POTC 5 ...our next version

So, after the marriage of Jack and Liz, all stay that night on the beach and drinking rum. Jacky stand besides and stares at the sea. Jack goes to her ....

Jack: What’s you problem dearie?

Jacky: Well...if there’s a person (norri) who likes another person (jacky), but this person likes another person (Will), who himself likes another person (kate).Should the person try to get the person who she likes more and hurt the other person by whom he is liked Or should the person take the person who likes her?

Jack glances at her, just thinking....

Jacky: But...if the person takes the person, who likes her more, but this person has more experience in love things, especially what follows sometimes after a kiss, what should the person do?

Jack: (a bit drunk, shouts) Are you still a virgin?

Everyone stares at her, while Jacky blushes.

Jack: Maybe you should talk with my luv...(shouts) Lizzie!!

HAHAHA great start!!!!

Abi: (comes out) what's going on?

Originally posted by CaptinJackLover
HAHAHA great start!!!!

thank you. it was driving in my head, while thinking about stupid disney

not to spoil anything, but there might not even be one, after i just read about the 3rd ending

it doesnt matter...its just for fun

alright...who want to continue?

im trying to think of sumthing....

that was awesome!

Nice start. I'll stay out of this one and just read. So you're going to give Liz and Jack little kiddies to annoy them?

and get alex and abi hitched....yes no?

do they still need norrington's approval? or has he already said he doesn't mind.....

is anyone going to continue??

o...come on u guys...somebody's gotta do it!!!

yeah, somebodys gotta!

Originally posted by willofthewisp
Nice start. I'll stay out of this one and just read. So you're going to give Liz and Jack little kiddies to annoy them?

No, willo you can't do it, you'Re such a great writer...
And it must not be in this one the kiddies...just a thought of you ending...but could also be later...or never...who knows?

@jessifem: yeah, I think she need norris approval

((Hey guys im in computer class and we have a sub who has now idea whatsoever what we are soposed to be doing so i geuss i will help out with the story!))

Elizabeth wonders over.

liz:yes dear?

jacky:Well elizabeth...if there’s a person (norri) who likes another person (jacky), but this person likes another person (Will), who himself likes another person (kate).Should the person try to get the person who she likes more and hurt the other person by whom he is liked Or should the person take the person who likes her?

liz: Well jacky , lets look at it this way with person does this person truely desire?

jacky: I desire wi.... i mean this person desires will, but she can not break the heart of another although, she does desire someone else as well.

liz: Norrington i prusume.

jacky: Why do you say that?

liz: I see the way you look at him jacky.

jacky🙁blushes slightly) Well , yes.

liz: I think you should follow your heart jacky , thats what i did with jack.

jacky: oh thank you elizabeth.

Jacky hurries over to norrington.

BRAVO *applause* I LUV IT!

Thank you hun.

Jacky arrive to norrington who is trying desprately to break open a coconut,

jacky: here let me try (she sits beside him and takes out a knife)

norri🙁he stares at her longingly) What brings you over here jacky?

jacky: I need to talk to you james...

norri:about?

jacky:me.

nori:what about you.

jacky:Well acctully its kind of about us.

norri:us?

jacky: yes james where do we stand in our relationship?

norri: I like you jacky and i think i may be falling in love with you.

jacky: Oh james i feel the same way.

jacky: But how would abi feel i we were together?

norri: abigal is a big girl she will be fine.

jacky : oh james ( she throws her arms around him and kisses him deeply , they fall back in the white sand.)