My Pirate Song

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My Pirate Song

First of all dont post anything stupid ok?
if you dont like it here go away.
and now i start my litlle tale to make you think about a whale whos in the sea behind a tree
Ok so it was well prety late at night and the electricity was out couz there was lithing and thunder and rain(just how i like it) so i standed on my balcony and thinking looking in the sky.And so i started singing yo ho yo ho a pirates life for me.and so i thought that ill make a song a song but i didnt get any far but here is how far i got.But i need some help to make it so if any of you(I hope pirate fan and no stupid stuff) woud like to help me please do.
So here
part 1:Yo ho yo ho a pirates life for me yo ho.
We plunder we pilige we murder fight there no one here to give us a fight
exept a couple of boomsticks and a box of bulets to fight us off while noone is home.
Yo ho yo ho a pirates life for me
part 2:When its a stormy night and not very bright we go in to the sea and see many flee,we fight for food much gold and some rum to pass the day with out-i cant think anything else right now so please will you help me?

I'll pick-up on part two:When its a stormy night and not very bright we go in to the sea and see many flee,we fight for food much gold and some rum to pass the day with out light. We schrimage and pilage and plunder. No stands up to give a fight, so we take flight that night,..

Okay, someone elses turn!

that was good but in one places i think it shoud be diferent
We schrimage and pilage and plunder-We schrimage,plunder and pilige

Okay, I'll continue w/ part 3.
Part 3: On dark night with clouds as black as or hearts, we saw on the horizon a blue flag. It came closer till we could see it was the sail of the Force(Navy).
"Full speed ahead!" Yelled the captain!
"Aye,Aye!"
"Pull out the canons on th Port side!" he ordered us....

It probably souds more of a story than a song,.. Well, I'm not much of a singer!

a Big Blue flag

How about YOU continue!! Are you writing this down??

No not realy im just saying what i sounds beter to me.it may sound beter to you like you wrote it.there is No need to be angry

I'm not angry,.. just wondering if you could come up with something!
Plus,.. It might be cool if someone wrote this all down!(like you)

Well the song is not ready yet and people shoud have fun trying to right it.

I'll continue then,..
Part 4: The canons booming, men yelling orders, blood welling outta those that fell. The scene was over when we heard a bell.
"The King." said the captain, he turned and so did we all.
A ship larger than any seen came outta the fog.
"That's no king's ship!" the captain said a bit surprised,
It twas not, For it held a Jolly Roger 'bout it's mast,...

Someone continue!!!! It's too hard for one person!

part5:The cannons the gold the rum and the sea are only some things for pirates to belive.a ship is there kingdom and and crew is his people but the is his home and not any land no house nor mouse

Sounds kinda,.. Dr. Suse-ish

Yes well im not in a creative mood right now

Roew! Hiss!cat
Gosh, who gave you a wedgy??

LOL!

Part 6: The rum is drunk, and so are the men, Then we decided to cook a hen.

All out of creativity today!

LOL!

Just for fun,..
"Yo Ho Yo Ho a pirates life for me! We pilage n' plundern' squat to pick our nose"

Like I said,.. All outta creativity for today!

on what music is your song based, if you got some i'd love to here the tune, that'll give me a shitload of inspiration i think ^^

Well have you Played Pirates of Caribbean game?There was this song with it when pirates sing that Yo ho To ho.Well that is the tune i think woud be good if you know it offcourse