Originally posted by willRules
I love the mocking 😂
Thanks.
To anyone who doesn't get it, I wrote out the final scene from 'Karate Kid III' with Val Armorr and Juggernaut taking the places of Daniel LaRusso and Mike Barnes.
BTW, I despised 'Civil War,' but your story is great and you're a very good writer. I especially like how you're writing Superman. So far he seems to be the only one acting like a hero.
Silver Surfer vs Doomsday
A brilliant streak of energy is seen crossing the cosmos. It flies through asteroids, suns, and black holes without pause. For at the source of this beam of energy is the divine Silver Surfer, holder of the Power Cosmic. In his travels as the Herald of Galactus he has seen many things throughout creation. On this day though he shall meet something new, something raw.
The Surfer comes to a planet that is both devoid of life and full of it's energy. A perfect choice for his lord to devour. As he begins to summon Galactus though he picks up on something coming from the planet. It is a faint distress signal coming from the planets surface.
Norrin Radd decides to investigate further. He flies down beneath the white clouds toward the SOS. He sees a very large city in the distance. As he flies through it though he notices that it truly is abandoned. He thinks this odd cause it boasts remarkably modern technology. Of course the Surfer noticed it possessed no space travel capabilities. Which makes sense considering the planets size and amazing amount of resources.
Norrin finally reaches the site from which the signal was coming from. His Silver skin reflects the suns rays from his body illuminating the dark building he was coming upon. He brings his board to a foot from the ground. He steps from it while it continues to hover.
He walks inside to find bones and dust littering the ground. It appears this was some kind of fort, and whatever happened here these people tried to take refuge here from it.
He quickly finds the device sending forth the distorted message. He lifts his hand and the semi broken apparatus becomes whole again and the message can be heard aloud.
"Data Log: The 7th cycle of our hero the Messiarian Lord
Help we are the citizens of the Kulyn Imperial Kingdom. We have come under siege. By some force we can not stop. It has torn through our armies and destroyed our cities. we are no match for it. Please in the name of all that is good can someone help us. Save of from this Doomsday"
It is at that moment Norrin senses another being around him. Eyes of pure hatred open, and before the Surfer can react he has been tossed through the wall, and the entire building collapses on him.
Doomsday is a freak of nature, a true monster. One that can not be reasoned with, one that can not be dealt with. The heroes of Earth new the dire beasts only way of being stopped was to be removed from the planet. So they did managing to get him on a ship they blasted him off into the stars. They had set coordinates for a black hole hoping it would be the final cell of this creature.
Things very rarely go as plan though as a solar storm fried the ships navigational computers. Thus it simply blasted forward until it ran out of fuel. It drifted towards the gravity of the nearest large mass. It happened to be the planet of Nurna. The people have had many visitors to their planet over the years so when the ship landed a welcoming party was ready.
The only problem was that the being inside the ship wasn't much to welcome. As soon as Doomsday had busted out of the ship, he begin to slaughter anything and everything in his path. He didn't sleep, eat, or rest until every living thing had perished from this soil.
With his deed done though Doomsday soon came to realize that he was still trapped on this deserted planet. Unable to get away he did the only thing he could. He waited by the signal beacon, waiting for the day someone would come to the rescue. Seconds, minutes, hours, days. months, years, decades he doesn't know how long he waited but one day his salvation finally came.
He was hiding in the shadows when the Silver man came. He had left his ship outside, and this was Doomsday's chance. He struck the being, and crumbled the building on him.
Then he rushed and jumped on the Alien Board. He pushed his knuckles into hoping to cause it to move forward. No matter how hard Doomsday tried though it wouldn't budge.
"My board only answers to me fiend." Norrin says. Brushing the rubble off of him. Doomsday looks back at him, as the Surfer begins to raise a hand.
Suddenly the board flies out from underneath Doomsday's feet causing him to fall and land on his back. As the board glides over besides the Silver Surfer steps on it. He then begins to circle around Doomsday as he gets up.
Stopping just above head level with Doomsday, he kneels on one knee towards the end of his board. "You are a monster that has killed many," Surfer tells the creature.
