POTC 4... our version

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^ditto! i could totally picture that!! this is so awesome! i love those ssex scenes! they r totally ssexxii!!!!!

im still trying to imagine jack say "giggles are not my forte"

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pplz da scripts just keep getting beta as u write them POTC 4 ....... our version is da best story ive eva read I LUV IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! congratz every1 that waz 1 outstanding script! I LUV IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hang on is this script over already ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh it is such a good script hmph! i rekon we should do what PIRATES = SEX said itd be really fun 2 make a number 5 from this story we can go on im dying 2 read wat happens in liz n jacks marriage and then what happens with Will and Kate and what happens with Abi and Alex + Norrington's ols life back and Gibbs EVERYBODY! its a good idea Pirates = SEX. I LUV IT!!!!!!!!

lol i dont know... like willofthewisp im in college... haha... its true it is sooooo much fun. im a little burned out, hehehe. all the good stuff has already been dealt with.

maybe we should make another version of three and try to get liz and will together and see if it would even be possible... 😉

I don't even want to go there, Kate! Ew... now that we've put her with Jack, I can't see her with anyone else. Your fault for being so creative! But sometime we should do their wedding. I think it would be hilarious, simple, fun, and so romantic. What year are you in college? I graduate this May.

Originally posted by willofthewisp
I don't even want to go there, Kate! Ew... now that we've put her with Jack, I can't see her with anyone else. Your fault for being so creative! But sometime we should do their wedding. I think it would be hilarious, simple, fun, and so romantic. What year are you in college? I graduate this May.

yeah, a wedding (I love weddings, drinks all around!)!!!!!!!! but who can write it? I can't because I can't bring all these emotions in it. so i'll make a big unromantic mistake!

hahahano willofthewisp you are going to have to start the wedding scene...

im a sophomore... and i hate it. lol.

this has been so fun though. i dont want to stop.

nor do I, but why should we end it...we could create a story, till all characters become very old...

Okay, then we will end it in a very big way.

The Pearl has anchored at the beach Jack and Liz were marooned a while ago. Only the crew is there, and although Norrington is now deputy governor, he has his own ship and therefore is a captain and therefore can perform marriages.
Abi: This was a perfect idea (she's holding Alex's arm)
Alex: You want ours on a beach?
Abi: Perfect for them, dear (he holds her tighter)
Jacky: Well, one Sparrow down, it can only be a matter of time before the other one goes.
Will: Oh, so your father will remarry? (laughs gently)
Jacky: Don't let that one out of your sight, eunuch (she watches Will and Kate, the happy lovebirds)

(kind of away)
Gibbs: Ar, Jack, (taking a swig of rum) I don't know what to think, it's like me son and me brother and me boss all at once
Jack: Calm down, mate. You're only escorting the lady down the aisle, not marrying her.
Gibbs: How can you be so calm? (we all know Gibbs. he's never calm)
Jack: Who said anything about being calm? (inside nervous) Now go find Lizzie.
(Gibbs sees Liz in a white dress very similar to what she wore when she was marooned with Jack, very simple but looks great on her)
Gibbs: If the whole ocean has a guardian angel, it would look like you, lass
(Liz is too excited to say anything, but hugs him. She takes Gibbs' arm and pops out of the trees.)
Jack (to himself): Yeees, I'm still here. Haven't run off. (leaps over to her to escort her himself)
Norrington: Typical, Sparrow. Too typical. (sighs, looks over at Abi) Well, you've read the vows. You both agree to love, honor, and cherish each other in sickness and in health for as long as you both shall live?
Jack: I do

Liz: I do! (her face is lit up)
Norrington: Then you are pronounced husband and wife.
(Jack doesn't wait for permission to kiss his new pirate wife. It's very soft but intense, his arms holding her back. He lifts her up, both of them grinning through their kisses)
Will: (to Gibbs) Well, you're going to have to make another cabin
Gibbs: Why?
Will: (raises an eyebrow) For all the little Jacks.
Gibbs: We'll have to hide the rum

The End

HAHAAH I LOVE IT!!!!!! LOVE IT!!!!!!! best part of the entire "movie" !!!!!

As much as I hate the fact that jack and liz r together,.. that was pretty funny!

brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

let's make a 5 one....with little jacks and we must marry norri to jacky and so on.........

WOOT!!
you came up with a great ending line willofthewisp!!
it wouldnt be potc w/o a great ending line 😄

i totally agree. i love that kiss, totally hot

i am STILL thinking about that ssex scene in the 3rd movie. i dont know why, it was just so COOL!

awe Willofthewisp, that was CLASSIC!!!!! perfect ending line. its so lovely. SIGH... i feel so wistful now. 🙂 im so glad we can write the CORRECT ending for these films... brilliant job! 🙂

i love that last line!! it is so typical pirates!