Totally pirates, Totally OFF-TOPIC!

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Jack has an I-pod....

Originally posted by a-k-a-amber
me too! hey ive g2g for awhile I should be back in 30 minutes unless a sibling gets on the computer...

ok. TTYL!

lol i pod! bye!

BYE!

It's quiet

mhmm

pumpkins scream in the dead of night.

yall are strange... in a good way

I was bored.

im once agin sorry 🙂

want to read my Nightmare Before Christmas so far?

‘Where is she?’ Jack thought as he walked around Halloween Town. He was looking for his 17 year old daughter, who had, once again, wandered off. He sighed, when he suddenly heard a familiar song. It was THE song.

He looked to where many teens were gathered around the fountain. “Everyone hail to the pumpkin song..” Everyone faltered in their singing when they saw the Pumpkin King. Jack stood next to his wife, and crossed his arms while he watched the figure rise out of the fountain.

Sally placed a calming hand on her husband’s shoulder. She knew that Jack was going to be mad, and she didn’t want him to make a scene. Jack took a deep breath as he watched their daughter step out of the fountain. She looked exactly like Jack, but with shoulder length brown hair. She had the same outfit but hers flared a bit, and over her pants she had a short red skirt.

“Jacklyn!” Jack called to her. Jacklyn froze mid-step out of the fountain. The teens made a path as their Pumpkin King walked through. “What do you think you’re doing?” He asked, sweeping his arm to the crowd, which slowly dispersed.

She looked around before shrugging her shoulders. “Nothing.” Jack sighed and helped her down.

oh! ive never even thought about them having a daughter! I like it please continue!

you really like it?!

yeah! why wouldn't I? its good well written sometimes you dont fully grasp what your trying to say I was REAL nervous to post my story at fanfic but i did and i dont think it was so bad im kinda proud 🙂

omg i luved that!! write more plz!!!

lol! I'm glad you all like it! Don't worry,I have the WHOLE story in my head. I'm working on it now.

yay! luv ya!

ditto! put it up soon!