Doomsday opens his mouth though and speaks. The sounds coming out seems hollow and hoarse. Barren of any emotion or feelings. "I was made this way Silver Surfer, Herald of Galactus. What about you though, you who lead the devourer to destroy billions. Your hands are more tainted with blood then mine ever could be."
Norrin Radd turns his head slightly from the creature closing his eyes. "Mine is necessary for the cosmic balance. The will of Galactus is beyond our comprehensions of morals."
Doomsday does not reply, this was the opportunity he had been waiting for. With the Surfer distracted he raises his massive arms up he strikes the board the Surfer was standing on. The resulting impact hurdles the herald backwards. He reaches out grabbing the board at the last second and places it back under his feet.
Doomsday is charging but the Surfer raises but one hand. With that one hand though he could destroy entire worlds, as a bolt of brilliant pure energy rips through the air. It hits Doomsday square in the chest causing him to be lifted from his feet and thrown into a nearby building. The Surfer brings his hand to rest beside him as the wielder of the power cosmic shines with energy.
Doomsday busts forth from the rubble sending debris flying everywhere. His anger is boundless. "You shall be destroyed Surfer. I shall take your life and then use your power to free myself. I am a monster and one that shall not be stopped." He begins to charge
The Surfer simply closes his eyes and speaks, "If what you say is true then you are a monster, but not the most terrible kind. You were born this way. It was not your choice."
Suddenly the Surfer's eyes open and blue energy radiates from them consuming Doomsday in it.
"I shall give you that choice though. You shall be free from your bonds, cause while my hands may never be cleansed of my actions I can still offer you some reprieve from yours."
Slowly the energy begins to subside, and where once stood the nightmarish brute, a human being collapses on his knees.
"I have altered your DNA to become that creature which has the most choice in life. I have changed you into a human being. Take this gift given from my curse. Use it to finally choose what you want to be, a hero or a monster. Now leave this place and start your new life."
With a wave of the Surfer's hand Doomsday is transported to New York City on Earth. He is now fully clothed and has a wad of money in his pocket. He looks to the crowd then looks to the sky. Normally this is where he would try to kill everyone. On this day though he decides he will go sit in the park and watch the birds fly.
Originally posted by Newjak
Silver Surfer vs DoomsdayA brilliant streak of energy is seen crossing the cosmos. It flies through asteroids, suns, and black holes without pause. For at the source of this beam of energy is the divine Silver Surfer, holder of the Power Cosmic. In his travels as the Herald of Galactus he has seen many things throughout creation. On this day though he shall meet something new, something raw.
The Surfer comes to a planet that is both devoid of life and full of it's energy. A perfect choice for his lord to devour. As he begins to summon Galactus though he picks up on something coming from the planet. It is a faint distress signal coming from the planets surface.
Norrin Radd decides to investigate further. He flies down beneath the white clouds toward the SOS. He sees a very large city in the distance. As he flies through it though he notices that it truly is abandoned. He thinks this odd cause it boasts remarkably modern technology. Of course the Surfer noticed it possessed no space travel capabilities. Which makes sense considering the planets size and amazing amount of resources.
Norrin finally reaches the site from which the signal was coming from. His Silver skin reflects the suns rays from his body illuminating the dark building he was coming upon. He brings his board to a foot from the ground. He steps from it while it continues to hover.
He walks inside to find bones and dust littering the ground. It appears this was some kind of fort, and whatever happened here these people tried to take refuge here from it.
He quickly finds the device sending forth the distorted message. He lifts his hand and the semi broken apparatus becomes whole again and the message can be heard aloud.
"Data Log: The 7th cycle of our hero the Messiarian Lord
Help we are the citizens of the Kulyn Imperial Kingdom. We have come under siege. By some force we can not stop. It has torn through our armies and destroyed our cities. we are no match for it. Please in the name of all that is good can someone help us. Save of from this Doomsday"
It is at that moment Norrin senses another being around him. Eyes of pure hatred open, and before the Surfer can react he has been tossed through the wall, and the entire building collapses on him.
Doomsday is a freak of nature, a true monster. One that can not be reasoned with, one that can not be dealt with. The heroes of Earth new the dire beasts only way of being stopped was to be removed from the planet. So they did managing to get him on a ship they blasted him off into the stars. They had set coordinates for a black hole hoping it would be the final cell of this creature.
