SelphieT's poetry

Originally posted by SelphieT
Wrote this one's intro a week ago or two, and just finished it up today.

He said, "Fly straight, little sparrow!",
and I sure did.
I flew and sang,
my freedom I never hid.

I would spread my wings,
and let the warm wind brush my face.
I was calm and let the sun embrace me,
removing me, without a trace.

They always said it was quite the spectacle,
to see me fly and soar.
I always thought it was a spectacle,
to see them still on the floor!

I would open my mouth,
and a melody would bounce and flee.
And before I knew it,
others would hum and whistle with me!

I was young and naive back then,
trying to make the world a happy place.
But nothing made me feel better,
than putting a smile on someone's face.

Same time tomorrow,
for I was now in need of some rest.
Together we'll sing and fly again,
but now all this sparrow needs is her nest.

I fly with my fly down

New one, started it forever ago, finally finished it up today in class.

She's got nothing to lose,
cause she's not trying to win.
Her nerves are so shot,
feelings worn thin.

No, she's not sad,
she just isn't touched.
Now don't blame her,
if you can't make her happy that much.

Yes, people listen,
but do they care?
Will they judge her right?
Seems like they're never really fair.

People are nice,
but will they think twice,
once they learn who she is?

And will they go away,
when they hear me say,
"Hello, my name is Liz."

i won't go away 😮

i likeded it

I really like that poem. I don't know why, exactly, but something about it just sounds right. ✅

Thanks for the comments guys.

Wrote this a day or two or three ago.

I know I can be complex,
I don't know myself in these times of stress,
but sugar, I'm tryin',
if I said otherwise, I'd be lyin'.

And sweetie, you call me a fool,
but I assure you, I'm no tool,
and do I need a reason to help my friends?
I'll always give them my hand to lend.

And we had good times, didn't we?
I know things can't be the same with you and me,
Everything I said and did were filled with true intentions,
every single bit of my love and affections.

You may never read any of my poems,
let alone care about them,
but I just want you to know,
I still care about you so.

nice poetry

....i feel like crying now

i loved it

Something I wrote today.

I always wanted,
to write a love poem,
but I couldn't put together two and two.
And I always had feelings,
that I wanted to express,
but I didn't know what to say or do.

I've thought about it,
and I agree,
my emotions have never been more true.
And still I see you,
day to day,
but I don't know how to leave you a clue.

I can live without it,
I know I can,
but it truly is hard to resist.
And I could go on,
living and keeping to myself,
but your face is something I'd miss.

We will talk shortly,
and I will leave you smiles,
that is something I must insist.
But we are still young,
and life will go on,
and that is the truth I must dismiss.

i like it!!! love poems are hard to write

aw that so sweet, selphie, and yes happier poems are harder to write, I guess because we all to easily dismiss the better times in our lifes to embrass the bigger and more demaning issues.

by the way, Its nice to be home again 😄 *waves*

*waves back* welcome home

😄

Thanks for the comments guys.

Here's a little something I wrote last night, it's been a while.

We may no longer be in love,
but this is something I'm above.
I am so glad we did not end,
for I would have lost a great friend.
You truly enchant me, if not more,
than yesterday, and the day before.

I will always be one to listen,
when your eyes are dry or may glisten.
And when asked, I will give you advice,
and never feel bothered, or think twice.
I will care for you through anything,
and want to say thanks for everything.

aw thats sweet

aw that is awesome

amazing selph 👆

nice...very awesome

Originally posted by Selphie
Thanks for the comments guys.

Here's a little something I wrote last night, it's been a while.

We may no longer be in love,
but this is something I'm above.
I am so glad we did not end,
for I would have lost a great friend.
You truly enchant me, if not more,
than yesterday, and the day before.

I will always be one to listen,
when your eyes are dry or may glisten.
And when asked, I will give you advice,
and never feel bothered, or think twice.
I will care for you through anything,
and want to say thanks for everything.

dull

Originally posted by Ya Krunk'd Floo
dull

Thanks for the constructive criticism!