ok...thats it lol.
I was going off memory for some of the scenes, so i had to remember where they were standing ect...so if i got any of it wrong i apologise...ive seen it twice, and the rest of it has come from having to ask people what happened at particular moments in time lol.
Anyway, i hope you enjoyed it (And if you didnt them im sorry, but it was the best i could do...).
Thanks again
xxx
Sorry...forgot the epilogue!
Chapter Thirteen
*Turning to face what you've become.
Buried the ashes of someone,
you're broken by the strain.
Trying to fill that space inside...
Am I just like you?
All the things you do...*
"Against de cold... and de sorrow."
Elizabeth took the mug but didn't drink. The cold and the sorrow were what she deserved.
Everyone was down...even Tia Dalma.
Jack had touched everyone. Not just her...it seemed selfish now, looking back on it.
"It's a shame. I know you're t'inking that wid the Pearl, you coulda captured the devil and set free your fadder's soul." Tia looked at Will pittifully.
"Doesn't matter now. The Pearl's gone." Will's eyes seemed to flicker towards her. "Along with its captain."
She hadn't looked at him. Not once. Not because he held his suspisions...but because doing so would make her realise what Jack knew all along...she loved the blacksmith...but she didn't want him...she didn't need him...not like she needed Jack.
She thought one taste could sadate her...she now knew how wrong she was.
Gibbs stood in the doorway outside of the side the shack.
"Aye." he said mournfully. "And already the world seems a bit less bright. He fooled us all right to the end."
Elizabeth found she could no longer look at him, either.
"But I guess that honest streak finally won out." He added, now walking into the cabin.
Elizabeth felt tears sting her eyes.
He was a hero to everyone...just the way he would have wanted it.
"To Jack Sparrow!" Gibbs held his mug proudly in the air.
"Never another like Captain Jack." Ragetti added, sounding saddened.
"He was a gentleman of fortune, he was." Standing close to his friend, patting him on the shoulder.
Elizabeth finally spoke up.
"He was a good man."
Oh, there was never a true statment made about Jack Sparrow...except for that.
And she really believed it...because she had already told him he was....
And now it had become his own fall...
Will looked over at her. She could feel him staring.
His body language was giving off mixed signals to her..she was not sure whether he was berating her or honouring her.
" If there was anything could be done to bring him back..." He said to her quietly. His voice seemed calm, and he sounded like he was being very honest. "Elizabeth..."
She looked at him then.
Oh god...he knows...
"Would you do it? Hmmm?" Tia Dalma asked her, her hypnotic voice making Elizabeth look at the woman infront of her.
" would you? Hmmm?" She then asked the rest of the men in the room.
" What would any of you be willing to do? Hmmm? Would you sail to the ends of the eart', and beyond, to fetch back witty Jack and 'im precious Pearl?"
Her bright eyes still settles on Elizabeth. It was almost as if she knew...
"Aye." Soluted Gibbs, taking a stand and also taking another gulp from his mug.
"Aye!" Shuted Pintel, rising with Gibbs.
"Aye." Ragetti followed, although he sounded slightly more subdued.
"Awk! Aye." Cotton's parrot copied.
"Yes." Elizabeth said quietly. She could feel the tears well up again within her eyes.
She would do anything...
But she did not regret it. Whatever happened out there between him and the sea beast, she knew that the debt was re-paid...Jack owed nothing to no one anymore...
But she owed this to him.
She owed it to herself
She still needed him...she still wanted him...she still needed to want him.
Captain Jack Sparrow was many things...but the one thing that resembled him the most was freedom; and she wanted it back more than anything...it was worth more than anything she had in this life...
This life that she did not want to live in without him...
"Aye." Will whispered, looking deep in thought.
"Alright." The mysteriously beautiful woman told the crew, her voice becomming almost a whisper.
" But if you're goin' brave de weird, and haunted shores, at world's end, den... you will need a captain who knows dose waters"
There was a dull thud upon the stairs.
Everyone looked around.
He descended; his echoing boots causing a dull ache in the pit of her stomach.
"So tell me, what's become of my ship?"
The men gasped...Will give him a look of uter most hatred...
But Elizabeth knew.
She knew all too well.
They were going to find Captain Jack Sparrow.
...She needed to.
*_*_*_*_*_*
Finish
*_*_*_*_*_*
Originally posted by katelovespirate
oh my goodness. oh my goodness.you are awesome, truly. that was a work of art.
i enjoyed reading it so much, thank you thank you!!!!!
you really hit the nail on the head.
yeah, I totally agree. I was so fascinating and intense that I couldn't stop reading!!! Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!
thankyou guys 🙂
Its nice to know you enjoyed reading it as much as i enjoyed writing it lol 🙂
Just thought i'd put it on here 'cause you lot are all friendly and supportive and thought that you would probably enjoy something that is J/E shipper happy 🙂 lol
Again, thankyou !!! 🙂
Katelovespirate, you and willofthewisp NEED to keep on with your translations!!! 🙂
Originally posted by katelovespirate
i just re-read it. seriously. you did such a lovely job. its so erotic and sense-oriented, or something. i loved reading it.thanks for sharing it with us!!! 🙂
😮
Awww thanks! 🙂
and no problem 🙂 im glad i shared it 'cause its a story about my new fave shipper couple lol 🙂
I guess i just tried to figure out what the characters were feeling...and if erotic and horny are the words to use then so be it lmao! 😆
Does anyone else on here write j/e fanfics???