Things very rarely go as plan though as a solar storm fried the ships navigational computers. Thus it simply blasted forward until it ran out of fuel. It drifted towards the gravity of the nearest large mass. It happened to be the planet of Nurna. The people have had many visitors to their planet over the years so when the ship landed a welcoming party was ready.
The only problem was that the being inside the ship wasn't much to welcome. As soon as Doomsday had busted out of the ship, he begin to slaughter anything and everything in his path. He didn't sleep, eat, or rest until every living thing had perished from this soil.
With his deed done though Doomsday soon came to realize that he was still trapped on this deserted planet. Unable to get away he did the only thing he could. He waited by the signal beacon, waiting for the day someone would come to the rescue. Seconds, minutes, hours, days. months, years, decades he doesn't know how long he waited but one day his salvation finally came.
He was hiding in the shadows when the Silver man came. He had left his ship outside, and this was Doomsday's chance. He struck the being, and crumbled the building on him.
Then he rushed and jumped on the Alien Board. He pushed his knuckles into hoping to cause it to move forward. No matter how hard Doomsday tried though it wouldn't budge.
"My board only answers to me fiend." Norrin says. Brushing the rubble off of him. Doomsday looks back at him, as the Surfer begins to raise a hand.
Suddenly the board flies out from underneath Doomsday's feet causing him to fall and land on his back. As the board glides over besides the Silver Surfer steps on it. He then begins to circle around Doomsday as he gets up.
Stopping just above head level with Doomsday, he kneels on one knee towards the end of his board. "You are a monster that has killed many," Surfer tells the creature.
Doomsday opens his mouth though and speaks. The sounds coming out seems hollow and hoarse. Barren of any emotion or feelings. "I was made this way Silver Surfer, Herald of Galactus. What about you though, you who lead the devourer to destroy billions. Your hands are more tainted with blood then mine ever could be."
Norrin Radd turns his head slightly from the creature closing his eyes. "Mine is necessary for the cosmic balance. The will of Galactus is beyond our comprehensions of morals."
Doomsday does not reply, this was the opportunity he had been waiting for. With the Surfer distracted he raises his massive arms up he strikes the board the Surfer was standing on. The resulting impact hurdles the herald backwards. He reaches out grabbing the board at the last second and places it back under his feet.
Doomsday is charging but the Surfer raises but one hand. With that one hand though he could destroy entire worlds, as a bolt of brilliant pure energy rips through the air. It hits Doomsday square in the chest causing him to be lifted from his feet and thrown into a nearby building. The Surfer brings his hand to rest beside him as the wielder of the power cosmic shines with energy.
Doomsday busts forth from the rubble sending debris flying everywhere. His anger is boundless. "You shall be destroyed Surfer. I shall take your life and then use your power to free myself. I am a monster and one that shall not be stopped." He begins to charge
The Surfer simply closes his eyes and speaks, "If what you say is true then you are a monster, but not the most terrible kind. You were born this way. It was not your choice."
Suddenly the Surfer's eyes open and blue energy radiates from them consuming Doomsday in it.
"I shall give you that choice though. You shall be free from your bonds, cause while my hands may never be cleansed of my actions I can still offer you some reprieve from yours."
Slowly the energy begins to subside, and where once stood the nightmarish brute, a human being collapses on his knees.
"I have altered your DNA to become that creature which has the most choice in life. I have changed you into a human being. Take this gift given from my curse. Use it to finally choose what you want to be, a hero or a monster. Now leave this place and start your new life."
With a wave of the Surfer's hand Doomsday is transported to New York City on Earth. He is now fully clothed and has a wad of money in his pocket. He looks to the crowd then looks to the sky. Normally this is where he would try to kill everyone. On this day though he decides he will go sit in the park and watch the birds fly.
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very nice...
Originally posted by chilled monkey
Thanks.To anyone who doesn't get it, I wrote out the final scene from 'Karate Kid III' with Val Armorr and Juggernaut taking the places of Daniel LaRusso and Mike Barnes.
