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“Dad…” Jacky started but again for the second time that day, she was cut off. “No Jacklyn. I’m tired of your excuses!” He turned sharply around. Jacky turned away from her dad. Truth be told, she didn’t WANT to act like this.
“Dad,” Jack looked into her fearful eye sockets, “please.” Jack shook his head again. “No.” With that he started leaving.
‘Oh no!’ Jacky thought urgently. She ran to the top of the stairs. “DAD! DAD NOO!” Jack kept walking…towards the cemetery where a black, dead looking horse was grazing.
Jacky got serious. She ran down the stairs, three steps at a time and took a short cut to the cemetery.
She was glad that she had just beaten her dad there. She jumped over her pet and spread her arms in a protective gesture. The horse neighed softly and rested its head on Jacky’s shoulder. “Nightmare,” she whispered, “I won’t let anything happen to you.” Nightmare neighed loudly and reared up just as Jack was entering.
CHAPTER 2 DONE!!!!
Jacky didn’t move from her spot. Jack to a step forward. Still, she didn’t move. Jack kept walking forward until he was in front of her. She looked up, invisible tears in her eyes. Yet Jack knew they were there.
He carefully brought her close into a hug. Nightmare nickered softly at the two. Jack bent his head down and whispered to Jacky; “I love you.” and gave her a small kiss on her forehead.
Jacky smiled and said just as quietly, “I love you too.” Nightmare neighed happily and rested it head on top of theirs.