it was really long, but it was actually pretty good. it was only long because the actions of the camera were so detailed.
...does anyone else think that they are going to either Singapore or Australia?
hey tht was really kewl lol i was really getting into it can visual tht lol.. come on more more more hehehe
take care
luv AS!!!
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Originally posted by sweet_kat22
Boy I noticed that all these threads go off topic lol.Since everyone else is making their version of the third movie heres mine:
Part 1: Introduction (This will be long so I will write some tonight and post more tomorrow 🙂
Singapore: Boats are ready for docking fishing boats are coming in. Suddenly the water is crashing against the boats slowly moving them back and foreth. On the docks they start tying down boats. Some men on boats look over the sides. Palm trees blow in the wind as the men hold on to the sides of the boat. Women and children on land rush inside. "Its a storm coming captain" spoken in chianese english subtitle.
The captain of the ship looks to the skies. "No storm sailor skies are clear". A man on top of the sails yells something at the waters.
Meanwhile on the beach a women and her two children are walking with baskets of food. A child spots something brown floating in the water. He runs over and picks it up. Captain Jack Sparrows hat to the audience, the child puts it on and runs back to his mother. The men on the boats get ready to fire at the Kranken but the Kranken's mouth opens and water and digestion sprays at them all in the face all of them slowly put their weapons down and stare at each other. Nothing is seen of Jack yet to the audience. Camera goes back to the beach where the children are playing. Camera along the ground as two feet (Pirate boots) step out from the water the children stop and look up. Camera (Supposidly over Jacks shoulder view but his face is not shown). All the audience sees is the expressions on the childrens faces and the Shadow on the ground of Jack sparrow as he walks up to the Children. He takes his hat from the child (Still not showing his face yet, only his hands removing the hat from the childs head) and the music plays as the camera travels back along the water with the Title"
Pirates of the Caribbean: At Worlds End"Heh that was fun to write I'll write more later 🙂
Originally posted by jessigem
THAT'S BRILLIANT!! You should be a screenwriter.
i think this only went off topic because of me. today was my random day. sorry. 😄
Thanks and now to continue the script lol.
Eh maybe I should I have taken MANY Film classes in college 🙂
AKA Film Studies Major-
Anyway back to the script.
Part 2- Search for Jack Sparrow
Barbossa/Dalma and the crew were aboard a new ship that they had comendeered on their way to Singapore. None of them know exactly where they are going. Dalma uses her phsycic (SP?) Powers to find Jack. Elizabeth is in doubt of her foolishness in directions as she sits alone at the front of the ship. Will has been below deck ignoring Elizabeth since the encounter of her kissing Jack has made him doubt their relationship. Barbossa is at the wheel listening to the Dalmas directions. The camera moves along parts of the crew cleaning the deck. Ragetti and Pintel are swaping the deck. Will walks aboard the deck and watches the two.
"How is it you got the easier job?" Pintel glares down at Ragetti who is holding the bucket of water. "I only have one good eye" Ragetti smiles back at him. Pintel uses the mop and whacks him in the head with it. Will rolls his eyes at them and walks past them. "What's with him?" Ragetti looks over to Pintel. "He's been like that since you know, he told me" Puckers his lips. "He kissed you?" Ragetti asked. Pintel whacks him with the mop again, "No idiot his lass and the captain". Ragetti shrugs. "Well Barbossa was interested in that lass from the beginning". Pintel rolls his eyes. "Hopeless, just hopeless".
Elizabeth approches the Dalma and Barbossa. "Have you any idea where exactly we are going? It's been a week, theres no more food, half a storage of water and I havent had a proper bathing!" Elizabeth grumbles at them both. "Ey, if you want a bath then just jump into the sea and swim for a bit" Barbossa chuckles. Will approches beside Elizabeth. "If you two are done playing around with this crew in which we have found nothing not even a trace of Jack I would like to put them to better use. Like going back and finding Davy Jones heart" Will complains. "At least we agree on one thing" Elizabeth sighs. "If you are in doubt of this search then we can drop you both off at the next stop" the Dalma replies crossing her arms on her chest. "No, I would rather go back home!" Elizabeth storms off. "Crew is getting anxious, where abouts you think Jack is?" Barbossa asked. Dalma concentrates for a moment. "Just a bit further out". She replies. "Just a bit further, just a bit further, shes been saying that the whole way" Will also storms off. "Thats what I get for bringing land lovers aboard" Barbossa.