BTW, I despised 'Civil War,' but your story is great and you're a very good writer. I especially like how you're writing Superman. So far he seems to be the only one acting like a hero.
Cheers very much Dude, I'm glad people like it 😄 Superman makes an extremely important appearence at the finale of my story to make up for his overall indecisiveness ✅
Feel free to post more stories any time if you want ✅
Originally posted by Newjak
Doomsday opens his mouth though and speaks. The sounds coming out seems hollow and hoarse. Barren of any emotion or feelings. "I was made this way Silver Surfer, Herald of Galactus. What about you though, you who lead the devourer to destroy billions. Your hands are more tainted with blood then mine ever could be."
This description is brilliant ✅
DC Civil War
PART 8 Black Adam vs the anti-reg heroes
The JLA watchtower explodes. Huge chunks of debris and machinery float around in space. Inside a gigantic green bubble Hal Jordan and Hawkman nurse their injuries. Green Arrow escaped at the last moment via the teleporter.....
A Waynetech warehouse at an undisclosed location;
"We need to leave for Themyscira." Wonder Woman announces to the anti-reg heroes as Green Arrow returns from destroying the watchtower.
Batman intervenes. "I agree. Not only will Themyscira offer us security from outside forces but the Amazons could prove invaluable to our survival should we come under another devastating attack from pro-registration forces."
The warehouse doors explode. Silhouetted in the entrance Black Adam, The Wizard, Deadshot, Poison Ivy, Solomon Grundy and Merlyn.
Black Adam smiles. "By the authority of the U.N and the superhuman registration task-force represented by us, you are under arrest."
Black Adam flies towards Wonder Woman at super speeds but before he can reach her, Captain Marvel tackles him, flying them both through a nearby wall. They fly up hundreds of feet into the air. Adam punches Marvel across the face again and again causing the hero to spit blood. Marvel grabs Adam's fist and returns the onslaught.
Deadshot begins firing into the crowd of heroes. Bullets rip into Robin's cape as he leaps behind a pile of crates. Nightwing steps forward, throwing a club but Deadshot shoots it out of the air. A bullet clips Nightwing's shoulder. Wondergirl flies forward to help but is sent flying by one of the Wizard's localised tornadoes. The wizard then fires lightning at Black Canary who avoids the blast at the last possible moment. Speedy knocks the wizard out with several arrows to the back that cause the villain to lose too much blood.
Solomon Grundy grabs hold of Batman's cape and swings him around into Aquaman, bowling them over. Connor Hawke fires an arrow that hits Grundy in the eye, enraging the monster who punches Connor, shattering his ribs.
Black Adam bursts in through the ceiling, pushing Captain Marvel into the ground until Adam is taken down by one of Black Canary's screams.
Poison Ivy commands huge monstrous plants to attack Red Arrow. Roy is saved from a gruesome death by Plastic man outstretching and pulling Roy out the way. Merlyn and GA jump around the warehouse rafters firing arrows at one another. Equally skilled there appears to be no victor until Dr Fate freezes Merlyn with a spell and Wonder Woman throws Solomon grundy at him, removing them from the battle.
Poison Ivy has a large acidic plant looming over the injured Nightwing, ready to strike when Hawkgirl flies forward, destroying the plant with a spear. Blue Beetle runs forward gut punching Poison Ivy.
"THIS ONE'S FOR MICHAEL!!!" He roars, breaking Ivy's jaw in half with an uppercut punch.
Wonder Woman, Plastic man and Green Arrow close in on Deadshot who surrenders. Wonder Woman crushes his weapons and Batman removes Deadshot's mask.
"Send this message to your pro-registration paymasters. We are fed up. We don't want to fight our friends, we don't want to keep running from the government but you've forced our hand. We demand that they stop sending cowards and villains after us. We shall be waiting on Themyscira island. They want us? They're going to have to come and get us."
Meanwhile, several star systems away from Earth, Superman flies at breakneck speed towards his adopted planet......he hopes he can arrive in time before the death toll rises any higher......
PART 9/THE FINALE (Everyone Anti-Reg, Amazons and ???? vs Everyone Pro-Reg and ?????) coming soon.....
Juggernaut vs Wonder Woman Pt1.
