POTC 4... our version

Started by willofthewisp33 pages

Hopefully my scene. You should all be applauding me. (kidding)

Kate: Yes, I'm fine. Am I going to have to shoot you, too?
Abigail: Unlikely. You see, my brother had dealings with Governor Turner.
Kate: Yes?
Abigail: And was killed by Elizabeth Swann. I'm not hungry for revenge, at least not yet. I want to know why he lost his comission and why was killed at the hand of the woman he hoped to marry.
Kate: Do you have strong arms, Miss Norrington?
Abigail: Fairly, why?
Kate: We'll have to do some heavy rowing if we want to catch up to the Black Pearl.

Abigail: well im strong enough (BTW abi is his daughter...yes it's possible) When do we leave?

Oh, I'm sorry. I didn't know the relationship was established. Just sub "brother" for "father."

Kate: Soon.

Shift back to the Pearl, the helm a little smoldered from the lightning bolt.
Liz: I asked you a question, Will. How did you come across this vial?
Will: I stole it. We were in Haiti and I saw some people practicing voodoo and heard what it was known to do.
Gibbs: You didn't question it?
Will: After everything we've seen, are you one to deny any story might be true?
Gibbs: Point there.
Will: We took it while they were sleeping. I'm sure they don't know we have it.
Liz: They? Who specifically is they? (Will says nothing) They may not come to the Pearl, but they could have followed you to your house. You might have sunk Port Royal, maybe all of Jamaica, to the depths of hell. Who is they?

*gives thumbs up...it's coo*

Will: Oh just some random jamacin pirates they're everywhere...*nervous laugh*

was jamaica called jamaica back then?
and how did norrington have a daughter?
and WHY IS WILL GOVERNOR?
so many questions that need answers.....
*applause*

Wow. Kate, Abigail, and Jack's sister. Power to the female sex in this story!

Kate and Abigail, in men's clothes similar to what Liz wears, steal a rowboat away from the harbor
Abigail: What business do you have going after the Black Pearl?
Kate: Mr. Turner is my employer and a friend. If those people came to his home, they might have followed him to the ship.
(Abigail seems to sense something Kate does not)
Intruders: There they are! (start getting another boat ready to chase them)
Abigail: Row faster!
Kate: Who are all these people?

was jamaica called jamaica back then?
and how did norrington have a daughter?
and WHY IS WILL GOVERNOR?
so many questions that need answers.....
*applause---------------------------------------jessi

Uh, I don't know if it was called Jamaica.
Norrington could have been married before he asked Liz to marry him. Divorce wasn't as common back then, but it did happen. Or he might have been widowed.
Let's see....backstory for Will.....Will went back to Port Royal and came up with plans to make the place better after Gov. Swann died, so he was the first choice for next governor

Abigail: um just some pirates i've been trailing. (is rowing faster) they've been really keen on reclaiming something that was stolen from them i assume it was your employer. (sees them catching up) Row Kate, ROW!

BTW: to solve the daughter question....norrington is a man...'nuff said

lol
Kate: Who are all these people?
that sounds like something jack would say 😊

i didnt read it all...but fro what i read its great!!

OMG I think we're crazy! The story is a bit confusing...but wonderful

Liz: Jack! We have company! (she rushes to the side of the ship)
Jack: Eh Wot? (he joins her with a telescope...he finds two women rowwing toward them) Oh it's just the lass that works at your old house Elizabeth. (he laughs) how harmful can they be? But the secong one looks a great deal like- never the less we should welcome them aboard (he says cheerfully while collapsing the telescope)

(no one else gonna right? *sniff*)

im no good at this

well neither am i...just go...

i got nothing...ill wait for the oppurtune moment

Gibbs: Why should we welcome them? It's bad luck to have a woman aboard and then alike three?
Jack: Oh, could be a fine company. We have to sail a lot of days.
Liz: Jack!
Jack: What luv?
Liz: I don't like to take them aboard.
Jack: (glances at her) Are you jealous?

Liz: (blushes) of course not...(she looks around) well what are you waiting for? bring them aboard!

Liz: umm...well....

Jack gives her a look.

Liz:..of course not!

Jack: sure, love.

Liz: Fine. Let them aboard!

Jack: Gibbs, listen to the lady.

They let the women aboard.

Liz: And who are you? ( she says adressing Abby)

Abby: Im James Norrington's daughter.

Liz: James has a daughter! How is this possible?!

Abby: Well...