Hahaha! 😆
And Jack doesn't seem to be like a.. what's the word *thinks*.. like an easy person to be with if you know what I mean. Like he's all busy with pirateness if you get me lol. But Will will like settle down and stuff, well after all his piratelikeness aswell. And yes he's the perfect prince-like character for a Disney film! And he's not a cartoon 😱 so he's gorgeous to look at! Get that sexy back (lol Justin Timberlake's new song.. god that is crap) out!! drool Phwoar! Haha sorry that last part was unnecessary.
Yeah.. all the other ones are old fashioned aren't they? Like in Cinderella, Sleeping Beauty, etc. I haven't seen the first two you mentioned but John Smith is alright yeah. Oh yeah!! And I remember I used to think this Mega Drive game character from Streets of Rage was good looking.. haha omg how sad 😂
Ok ok calm down everyone, I am back from work and I plan to write some more of this.
1) I am a BIG fan of Jack and Liz hooking up BUT
2) I am staying in character with Liz mainly because she is a respectable woman and she wouldnt just go off with Jack without saying a word of it to Will that would be heart breaking for poor ol' Will even though I myself Dislike Will as a character= Wussy pirate who always gets the girl because hes respectable too.
3) Everyone here is right that Jack is too busy with Piratcy to be with Liz although this may have a secret ending that I really want to happen in the 3rd movie even though I doubt it will heh. Which is why it is fun writing my own script.
And 4 thanks for the applause I will continue it now.
5) I agree with all you other girls Johnny depp is the hottest man alive,
6) Wow another person besides me actually thinks that Robin from teen titans is hot Nice lol.
Part.... I forget what number Im on so Im just gonna make up a title.
The Death of Davy Jones
Jack is just about to get off the ship to give back the suit to the old man, when the Soldiers recognize him. "It's him Jack Sparrow" They start to run towards the ship. "Um Barbossa anyway this heap can go faster?" Jack jumps back down from the side of the boat. "Ay, not really unless you want to get off and swim" Barbossa replied. The boat starts to leave the dock, Jack relaxes and sighs in relief as he watches the soldiers disappear. "Well that is that... and this I will have to return another time" Jack puts the suit in a big chest. Will sits next to Elizabeth whom is by the front again. "So now can we talk?" Will asks. Elizabeth leans over and kisses him softly. "What did you want to talk about?" She asks. Jack watches them from the sideline in a bit of jelousy but ignores his thoughts and goes below deck. "Don't worry about it" Will replies and puts his arm around her. The Dalma gives them directions.
(Theres nothing really I can put in between to make this any slower because I know they would probably be travelling a while)
So transition back home, they havent arrived yet. Davy Jones heart is in a glass jar on the NEW goveners desk (As you remember her father gave his position as governer to have Liz released).
(This is kinda hard because I dont remember half the crews names as well as the comider from the first movie and the new governer).
SO
Governer= new governer
Comidor= the same one from the first movie BECAUSE he brought the heart in the second movie so the new governer gave him his position back Got it? I hope continuing:
)) (And for now Liz's father is what I'll call her father since he is not governer)
PS: I really dunno if Im spelling these things right but whatever
The ship arrives at the docks.
"Who is staying and who is leaving? Decide now and then we will be off" Barbossa demands as he walks off the boat to pay the parking fee.
"Well we have to set things straight and I have to find Davy Jones heart since the Dalma said it was here" Will explains. Jack is siting on the chest with the suit in it and his coat over his shoulders. "We also have an unfinished wedding" Elizabeth replies to Wills comment. They both look over at Jack. "I am only here to retrieve and destroy the heart then I am leaving" Jack explains. "Aren't you coming to the wedding?" Will asks. Jack raises his eye brow. "Let's just say I wouldn't be a friendly guest" Jack gets up and gets off the ship. Will and Elizabeth follow him. The dalma tells them that the heart is in the governers home. The three of them travel to the mansion. They try to enter but soldiers stop them. "Are you here to see the governer?" They ask. "Ay, we are friends of his, she is the governers daughter didn't you recognize her?" Jack replies. The soldiers frown at them. "Oh you mean the resigned governer he doesn't live here anymore" They reply. "What? But why? What happened? Where is my father then? Where is he?" Elizabeth demands as she grabs the soldiers coat. "Easy missy" Jack pulls her away from the soldier. "It's all right Elizabeth I am here" they all turn around to face the retired governer. "Father, what happened to you?" Elizabeth asks as she goes to him and hugs him. "I gave up my position to save you from your death sentence... but Will... I could not do anything for you..." He answers. "Thats right, William Turner we must place you under arrest" The guards demanded and put Will in shackles. "Elizabeth... " Will calls to her. Jack slowly starts to sink away before they notice him there. "Jack, find the heart and kill it for me" Will calls to him. Jack stops and grumbles he almost escaped. "Jack sparrow! Quick before he gets away" Some soldiers chase after Jack. Jack escapes and sneaks in through a window of the mansion. He is in the hallway, at the end of the hallway is the Comidor. "Ah Jack Sparrow, so we meet again" He takes out his sword. "Back to your ol' self I see" Jack takes out his sword. "I really don't have time for this" Jack grumbles. They slash swords together and fight down the hallway until Jack gets them down into the wine cellar and they get up on some wine racks and fight. Jack sees some hanging barrows of beer he cutts the ropes to them and they fall one of them hits the Comidor in the head he falls over and passes out. "Easy enough mate, could have been a better match but I have something to take care of" Jack jumps down and realizes where he is. "Look at all this booze just sitting here... I doubt they will notice one measly bottle missing" Jack grins as he grabs a bottle of rum and takes a drink he puts it on his belt buckle and runs off.
