Sparrabeth

Started by mmoviejunkie300 pages

that was wonderful!!!!
amazing!!!!

Kate, You have me in tears...I loved the scene...OMG, what are we going to do without these great scenes in AWE...please keep writing them, they make me happy. It's so easy to read them and picture Jack and Elizabeth... i love it....

awe thanks guys. lol. i always feel like such a sap when i write.

it was really, really good! you should write more😄

still waiting for the rest of yours, savvy. 🙂

oh yeah...oopsies😄

ill write some and post um later...lol

I Know it is very easy to imagine Jack and Lizzie!! My imagination isnt all that great but when i read stories about those 2....my mind runs wild!!! I Love it!!!

I Know i love all these stories but im gonna cry when i dont see scenes like that in the Movies!! 🙁

hehe, we should hire the actors and make our own movie! we can write the scenes and make them act um out. lol

^^ Oh believe me i've thought off that....lol...lets all put our Money together and do it!! *reaches into pocket and pulls out 55 cents, a piece off Orbitz Gum, and an earring* sorry guys but unless my earring is worth a Million Dollars i think we are out of luck!! LOL!!

i've got 10 bucks, 3 packs of orbitz, and my watch(really) well, the watch is like, 50 dollars, plus the 10 is like, 60 bucks...and the orbitz...well, refreshments? lol

^ ok so we got 60 dollars and 55 cents....anyone else? lol

maybe we can get all the actors to bite off half a piece of all our orbitz gum and have chiki sell it on ebay😄

^^ LOL....good Idea....and i have 5 Johnny Authentic Autographs.....i'll give her one to sell also!!!

hmm...i can sell my...........um.............my bed? no, me and johnny need that....ok, i can sell my clothes...and his...we dont need those😄

interesting...

*offers $30*

hey savvy are you continuing your story tonight?

umm...well, im workin on it...i think it'll be done soon

and YAY...now we have 90$ lol

lol

here it is...its not much, but i was having a hard time getting the story to move along...so it's kind've just an imbetween part...hope you like it anyway😄

Jack lands with a thump on the ground, a surprised look on his face.
Liz rushes over to help him up.
Liz: Jack, are you alright.
He pushes her hand away.
Jack: Yes, yes, I’m fine.
He stands and angrily begins to march toward the trees.
James: Jack, where are you going?
Jack: Where do you think? Back to the beach.
James(grinning): Wrong way.
Jack grunts, and wordlessly starts toward the other side instead.
Will follows him leaving James and Liz alone.
Liz looks uncomfortable, and starts to head back, but James catches her arm.
James: You know my name, now I’d like to know yours.
Liz: Elizabeth...Elizabeth Spa- (she stops herself, surprised at what she almost said) Swann.
James nods his head and releases her, a knowing look on his face.
James: Me and umm...what’s his name...will head back to the ship. Seems to me you and Jack have some other things to tend to. Just don’t be too long, I’m not sure how long I can wait.
Liz: Thank you
He smiles at her
James: Jack always did have all the luck with women...
Liz looks incredulous
Liz: Are you kidding me? Look at you you’re gorgeous...I mean—
She realizes what she said and looks embarrassed, but James merely looks amused.
James: Looks can be deceiving luv.
He turns and trails after the other two men, leaving Liz to find her way back alone.
Liz: Bloody pirates....

should be more later though😄

i REALLY like it!!!
LOVE it!!!
you rock!!!