A Jack/Elizabeth fanfic for DMC (For Us Believers!)

Started by ivebeendepped433 pages
ivebeendepped43 Ivebeendepped 4 ever!

im going to ignore you now, so yeah

Bwa Ha Ha Senior Member

why

ivebeendepped43 Ivebeendepped 4 ever!

what? im sorry, i thought i heard a little voice.

Bwa Ha Ha Senior Member

oh, sorry i didn't know you need a hearing aid... I'LL HAVE TO SPEAK A LITTLE LOUDER THEN. ARE YOU REALLY THAT OLD?

ivebeendepped43 Ivebeendepped 4 ever!

*singsong voice* "still not listening!" from Emporers New Groove, another of my favorite movies!

Bwa Ha Ha Senior Member

i like that movie

ivebeendepped43 Ivebeendepped 4 ever!

thats nice

Bwa Ha Ha Senior Member

hysterical

ivebeendepped43 Ivebeendepped 4 ever!

its not supposed to b funny. so yeah

CaptinJackLover Senior Member

u guys need to stop!

T.Maria Oh, Spiffing!!
Originally posted by lovethemtigers
T.Maria this is absolutely awesome...I was so into this...I could picture everything in my mind as if I were watching it on the big screen...the scenes between Jack and Elizabeth were fabulous...Her thoughts and his thoughts...it soooo seemed real..like that is exactly what the writers were thinking when they wrote this....I'm going to print this off and save it...and read it time and time again...especially if we don't get what we want ....to read how you explain the kiss scene makes so much sense...it's exactly what she felt....Jack is an enigma....she and he are fatally attracted to each other...SO HOTT....LOVE IT

Lovethemtigers, i am so touched by this! 😮 😄

I was thinking that most people would not agree with the way that i thought the characters were thinking lol But im very pleased to see i was wrong!!! 😛

And Jackysparrow, I loved it and want to read more!!!!! 😄
You have a good style, and there is no way that i am better than you or anyone else who likes to write...at the end of the day everyone has a style and its unique to them 🙂
And yours is brilliant!!! 😄

Ivebeendeppened, I want to read yours, u have to rewrite it lol! 😄

Jacky Sparrow Pirate!

oh, thank you! but i haven't written anything else! maybe i'll do it!

T.Maria Oh, Spiffing!!

go for it! 🙂
you've got nothing to lose! you've got the talent so why not! 🙂

Jacky Sparrow Pirate!

i have talent? tell it my past English teacher, she gave me ever time a bad mark for my writing!

ivebeendepped43 Ivebeendepped 4 ever!

Originally posted by T.Maria
Lovethemtigers, i am so touched by this! 😮 😄

I was thinking that most people would not agree with the way that i thought the characters were thinking lol But im very pleased to see i was wrong!!! 😛

And Jackysparrow, I loved it and want to read more!!!!! 😄
You have a good style, and there is no way that i am better than you or anyone else who likes to write...at the end of the day everyone has a style and its unique to them 🙂
And yours is brilliant!!! 😄

Ivebeendeppened, I want to read yours, u have to rewrite it lol! 😄

i would if i could bu i cant. i would do ANYTHING to get it back. i h8 my parents! all they had to do is go into my room and TELL me they were erasing everything and it would have all been fine! i wanna break down and cry. that was the ultimate story of mine. i amazed myself every time i read it over. i think it might have been from reading ur guys fan fics, really. cuz i could have never written anything like that if it hadnt been 4 sccch, cuz she told me bout this site. I WANT MY STORY! *throws tantrum* oh well, ill just have to write another one. but it will never b as good.
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