Sorry double posting again Continuing
Damn I would be excited if I guessed most of this right when they third movie comes out but I doubt it. I wish I could sell this to Disney lmao I bet they already have a script written though.
Jack comes back around the corner staring at the bottle of rum. "What am I thinking,... " He grabs another bottle and leaves. Jack finally finds the governers office and stumbles his way through the door. "Ah ha, the heart of davy jones I could hear it in the hallway" Jack moves closer to the empty desk (Governer is not in the room at the time). Suddenly he hears a comosion outside canons firing off in the distance. He ignores it and picks up the glass jar. He breaks it with his hand. "Bad Idea" Jack sways as he picks the glass out of his bloody hand and picks up the beating heart. "Time to..." Jack stops as he hears a familiar voice. "I wouldn't be doing that if I was you Jack" Davy Jones appears from the shadows with Elizabeth gagged beside him arms tied behind her back.
Meanwhile in the dungeon (SP?) Will is waiting in a cage for his death sentence. He hears some soldiers being stabbed and they fall down the stairs. Will stands up expecting his friends. Although it is his Father William, William walks to the cage with the keys. "Quick son, escape while you can, I believe my time on earth is coming to an end" He explains as he unlocks the door.
Jack turns and faces him. "Never a dull moment for Jack Sparrow ay." Jack grins. "Go ahead she means nothing to me" Jack picks up his dagger and is about to stab the heart. Elizabeth frowns at him. "Don't forget how you left me missy... consider this a payback" Jack grins over at her. "Then she will serve me in the afterlife" Davy Jones replies. Jack quickly stabs the heart without hesitation.
(Cutt back to dungeon) "Father... thank you for everything..." Will replies hes about to embrace him but he disappears.
(Back to office)
Davy Jones and his ship/crew all disappear. Jack puts away his dagger and takes a swig of his rum, then he examines his hand. The black spot is gone. Elizabeth grumbles at him whom is still gagged. "Oh right, no hard feelings missy but you were in my way" He goes over and unties her. Elizabeth slaps him. "Thanks for nothing, Jack Sparrow you are the most selfish man I ever met, and don't forget that you haven't done a thing to help Will all you did was run like a coward" Elizabeth yells at him. "That was a bit harsh..." Jack heads for the window. "Where do you think your going?" Elizabeth asks. Will storms through the doors with a sword "I am here to destroy the heart where are you governer?" Will asks and stops as he sees that Jack and Elizabeth are already there. "Already done mate, excuse me I have a ship to comendeer" Jack jumps out the window. Elizabeth goes to Will and kisses him. "How are we going to have a proper wedding now that your father has been removed?" Will asks. Elizabeth sighs. "All that matters is that we can be together.
Jack is about to get aboard the ship when the dalma approches him. "I brought you back for a reaosn Jack Sparrow" She exclaims. Jack frowns in confusion. "You said that Davy Jones brought me back" He replies. "Technically speaking, tell me what is in your heart" Dalma asks. Jack frowns again. "What are you talking about..." Jack asks "Oh you know very well what I am talking about you just don't want to admit it, I brought you back to give you a second chance to redeem yourself of all your sins" Dalma replies. Jack rolls his eyes. "If your talking about the lass, I already said she means nothing to me. My life is the sea and piracy. How could I give that up for a lass?" Jack asked.