Wonder Woman is seen flying over New York City on patrol. The citizens cheer her, as she zooms over head like a rocket. She is their protector this day, and she has already saved ten old people, 5 kids, and one cat stuck in a tree. So thankfully it hasn't been stressful.
That would change quickly though as police sirens could be heard in he distance. Wonder Woman sped to the scene as fast as she could. When she arrived she found that the disturbance was taking place inside of a bar. There was broken glass fro ma busted window and a couple of big burly men being carried away on stretchers. Thankfully they were all still alive.
Landing by the Police Officer in charge she asked, "What is happening?"
"Well we got a call about a disturbance from Old Joe's here. When we arrived these two men were outside on the ground crying. Everyone had vacated the bar, and they kept saying that it was the work of some super strong guy."
Wonder Woman replies, "Do not worry I shall take of this." She then sets out towards the bar entrance. She opens the door and walks into the dark dimly lit joint.
In the distance she sees a man clad in red. A metal dome is on his back as he hoists a drink to his lips.
Dianna: "You there, you have innocent people in danger and now you are coming with me"
Cain: "Doll I don't think you want to pick a fight with me."
Dianna: "Yes I do, you just hurt two men out there."
Cain: "They had it coming to them. They kept saying thsi was their stool. Bah so hen I told them to go roll in some they got a little angry and decided to pick a fight."
Dianna: "I may not always say violence isn't the answer, but those were normal men you could have killed them"
Cain: "Please I wasn't going to kill them. I barely tapped them as it is."
Wonder Woman by now hs crossed the room and is standing right behind Cain. as she puts a hand on his shoulder she remarks, "That doesn't change anything you are coming with me."
"Bad move toots." With that the Juggernaut raises up pushing Dianna's hand away. This sends her flying back through a couple of tables.
"You know what big man I've been looking for a fight all day, and you just became numero uno on my list. By Zeus you shall fall." The Amazon jumps into the air clenching her fists high. She brings them down on top of Cain's head. His feet go straight into the ground. He is no staring eye level at her.
The behemoth grabs a hold of Wonder Woman's arms, "I always heard you hit like a girl, this just proves it." Then he unleashes with a mighty head butt that causes her to go flying outside of the bar. She lands by the feet of the Police Officer.
"Ah Wonder Woman I've got some news for ya. Apparently the bar owner said that the men struck Mr. Marko first, and that he was defending himself. He even paid the bar tender for damages. So as long as he peacefully leaves he can go."
"You've got to be kidding me, by Hera he hurt those men badly. I can not believe you are gonna sit here and allow this?"
The Policeman looks down, "Sorry but that is the law."
"Law or no law he is not getting away with this."
She gets up and this time begins to stomp towards the bar. She is not happy.
Upon seeing her re-enter Cain let's lose a little remark, "So back for more Sugar, or can I finally go away." She continues to walk.
"I guess not, oh well I've been needing a good fight myself."
He brings his fist back and let's lose a punch. One that Dianna easily avoids. She then wraps her arms around him and using his momentum against him tosses him into the jukebox.
"What's the matter I thought I hit like a girl," she says pouting and taunting Cain.
Cain gets up a little mad from this moment, "Keep on talkin you cow, nothing you can do will hurt me." With that Cain stomps the ground causing the building floor to uplift sending a shock wave towards Dianna. Dianna is quick though and takes to air over the attack. She flies right into Cain knocking him on his back.
Hovering in the air she continues to tease the Juggernaut. "What's the matter lil Juggy fall on his back and can't get up."
Cain is very angry now and slams his hands together causing another shockwave this time one she can not avoid. She is sent backwards hitting the roof before falling on the ground.
"What's the matter little miss princess break a nail," Cains exclaims as he starts to get back up.
Wonder Woman charges Cain and lands a mighty blow on him. "I've known fairies manlier than you."
Cain unfazed returns a blow of his own, "I've seen demons with better looks than you darlin."
Dianna rolls with the blow coming in with an uppercut, "Have you looked in a mirror lately, oh wait I they all break before ya can."
They continue trading blows like this for an extended period of time.