Originally posted by ivebeendepped43
i swear ill read this later, i just dont have the time rite now.. i KNOW itll b great
heehe!! take your time hun, no rush 💃 💃 💃
taurusbaby0509, thankyou hun! It means alot to me that people actually like the story!! 😄
I wasnt expecting any reviews so this is wonderful!! thankyou all so much!! 😆 😮 😛 🤣 💃
Originally posted by T.Maria
Sorry...forgot the epilogue!Chapter Thirteen
*Turning to face what you've become.
Buried the ashes of someone,
you're broken by the strain.
Trying to fill that space inside...
Am I just like you?
All the things you do...*"Against de cold... and de sorrow."
Elizabeth took the mug but didn't drink. The cold and the sorrow were what she deserved.
Everyone was down...even Tia Dalma.
Jack had touched everyone. Not just her...it seemed selfish now, looking back on it.
"It's a shame. I know you're t'inking that wid the Pearl, you coulda captured the devil and set free your fadder's soul." Tia looked at Will pittifully.
"Doesn't matter now. The Pearl's gone." Will's eyes seemed to flicker towards her. "Along with its captain."
She hadn't looked at him. Not once. Not because he held his suspisions...but because doing so would make her realise what Jack knew all along...she loved the blacksmith...but she didn't want him...she didn't need him...not like she needed Jack.
She thought one taste could sadate her...she now knew how wrong she was.
Gibbs stood in the doorway outside of the side the shack.
"Aye." he said mournfully. "And already the world seems a bit less bright. He fooled us all right to the end."
Elizabeth found she could no longer look at him, either.
"But I guess that honest streak finally won out." He added, now walking into the cabin.
Elizabeth felt tears sting her eyes.
He was a hero to everyone...just the way he would have wanted it.
"To Jack Sparrow!" Gibbs held his mug proudly in the air.
"Never another like Captain Jack." Ragetti added, sounding saddened.
"He was a gentleman of fortune, he was." Standing close to his friend, patting him on the shoulder.
Elizabeth finally spoke up.
"He was a good man."
Oh, there was never a true statment made about Jack Sparrow...except for that.
And she really believed it...because she had already told him he was....And now it had become his own fall...
Will looked over at her. She could feel him staring.
His body language was giving off mixed signals to her..she was not sure whether he was berating her or honouring her.
" If there was anything could be done to bring him back..." He said to her quietly. His voice seemed calm, and he sounded like he was being very honest. "Elizabeth..."She looked at him then.
Oh god...he knows...
"Would you do it? Hmmm?" Tia Dalma asked her, her hypnotic voice making Elizabeth look at the woman infront of her.
" would you? Hmmm?" She then asked the rest of the men in the room.
" What would any of you be willing to do? Hmmm? Would you sail to the ends of the eart', and beyond, to fetch back witty Jack and 'im precious Pearl?"Her bright eyes still settles on Elizabeth. It was almost as if she knew...
"Aye." Soluted Gibbs, taking a stand and also taking another gulp from his mug.
"Aye!" Shuted Pintel, rising with Gibbs.
"Aye." Ragetti followed, although he sounded slightly more subdued.
"Awk! Aye." Cotton's parrot copied.
"Yes." Elizabeth said quietly. She could feel the tears well up again within her eyes.
She would do anything...
But she did not regret it. Whatever happened out there between him and the sea beast, she knew that the debt was re-paid...Jack owed nothing to no one anymore...
But she owed this to him.
She owed it to herselfShe still needed him...she still wanted him...she still needed to want him.
Captain Jack Sparrow was many things...but the one thing that resembled him the most was freedom; and she wanted it back more than anything...it was worth more than anything she had in this life...
This life that she did not want to live in without him...
"Aye." Will whispered, looking deep in thought.
"Alright." The mysteriously beautiful woman told the crew, her voice becomming almost a whisper.
" But if you're goin' brave de weird, and haunted shores, at world's end, den... you will need a captain who knows dose waters"
There was a dull thud upon the stairs.
Everyone looked around.
He descended; his echoing boots causing a dull ache in the pit of her stomach.
"So tell me, what's become of my ship?"
The men gasped...Will give him a look of uter most hatred...
But Elizabeth knew.
She knew all too well.
They were going to find Captain Jack Sparrow.
...She needed to.
*_*_*_*_*_*
Finish
*_*_*_*_*_*
This is the only entry I've read on here so far....but this is Awesome....this sounds so real, just as if it were written for the movie -the book version. I love it....must go read the kiss scene now...