Anyone who is reading this I am continuing it right now I had to stop because I thought it was too long
Have to reply because it was getting too long.
Barbossa grumbles and continues steering the boat.
Theme music tunes in. (Forgot theme music for the introduction too but whatever).
Meanwhile in Singapore shot of jacks feet wondering through the city. Shot of his hands pick pocketing as he walks by a group of men. The audience still has not seen his face yet. Camera is at HIS point of view as he walks past groups of people. A ship is spotted in the distance with men that do not really belong in Singapore. A man tries to sell some piece of meat as Jack walks past him (Still in his point of view). Speaking in Chinese. As jack tries to speak to the man "Yes, hello Captain Jack Sparrow... doesn't anyone speak any bloody english around here?" Camera moves up to his face as he yells. (Music stops and everyone stares at him. "Jack Sparrow? THE Jack Sparrow" A Soldier turns around from the ship that is unloading packages. "Jack Sparrow... who said they were Jack Sparrow?" Jack asks as he turns around and looks at all of the men and women staring at him. "After him!" The soldier demands. A close up of Jacks widened eyes "Oh hell" He starts to run off through the crowd.
Thats it for now I have to go eat my lunch 🙂
I'm having fun writing this so forget lunch for now lol.
Music continues as Jack is running through the crowd. Jack uses a mans wheelbarrow and jumps from it onto the roof top of a building. "Thanks mate" He calls the man frowns in confusion as he watches Jack run along the rooftops and jumping from each one to the other. The soldiers try to trap him by going on each side of the buildings and approch him. Jack takes out his sword and tries to fight them off. The soldiers use their swords to fight him. "Forget this" Jack throws his sword down the soldiers guess that hes giving up and try to grab him but Jack jumps down from the building and grabs onto a flag pole he swings around it as he falls "Whoaa... " He looses his grip and falls into the nearest building. A family is sitting at their dinner table, Jack falls right from a hole in the roof top and lands on their table. "Excuse me..." He gets up and tries to find a place to hide. "You are in trouble my friend?" The man asks him as he gets up. Jack frowns as he hides behind a clothes line using a towel to cover up under his nose. "Ey... your the only man I met who has spoken much english... what is it to you?" Jack asked as he peaks out the window. The soldiers are running right by the building. Jack relaxes and looks around the poor looking home of the family and the dinner that he ruined. "Come with me, I have some clothes that may help hide you from those soldiers" The man offered as he goes into another room. His wife follows him and lectures him in Chinese. Jack frowns as he waits. The little boy stands up and goes to the culdren on the fire he stirs it a bit with the spoon. "Come come" The man calls as he peaks around at Jack. Jack shrugs and goes in the room. A blue outfit with symbols hangs on the wall. Jack makes a funny expression raising his eyebrows at it but he stops and smiles politly at the man when he looks back at him. The woman is still lecturing the man. "What is she saying?" Jack asked in confusion. "Oh dont mind her," The man replies and takes down the suit. "I used to be a soldier of the Singapore army. This was my suit. Take it and they will think you are a soldier so they will leave you alone" The man explained. Jack shrugged and took the suit.
NOTE to audience: There is a picture out there on the internet I cant remember if it was posted here, of Jack in some Blue suit with Chinese symbols on it. I thought I would import this into the storyline since it seems to have some significance that people have access to such a photograph that could have meaning to the third movie.
Sorry double posting because it is too long.
Continuing:
Meanwhile the soldiers have decided to 'camp' out on their ship for the night in case they catch Jack. Another ship comes into the docks and is tied up. "Finally" Elizabeth runs off the boat past everyone else. "Land lover" The parrot squaks. Barbossa grins as he walks off the boat. "I taught him that" Ragetti smiles back at Barbossa. "Very funny" Elizabeth glares at them. Singapore soldiers approch them. "What is your business here? Who is your captain?" A soldier asks. "I am the captain of this ship. We are just passing by no need to worry arms down soldiers" Barbossa replied as parts of the crew followed him. Will ran past them to Elizabeth. "Elizabeth... aren't we going to talk?" Will asked as he followed her. "What is there to talk about?" She asked as she looked around at all the Singaporeans. "Where in the world are we?" She asked. "Singapore" The dalma walked past them and up to the men she began to speak in Chinese to them. Ragetti and Pintel shrug and go off into the crowds of people. The rest of the crew stay aboard the ship as Barbossa and the others gather food. Dalma uses some coins to buy food and water.