"Ogre"
"Babblin Bimbo"
"Who you callin a Bimbo Donkey"
"I may be an ass but I least I don't look like one"
"No but you sure smell like one"
Just then the floor gives out from underneath them, and they both in the basement right on top of eacthother.
"Look what you did you crazy broad."
Just then Wonder Woman plants big wet one on Cain. "Oh shut up you doofus."
The entire building can be seen shaking from the outside as everyone stands on. Hours have passed and no one has the faintest idea what is going. "Hey go in there and make sure they aren't gonnabring my place down."
"No offense sure but screw that."
It's three weeks later and Cain Marko is standing in front a mirror getting dressed to go over to his friend Black Tom's place for a party. He is talking on the phone to him.
"Yeah man got some serious action not to long ago"
"Yeah man don't worry unlimited stamina I'm not worn out for this party."
"Yeah all the gals do like that part a lot. Don't worry I'll bring some beer."
"No, no I don't care if it isn't BYOB I have the money for it. Hold on a sec I got a call on the other line."
"Hello this the one and only Cain Marko."
"Yeah this is Dianna from three weeks ago."
"Oh well if it isn't the sugar doll. Coming back for some more cause there is this sweet party..."
"Cain I'm pregnant."
The phone hits the floor as Cain gets wide eyes in the mirror.
DC Civil War
PART 9/THE FINALE Everyone Anti-Reg, Amazons and ???? vs Everyone Pro-Reg and ?????
On Themyscira island the anti-registrion heroes are gathered. On the coastline they look over the ocean towards the oncoming pro-registration forces. Through his binoculars, Batman sees a worrying sight...
"Oh no. They've got OMACs with them. I thought they were scrapped after my initiative that Maxwell Lord stole from me."
"Clearly the government knew otherwise." Wonder Woman, the leader of the anti- registration group announces. "But we have some tricks up our sleeves, don't we Arthur?"
Aquaman smiles. He sends out a telepathic signal. "Lets take these guys down."
As the pro-registration heroes fly towards the heroes they are distracted by movement in the nearby water, below. They are about to reach the heroes on Themyscira when some of the OMACs do not react in time to avoid the tentacles of a gigantic squid that drags them into the water. A tentacle rips several OMACs in half and another throws a shipwreck from the ocean floor, which crashes into more OMACs.....
The pro-registration heroes arrive and descend upon the ani-registration heroes. John Stewart is about to crush the majority of the heroes under giant green hammer but before he can attack, a large battalion of Amazons emerge from nearby temple roofs and open fire on the GL, forcing himself to recoil, erecting a huge shield.
The Flash, who ran across the water, reaches the anti-reg group and punches Wondergirl into a wall. Before she can recover, he picks her up and throws her into Captain Marvel. High above the huge battle, Wonder Woman and Supergirl fly right at each other. They punch each other simultaneously and the shock wave generated, knocks over several combatants below. Both women are knocked back by the force of the hit. Diana plummets through the roof of a temple. Kara is knocked back into a nearby cliff.
Martian Manhunter and Miss Martian descend towards Batman and approach him.
"You can't defeat me telepathically." Batman states, tapping his cowl.
"We can overcome any gadgets you've installed" Miss Martian giggles.
"Not before you can overcome fire." Batman announces as Artemis attacks the Martian duo from behind with a flame thrower.
Blue Beetle pilots his flying bug, ploughing through OMACs in flight. He crashes into Hawkman who, on the windscreen, attempts to destroy the vehicle with his mace. Ted Kord carries on flying, crashing through a few temples until Hawkman falls off.
Hawkgirl is taken down by several OMAC blasts. Zatanna turns Dr Fate into a rabbit but his last spell mutes her, rendering her ineffective for the battle. Black Lightining attacks Aquaman from behind, causing severe burns with his powers but is taken down by a punch from Wondergirl.
Robin throws a batarang that the Flash dodges easily. However the explosion nearly hits some Amazons until Flash removes them from harms way. Distracted, Flash is then taken down by one of Robin's kicks to the back of the head. Blue Beetle is taking down many of the OMACs in his bug until Kyle Rayner and Guy Gardner begin to destroy the vehicle with some well aimed blasts. The burning wreckage of the bug crashes into Kyle, pinning him to a pillar. Steel runs to his aid but is taken down by Batman with tazer. Captain Marvel and Captain Atom are fighting a battle that neither can win, equally trading punches and throws, until Guy gardner hits Marvel from behind with a powerful green machine gun construct. Plastic Man wraps an arm around Guy and swings him into OMACs.
