flew past at breakneck speed, grabbing Colossus and heading up into the air...

Sentry held Colossus tight as they flew, already past the speed of sound and accelerating...

"Get off of me," Colossus roared, his fists pounding Sentry's face, but to little effect.

"You really should stop that, I’m trying to fly here..."

Peter looked around; they were already outside of New York, heading out over the ocean...

to be concluded...

Part 4:

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"This is your stop Avenger," Peter growled, pressing his hands across Sentry's face, covering his eyes and pulling his head... this forced Sentry to panic, and soon he was diving toward the ocean with Colossus in his grasp...

They hit the water with such impact that tidal waves sprung up, lasting for miles in every direction... and yet Colossus was still conscious, trying to punch the Sentry under the water... Reynolds was too strong though, escaping the Russian’s grasp and heading to the surface... Colossus reverted to his human form to stop himself sinking, and headed after him... as he reached the surface, he saw Sentry hovering just out of reach...

"I have heard about you, X-Man... I know you are safe in your armoured form, even at the bottom of the Ocean... New York is about twenty miles that way," he said, pointing west... "I suggest you start walking..." he added as he moved away, leaving Colossus' field of view in seconds...

Iceman was down, Wasp never letting up her assault... "You don't attack him, you don't get to touch him," she roared as energy flowed from her like a burst dam... Iceman though, had been in tougher situations than this. He waved his hand, a massive ice shield appearing out of nowhere to block each blast The Wasp tried to hit him with...

"You are REALLY annoying, you know that?"

"Doesn't mean I can't take you down Ice-boy"

Iceman smirked... "Takes more than that Waspy," he said winking at her... she screamed as she fell, crashing into the ground... "I've dropped your body temperature just enough to knock you out... there's no brain damage though, I heated you right back up... you won't feel very well once you wake up though..." He wrapped her in a large ball of ice before he turned and headed back into the fray, only for him to be shattered by a red and blue shield...

"Son, you really need to learn how to treat a lady..." if you didn't know him better, you'd think Cap was smirking... but not him, he was deadly serious...

"I'm just glad you can reform that body of yours, I have no intention of killing anyone to complete this mission..."

Logan was slowly healing, trying to get back to his feet not far from where Captain America and Iron Man now stood... they were soon joined by Spider-Man...

"That guy doesn't know when to quit does he?" Spidey joked...

"Apparently not... Intensify repulsor blast te-" was all Iron man could manage before the blast hit him... it was Cyclops, back in the fight...

"Doesn't anyone get to finish their sentences around here?" Spider-Man yelled, leaping sideways to dodge the spread of blasts, as did Captain America as Tony slowly got back to his feet...

"Stay down," Cyclops' almost ordered Tony, firing again... This blast didn't reach its target however, Iron Man's force shield now in place...

"I thought you were better than that Cyclops," Stark said preparing to return fire...

"I am," Cyclops replied as he tapped his visor again, but this time the blast flew past Stark, not even close enough to hit his shield...

"Looks like you spoke too soon," Stark said almost smugly... that smugness disappeared seconds later, as Tony arched his back, pain coursing through him... he looked down, seeing the figure of Kitty Pryde diving through him, and that was followed by the feeling of his suit going completely haywire...

"Dammit..." he said falling to his knees, his last action before losing all power turning to see Spider-Woman on the ground, and it was then that he realised that Cyclops hadn't actually been aiming for him...

Cap and Spidey were all that was left, although Yellowjacket was slowly, ever so gingerly getting to his feet...

The X-Men weren't in much better condition, Cyclops and Shadowcat still standing, ready to take them on, Wolverine about half-healed, but eager to get involved again...

"You still want to do this Cyclops? There has to be another way..." Cap asked, half in vain, his shield raised...

"You can leave," Kitty barked at Cap, her fists clenched...

"Please, don't make us do this..." Spider-Man pleaded...

"You heard her," Cyclops calmly answered, as ready as the others to do this...

"NO!" they all looked up to see the Sentry hovering over them... "Magneto is gone... we have no reason to stay..."

"He's right you know," came the reply, it was Professor Xavier, flanked by Emma as he moved across the lawn...

Cap sighed, his body relaxing... "Alright," Cap continued, looking around watching the other Avengers slowly reforming the group... "Sentry, get the others... we’re leaving," he ordered, turning to Xavier... "We might have been wrong to come here Xavier, but I can tell you one thing: If and when Magneto fails to help Wanda, the blood spilled afterward will be on your hands," his finger pointed squarely at the Professor...

Xavier was about to reply, but Cap's back was already turned as he headed toward the Quinjet parked nearby...

"We need to regroup if we're gonna go after Magneto..."

"No, Scott... Erik will return when he needs our help. Until then," he sighed, "let's try not to have any more fights on our doorstep."

Scott nodded as the Professor moved away, but Emma stayed, leaning in close to Scott... "We have a problem... Scott... Sentry... there's something very wrong with his mind..."

"Like before?"

"No... It’s... it's much, much worse..."

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Ok, so... opinions, positive and negative, all welcome... if you have the patience to read through all that, that is... 😛

I'm not sure I understand why they left. However I do like the cliffhanger at the end.

wow fantastic, you had me hooked and what a great ending, I didn't feel any bias one way or the other ✅

Originally posted by Symmetric Chaos
I'm not sure I understand why they left. However I do like the cliffhanger at the end.

lol, i did end it kind of abruptly, i guess i just wanted to get it done as quickly as possible...

Originally posted by willRules
wow fantastic, you had me hooked and what a great ending, I didn't feel any bias one way or the other ✅

i was finding it hard not to lean one way or the other, so i'm glad you lked it...