If Will were to really want to settle down, then i dont think Liz would want him. Remember the beginning of PotC 1? "A pirates life for me..."
Oh ya, and i hope barbossa doesnt die at the end of this movie. It be funny if he ends up being the captain of the Flying Dutchman, after being conned by Jack into doing it. He gets cursed again. =P
In those days younger women married older men IE: Comidor looked about almost 30 when Liz was a child of around lets say 10 years old and he wanted to marry her when she was older so that would make him around 35-40 in the first movie. And liz looks about 20.
Anyway continuing:
"Whatever your decission is, I suggest you take a look at that compass of yours again" The dalma goes back on the ship. Jack frowns and takes out his compass. He faces his back to the sea, the compass points opposite from the sea to the land. "The thing must be broken, or she cursed it" Jack grumbles and puts it away.
The wedding: Taking place on a small island.
"I am sending letters to the king to report this madness, maybe since they reported to him that Jack is dead the King will reconsider reapointing me" Elizabeths father explains they are in a tent where she is getting ready. She wears a simple white gound instead of a fancy gold one. "I'm sorry I could not afford as much dear" her father apologizes. "Oh father, it doesn't matter much to me. I just want to be able to have my wedding without an interruption" Elizabeth explains.
Meanhwhile
"Ay, if you wish to have half my crew and comendeer another ship that is fine by me Jack. I don't mind seperating with them" Barbossa explained. "All right I'll take Ragetti... and hmm" Jack Walks past them. "You can't seperate us!!" Ragetti holds on to Pentai "Get off" Pentai pushes him away.
Meanwhile
The wedding is taking place. Will and Elizabeth are at the alter. "Do you Will Turner take Elizabeth Swann to be your wife?" The priest asks. "I do" Will replies.
Cutt back to Jack and a new crew on a comendeerd ship. The Dalma stays behind with Barbossa. "So your future is the sea, I can no longer help you Jack Sparrow" She whispers to herself.
Back to the wedding... Elizabeth looks to the sea with inspiration she starts to hum "Yo ho , yo ho a pirates life for me....." she whispers under her breath. "Do you Elizabeth Swann take Will Turner to be your husband?" ..... The priest and audience waits for her answer.. "Elizabeth?" Will frowns at her, Jacks voice fades over Elizabeths whispers as a transition of fading goes into each other, Jack is singing the same song at the wheel of the ship.
"Whats that in the distance Captain?" Ragetti asks as he holds up a telescope to his good eye. "Huh?" Jack grabs it and looks through the telescope. A floating side boat that is empty in the middle of the sea. "Very odd" Jack frowns and shrugs as he puts down the telescope. He continues to hum the song as he turns the wheel. Suddenly he can hear a womans voice humming the same tune. "Ay, I think I have finally gone over" Jack tries to clean out his ear. "Too much rum?" Ragetti asks. "Never" Jack replies. Jack looks around for the voice and sees Elizabeth on top of the mass. She grabs a rope and swings down to him. "What is this all about lass?" Jack asked as he grins at her. "Didn't you hear me... ?" she gets closer to him and whispers as she keeps getting closer to his lips. "A pirates life for me..."
Screen blacks out to credits.
THE END
Before you start bashing me I say this would be the perfect ending. Even though most of you think that She should be with Will, in the end she wants the life of a Pirate so why not? Damn I would freak if they had an ending like this.
And yes she abandoned the wedding, audience would assume that she told Will that she wants to be a pirate in that sense but didnt tell him that she is in love with Jack too. None of the characters wanted to admit that Jack and Liz were in love because they knew he wasnt a good match for Liz, BUT if Liz wants to be a pirate like since she was a Child then why not hook up with jack too? Just a bonus to being a pirate 🙂
ahem sexy bonus I mean hah.
oolalanaughtysexy bonus.
even though this wasn't the ending i was expecting....BRAVO!!!
and to think, you did that in like 1 1/2 days.
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oh yeah. i almost forgot about robin. he's not actually good-looking. i think it's his bravado or whatever you call it that makes him hot .
Yeah I did lol. I almost missed a day of work for it too. I so wanted to stay home and finish this but it was worth it to wait because it gave me time to think of a good ending.
I love this ending so much, I will be disapointed if they dont use this ending heh.
Oh and thanks for all the support, this board rocks people are so much nicer here then any other board I have been too. This script made me have such a better day at work. Good thing no one asked why I was in a good mood I would be like "Because of Johnnys sexyness lol
Anyway night night people going to bed you guys can stay up posting but Im tired. Time to have dreams about good 'ol Jack.