here's a little bit more:
“HEY! I can get down myself.” She said, crossing her boney arms. Jack shook his head again.
“Go to the mansion. I need to talk to your mother.” He said sternly while gently guiding her towards it. She turned around in his hold. “But dad I…” Jacky was cut off by a firm “No.” Begrudgely she walked away. Once in awhile turning back, but Jack only shook his head.
It's been 5 mins.
Sally walked up to Jack and wrapped her arms around his bony body. “Jack, we have to face the facts. She’s going to get her powers come Christmas day. She’ll make a great Pumpkin Queen. It’s not like she’s going away. She’ll be here.”
Jack hung his head and closed his eye sockets. “I know. But…She just seems too young. Yet that was the age I became King.”
Sally rested her chin on his shoulder. “What shall we do with her? That’s the third time this week she’s gotten into trouble.”
Jack shrugged. “Nothing we can really do. Christmas AND her birthday is just a few days away…” He trailed off at that thought. “Perhaps you should go talk to her.” Sally said.
“Ok, but be ready for some yelling. From her of course.” Jack smiled and gave Sally a light kiss before walking towards the mansion.
There,Chapter 1 done!