Sparrabeth

not yet....im still reading it...i've being juggling many things tonight so i havent been able to sit and just read the fic....but im on Chappie 3...just after he explains the "P"...it's soooo good and she does keep them in charater very well!!!

I know....just the part about the cloth--ah! I won't spoil it. But you're in for a surprise.

ok im quitting everything im doing and now just devoting my time to reading this fic....now u got me hearsting to know what happens!! LOL!

LMAO. It's quiet a story..

Wow...Mina...I read the story and it was great..but very sad...I loved how Jack was portrayed..gosh, I felt like I was reading a great historical romance novel....

The lace appears in DMC for the first time...I don't know how to analyze this..i saw it in the extras on DMC DVD but it never occured to me that it could have come from Elizabeth....but how, when?????

I couldn't come on here yesterday coz the computer decided to crash lol
this stroy souds great! I shall read it right away!

sam xx

from elizabeth...??yes lovethemtigers you are right..HOW?WHEN? ...it could be very exciting and beautiful 🙂 but...i really don´t know how it could happen...i think it didn´t happen...because if it happened,terry and ted would point to it or they would say something about it....something what could make us think about it all the time....

OMG OMG OMG....MINA!!! I read that fic last night and i was crying soooo much!! OMG....wow it was the last thing i thought of last night....Totally had dream replaying everything in my dream....woke up this morning and the first thing that popped into my head was WOW that story was amazing!!! I have never had a Fanfic impact me the way that fic did!!! OMG....it was sooooooo sad, but the characters were Dead On!!! She kept them in character, the whole time....except for when Jack freaked out when Liz (well i wont kill the story) but she still played it off nicely cause even Jack didnt know what was happening to him!!! OMG I still cant get over this story.....it was an amazing story, throughout the whole thing i felt their pain!!! WOW!

do you mean " When the Rum Runs Out " ?

yes that one! omg so good....I recommend to everyone to read!

such a bittersweet story.... 🙁

but it was great....it felt like it was real...like it could really happen...I could so envision Jack and Lizzie - I've never read a fanfic where I could actually picture them...her wording was dead on....all the phrases she had Jack use....just as you would imagine....I love the way he kept denying that he loved her..I could really see that happening...so hottt....

i know u can truly feel the pain they go through....im still in awwww...i've been telling everyone about this story...i love it!!! I still feel like crying! Brilliant, and the lines Jack would say i could totally see him saying them...totally in character! love it

can someone give me a link? the search isn't working.

Here ya go:

http://movies.adultfanfiction.net/s...0&chapter=1

It is an amazing story. I don't like adultfanfiction but just decided to browse there and there it was, a great story.

Just the story on how he got that cloth...it haunts me.

I know it's crazy how someone will write the story and then all of the sudden the fact about what Jack is wearing is being brought up...The cloth around his wrist he got from a "Lady" not wend or a widow a Lady

The Story is just amazing!!! Ahhhhhhh i dont know why this story has affected me so much!!! Its just great!! *clicks on link and begins reading again!*

Im going to email this author. Is just....I mean could it be only a coincidence about what wiki pedia says about the cloth? And how the story explains how he got it??

Though...I really think that cloth is from Elizabeth--I don't mean is as a joke. That cloth was not there in COTBP untill DMC...Think about it.

I need a close up of that cloth.

what cloth? the one around his wrist?

YUP YUP Yup that cloth around his left wrist