T.Maria this is absolutely awesome...I was so into this...I could picture everything in my mind as if I were watching it on the big screen...the scenes between Jack and Elizabeth were fabulous...Her thoughts and his thoughts...it soooo seemed real..like that is exactly what the writers were thinking when they wrote this....I'm going to print this off and save it...and read it time and time again...especially if we don't get what we want ....to read how you explain the kiss scene makes so much sense...it's exactly what she felt....Jack is an enigma....she and he are fatally attracted to each other...SO HOTT....LOVE IT
Originally posted by T.Maria
Does anyone else on here write j/e fanfics???
Sometimes, but not as good as you did. So here is one scene
I just wrote one fictional scene, it’s not really good, but I just found it interesting to see the other side of Jack.
It’s at the beginning of the 3rd movie. Jack somehow got rescued and comes back on the Pearl.
Jack: Thank you for saving me. Did anyone missed me? (he glances around)
Will: Jack!
But Tia pulls him aside.
Jack: Where is Lissy? Have you left her behind?
Tia: That’s the problem. (she looks truly worried) She has a fever since the second day we were on our journey....
Jack: And can’t you help her? I mean you could do so much...
Tia: I’ve tried everything, but there’s no hope...if there will be no barring of a miracle...she...she will be dying.
Jack: WHAT????? Where is she?
Tia: We have taken her into your bed.
Jack rushes down to his cabin. During the way he shouts to Gibbs to bring some rum and water.
Jack slowly enters his cabin. Liz is lying on the bed. Her face is blushed and she has a lot of beads of perspiration. Suddenly she starts to speak in fever, only a few words
Liz: Jack....forgive...need you...
Gibbs enters, followed by Will, with a bottle of rum in his hand and some water.
Jack: Thank you, now leave me alone.
Will: You don’t think I’ll go and leave Liz alone with you and a bottle of rum.
Gibbs: Come on. I don’t think he’s going to drink it on his own.
Will looks confused but follows Gibbs on the deck.
Jack is overcome by his feelings. He rips a bit of his shirt and dives it into the water. He sat down next to her and starts to wipe the sweat from her brow and whispers.
Jack: Love....don’t leave me...I never found someone like you...( he starts to fight back the tears) ... I never told you but I truly love you...so don’t leave me!!
Jack carries about her the next two hours, then he went back on the deck, starring with lot of sorrow into the dark. Tia comes to him.
Tia: And? Have you reached something?
Jack: Not yet. (and this time he had no smile in his face)
Tia: I know you love her. You’re the only person who can perform a miracle.
Jack goes back to his cabin, but forgot to shut the door. He sat down and nearly crying .
Jack: I’ll forgive you everything ...but please open your eyes...and speak to me... I can’t see you suffer this way.
During this Will was looking through the open door. Tia comes along and whispers to Will.
Tia: Let her go....Her heart belongs to Jack...If he’ll save her again ...then you should end your engagement...She’ll never leave you, but her heart will always belong to Jack.
Will: It’s not true. She just did it to save us...She doesn’t love him....he just seduced her...
Tia: No, Will! ...He’s her soul mate and if she marries you she’ll accuses her of making the wrong decision every day...and I don’t think she’ll be happy with that...
Will: That’s still my problem...but I don’t let her go to this betrayer...He can’t love a woman the way she deserves it.
Tia shuts the door and walks away, without answering Will.
Jack, while holding her hand, has fallen asleep. Suddenly Liz wakes up with a jerk and Jack as well.
Jack: Luv! You’re back (with an incredible happiness, but suddenly changes)....mhm...I mean it’s time that you’re awake.
Liz: (with an incredible headache a bit disoriented) Where am I ?
Jack: (starts smiling) Where luv? Your in MY cabin on MY ship.
Liz: (hold her head) Oh, this pain...
Jack: It’s because I’ve given you half of the bottle of rum.
Liz: What? ....Jack....I have to excuse to what I’ve don to you...It was not easy...
Jack: (gives her an admiring glance) No! It was my fault.
Liz looks a bit confused. Since when does Jack admit a mistake?
Jack: I wanted you to act like a pirate and so you did. Why should I be angry at all? I just got a taste? (he smirks)
Liz: Well, Jack....I don’t think you can judge the taste by only testing it once, can you?
Jack: (walks slowly in her direction) So...you think I should taste it twice?
With that he sits down next to her. Both fix their gaze on each other. And finally it was Liz who started the kiss again. But it was interrupted again. Will was coming in.
Will: Liz? Jack?
Both stare at Will.
Liz: What?
Will: I don’t know (suddenly runs out)
Jack: Bugger. I think we have hurt the Whelp.
i am really . i ve been writing a Liz/Jack fanfic on my sisters laptop. it was over 60 pages long. her laptop wasnt very efficient, so they finally, without telling me, wiped the laptop clear so everything on the comp. was erased! including my story!!! gosh im !!!! that took me HOURS! it was BY FAR my best story ive EVER written. i was planning that once i finished the story, i would send it to my home computer so i would have it, but they erased the comp w/o telling me so i never got to. we theres 24 hours of genius wasted!