POTC 4... our version

Started by CaptinJackLover33 pages

sry thats all i could put...couldnt thibnk of anything

Abi: Well he was married...quite some time ago...well my mother died giving birth to me. (she looks down) seems as of late im an orphan..(she chokes up some tears and regains a cold norrington like confidence)

Will, who had drunken a whole bottle of rum, runs to the girls and embraces them. They look confused at him.

Will: I know you Kate. But I can't remeber you?
Kate: This is my new friend. She is named Abigail Norrington.

Jack stares at her.

Jack: Commodore Norrington failed to mention that he has such a pretty daughter.

Liz looks angry at her.

Liz: So why are you here? What do you want?

Abi: (blushes) Ah...well it seems you have a bit of trouble
Kate: (still being embraced by a drunken will) you have pirates on your tail. It seems they want some sort of vile...

guys this is HOTT. i leave for like 20 minutes and everything gets all interesting... 🙂

Norrington has a daughter?! that would make sense. he was pretty old.

And Will is governor because of a secret reason which someone else will eventually reveal... 😉

Liz: What kind of trouble? You do not mean that you are the trouble, aren't you?

Abi: (looks a bit weired) What?

OH and i love that Will has become a drunk. i bet he is way hotter when he has loosened up a bit.

Jack: Pirates on our tail? What sort of pirates?

Kate: The dishonorable kind.

Jack: Bugger. The worst kind possible.

Kate: I shot one of them in the foot...

i imagine he's a little like he was after waking up and finding that hes tied to a pole on that cannibal island(he was loopy from the dart)

Abi: yeah that was interesting and they've been trying to catch up with kate and I so we must get moving

Jack: I think we should set sail and try to escape!

Will: Why? Why escape? I could...figth them all... it's...t's very easy...

Abi: I bet you could Will (she catches them) Oy, you're a heavy one (to kate) how bout you help me get him to his quarters before he does something incredibly stupid

Jack: I think I wanna find my sister right now!

Abi: *still holding onto will trying to keep him from falling* Oh, yeah! I remeber her...good gal

Kate: Me, take a man to his private quarters? (then she pauses) oh what the hell. we're on a pirate ship now, no use pretending to be ladies.

Jack: I will take young Mr turner to his chambers. why dont you ladies go play "find the dress" with lizzie in my cabin...

So they found a little island with only one small dock. The Black Pearl is floating in front of it and Jack, Will and Liz leave the ship. They follow a small path into the middle of the island. There was a great hut with a lot of persons who run all over the place.

Man: Who are you?
Jack: I’m Jack Sparrow.
Liz and Will: Captain!
Jack: (looks surprised) Captain or not I want to talk to my sister.
Man: Your sister?
Jack: Boy, I don’t have a lot of time to waste.

The man accompanies them to Jacky. She sits in a great chair and everyone serves her, so that she has nothing to do besides commanding.

Jack: Ey, are you Jacky?
Jacky: Yes, but who are you?
Jack: I’m Captain Jack Sparrow. My father, sorry excuse me, our father told me you’re my half-sister.
Jacky: Oh, that sounds interesting. What do you want?!
Jack: I want you to accompany us to an old friend of mine. I heard you are very smart in negotiations.
Jacky: That’s all? For that I should leave my home? I’ve heard your hygiene should not be very good. And I should go on a boat? Never.

Jack: (to Liz silently): Please play to lose consciousness, only for a few seconds.

Jack: Very well Jacky. But you could do your brother a favour, don’t you think? It’s the opportuned moment for that (smiles to Will)

During that Liz falls down. All the man around Jacky carry about her and Jack and Will tie Jacky up. And even Liz get a sword in her hand and threatens the other man .And so they leave the little Island.

*applause*

To sum up, there are now 4 women on board the pearl, a new record!!! 🙂

oo i like!!! sontinue plz!

wheres willofawisp go?