Green Arrow, amongst the havoc, notices Hal Jordan. Red Arrow and Speedy join him in firing tens of Arrows in Hal's chest, Hal is unaffected thanks to his personal force field. Hal fighting back the tears knocks them all down with a large sweeping green blast. Hal is then hit from behind by one of Black Canary's screams.
In the center of the battle Wonder Woman punches Supergirl. Supergirl responds with heat vision but Wonder Woman blocks with her bracelets. She then punches Supergirl again and again and again. She raises her fist but someone grabs her wrist.
Superman floats slightly off the ground in the middle of the battlefield. All the fighting stops. Batman looks up from throttling Black Lightning. John Stewart looks up after pinning Aquaman and Artemis under a huge green boulder.
"Look at what you've reduced yourself to." Superman shouts. "It's barbaric."
He pauses.
"The registration act is an undeniable necessity. However the actions of the two groups today suggest that neither of you are qualified or worthy enough to organise the handling of secret identities. Therefore, I, who remained above the battle will hold this information. All and every change will be passed through me.
And hopefully this will never occur again."
The heroes of both sides recognise they are not worthy of the title "hero" friendships are slowly rebuilt and trust is slowly regained but damage has been already inflicted.....
Epilogue:
Over the site of the "Outsiders incident" A lone figure in a radioactive containment suit searches amongst the rubble and dust. Under some charred remains he finds a slightly damaged piece of paper with nuclear launch codes on it. He contacts a "Mr Luthor" to announce a successful find.....
Originally posted by willRulesnice.....especially the epilouge.
DC Civil War
PART 9/THE FINALE Everyone Anti-Reg, Amazons and ???? vs Everyone Pro-Reg and ?????On Themyscira island the anti-registrion heroes are gathered. On the coastline they look over the ocean towards the oncoming pro-registration forces. Through his binoculars, Batman sees a worrying sight...
"Oh no. They've got OMACs with them. I thought they were scrapped after my initiative that Maxwell Lord stole from me."
"Clearly the government knew otherwise." Wonder Woman, the leader of the anti- registration group announces. "But we have some tricks up our sleeves, don't we Arthur?"Aquaman smiles. He sends out a telepathic signal. "Lets take these guys down."
As the pro-registration heroes fly towards the heroes they are distracted by movement in the nearby water, below. They are about to reach the heroes on Themyscira when some of the OMACs do not react in time to avoid the tentacles of a gigantic squid that drags them into the water. A tentacle rips several OMACs in half and another throws a shipwreck from the ocean floor, which crashes into more OMACs.....
The pro-registration heroes arrive and descend upon the ani-registration heroes. John Stewart is about to crush the majority of the heroes under giant green hammer but before he can attack, a large battalion of Amazons emerge from nearby temple roofs and open fire on the GL, forcing himself to recoil, erecting a huge shield.
The Flash, who ran across the water, reaches the anti-reg group and punches Wondergirl into a wall. Before she can recover, he picks her up and throws her into Captain Marvel. High above the huge battle, Wonder Woman and Supergirl fly right at each other. They punch each other simultaneously and the shock wave generated, knocks over several combatants below. Both women are knocked back by the force of the hit. Diana plummets through the roof of a temple. Kara is knocked back into a nearby cliff.
Martian Manhunter and Miss Martian descend towards Batman and approach him.
"You can't defeat me telepathically." Batman states, tapping his cowl.
"We can overcome any gadgets you've installed" Miss Martian giggles.
"Not before you can overcome fire." Batman announces as Artemis attacks the Martian duo from behind with a flame thrower.Blue Beetle pilots his flying bug, ploughing through OMACs in flight. He crashes into Hawkman who, on the windscreen, attempts to destroy the vehicle with his mace. Ted Kord carries on flying, crashing through a few temples until Hawkman falls off.