Meanwhile: Jack comes out of the building in the suit, "Not really my look but I will live" Jack sighs. "Don't forget to bring it back before you leave" The man called to him. "Don't worry mate, I have no intentions of this wardrobe" Jack called back and walked into the crowds. Jack looked around for a ship. Soldiers eye him suspisiously. Jack tries to speak in Chinese to a man to hide his identity. The man looks utterly confused at Jack and shrugs. Jack walks by the crowds to the ship that he spotted which happens to be Barbossas new ship. Jack climbs the side of the ship and up the mass. He swings down from the ropes and takes out his sword. "I am comendeering this ship mates so if you wish to live I suggest you get off" Jack pointed his sword towards some crew members. Meanwhile Barbossa is about to walk onto the ship. "Ey did I hear a man just say he is going to comendeer MY Ship?" Barbossa takes out his sword. "I know that voice..." Jack turns around and his eyes widen. "YOU! I thought I killed you" Jack whacks Barbossas sword. "Jack?" Barbossa frowns at him. Will and Elizabeth come back onto the ship and stare at them. "I killed you once I'll do it again" Jack starts whacking Barbossas sword, who is just standing there watching him. The rest of the crew is staring at him wide eyed. "Jack!" Will calls, Jack keeps whacking, " Why aren't you fighting back? Come on" Jack continues. "JACK!" Elizabeth yells, Jack stops and turns around. "Oh..." He frowns in confusion.
"Can someone explain what is going on?" Jack puts away his sword so does Barbossa. "So we found you" the Dalma walked towards Jack. "Ey, no hard feelings Jack. She brought me back to find you, and she brought you back as well" Barbossa explained. Elizabeth walks past Jack and back to the front of the ship ignoring him. "Actually I didn't bring Jack back... I made a deal with Davy Jones... that he would bring Jack back if I would pass along the black spot" Dalma explained. Jack looked down at his hand. "Not again... " Jack grumbled. Will smiled. "All the good reason to find Davy Jones heart and destroy it right Jack?" Will asked as he walked towards Jack. "Right Will... all right all hands on deck, first I have business to take care of then we will..." Jack demanded Barbossa inturrupted him. "Your forgetting one thing Jack, I am Captain of this ship. So I give the commands around here, Savvy?" Barbossa pats Jack on the back as he heads for the wheel. "Savvy" Jack sighs and goes below deck. Jack changes his clothes back into his pirate clothes. Elizabeth approches from the door. "Aren't you forgetting how you left me missy?" Jack frowned at her. Elizabeth sighed and bit her lip. "I just came to appologize for that. I dont want anything else to do with you, as you remember I am still engaged to Will" She replied. Jack sighed and picked up the suit. "Ey" Jack replied. "But is it really what your heart desires?" He grinned as he moved closer getting ready to kiss her. Elizabeth puts her hands on his lips. "It is" She replied and headed back on deck. Jack angirly took out a dagger and threw it at the wall.
Ok really I have to go to work so To be continued in 6 hours lol.
Originally posted by danny_v
i really dont think that Will will, 😕, mary liz anymore because there seemed to be a lot of tension between them at the end of POTC 2. Also, if he finds out why liz was actually kissing Jack (to leave him behind) they will definately be over. Thoughts?
If they didn't get married that would just ruin the movie. It would be depressing. They'd have to because they'd have to have a perfect Disney ending. I mean Will has loved her like forever. I would be very disappointed and feel empty when I left the cinema if they didn't end up together. Lol that sounds corny..
it does sound corny 😂 but you have a good point. sometimes i forget this is a disney movie. and in disney movies it's protocal that the girl marries the guy that's loved since they met. it's like a disney law. i will feel dissapointed and empty too if i left the theater next year and they didn't end up together.cry