Hawkgirl is taken down by several OMAC blasts. Zatanna turns Dr Fate into a rabbit but his last spell mutes her, rendering her ineffective for the battle. Black Lightining attacks Aquaman from behind, causing severe burns with his powers but is taken down by a punch from Wondergirl.
Robin throws a batarang that the Flash dodges easily. However the explosion nearly hits some Amazons until Flash removes them from harms way. Distracted, Flash is then taken down by one of Robin's kicks to the back of the head. Blue Beetle is taking down many of the OMACs in his bug until Kyle Rayner and Guy Gardner begin to destroy the vehicle with some well aimed blasts. The burning wreckage of the bug crashes into Kyle, pinning him to a pillar. Steel runs to his aid but is taken down by Batman with tazer. Captain Marvel and Captain Atom are fighting a battle that neither can win, equally trading punches and throws, until Guy gardner hits Marvel from behind with a powerful green machine gun construct. Plastic Man wraps an arm around Guy and swings him into OMACs.
Green Arrow, amongst the havoc, notices Hal Jordan. Red Arrow and Speedy join him in firing tens of Arrows in Hal's chest, Hal is unaffected thanks to his personal force field. Hal fighting back the tears knocks them all down with a large sweeping green blast. Hal is then hit from behind by one of Black Canary's screams.
In the center of the battle Wonder Woman punches Supergirl. Supergirl responds with heat vision but Wonder Woman blocks with her bracelets. She then punches Supergirl again and again and again. She raises her fist but someone grabs her wrist.
Superman floats slightly off the ground in the middle of the battlefield. All the fighting stops. Batman looks up from throttling Black Lightning. John Stewart looks up after pinning Aquaman and Artemis under a huge green boulder.
"Look at what you've reduced yourself to." Superman shouts. "It's barbaric."
He pauses.
"The registration act is an undeniable necessity. However the actions of the two groups today suggest that neither of you are qualified or worthy enough to organise the handling of secret identities. Therefore, I, who remained above the battle will hold this information. All and every change will be passed through me.
And hopefully this will never occur again."
The heroes of both sides recognise they are not worthy of the title "hero" friendships are slowly rebuilt and trust is slowly regained but damage has been already inflicted.....
Epilogue:
Over the site of the "Outsiders incident" A lone figure in a radioactive containment suit searches amongst the rubble and dust. Under some charred remains he finds a slightly damaged piece of paper with nuclear launch codes on it. He contacts a "Mr Luthor" to announce a successful find.....
Originally posted by willRules
"The registration act is an undeniable necessity. However the actions of the two groups today suggest that neither of you are qualified or worthy enough to organise the handling of secret identities. Therefore, I, who remained above the battle will hold this information. All and every change will be passed through me.
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Originally posted by willRulesSuperman floats slightly off the ground in the middle of the battlefield. All the fighting stops. Batman looks up from throttling Black Lightning. John Stewart looks up after pinning Aquaman and Artemis under a huge green boulder.
"Look at what you've reduced yourself to." Superman shouts. "It's barbaric."
He pauses.
"The registration act is an undeniable necessity. However the actions of the two groups today suggest that neither of you are qualified or worthy enough to organise the handling of secret identities. Therefore, I, who remained above the battle will hold this information. All and every change will be passed through me.
And hopefully this will never occur again."
The heroes of both sides recognise they are not worthy of the title "hero" friendships are slowly rebuilt and trust is slowly regained but damage has been already inflicted.....
Epilogue:
Over the site of the "Outsiders incident" A lone figure in a radioactive containment suit searches amongst the rubble and dust. Under some charred remains he finds a slightly damaged piece of paper with nuclear launch codes on it. He contacts a "Mr Luthor" to announce a successful find..... [/B]
Awesome! I love the way Superman tells them all off. I think that's exactly what he'd do in that situation.
One thing though. Would that piece of paper really have survived intact? With the codes still readable?
Otherwise great work!
Originally posted by chilled monkeyThanks man
Another great story! Both were fully in character, good action and I especially like Norrin's comment about how DD is not the most terrible kind of monster as he had no choice in what he was and his 'gift' to DD.
Did you get a chance to read my Juggernaut vs Wonder Woman post 😛