Norribeth: the KMC fic

Good so far!

just bumping it up so it doesn't get lost.

so is this ending or what?

continue!! gah!!!!!

Surreal was supposed to write the actual ending.

Ahhhhhhhhhh the suspense! Someone, I beg you, please, please, please, please write something!

P.S. I watched Secret Window last night, I loved it so much. What a twist! Our family had corn for dinner tonight and I was a bit edgy eating it lol. Those of you who have watched the movie know what I mean!

Willo, would you like to go ahead and end it? Maybe just a little Jack scene to tie things up? 🙂

Originally posted by surfchikpir8fan
Ahhhhhhhhhh the suspense! Someone, I beg you, please, please, please, please write something!

P.S. I watched Secret Window last night, I loved it so much. What a twist! Our family had corn for dinner tonight and I was a bit edgy eating it lol. Those of you who have watched the movie know what I mean!

it pretty good actually

pretty good? its awesome!!!

correction AWEsome

lmao!!! im so gonna use that now!!

✅ thats what i say my techers think im strange too but *shrugs*.....

i dont think ur strange....

really? *awe filled look*

I'm thinking if no ending is posted within 24 hours I'm going to go ahead and write one.

YAY!

No I live in Australia so it didn't air, but I bought it recently, ye' know, just go out and buy movies you've never seen before, lol, gambling ye' money!

Please, is this it the end .... oh well, what's stopping us from writing more!

Sorry, Surreal, the fans demanded.

CUT TO BEACH

(Back in the cabin, Liz and James have proceeded to start "playing cards," while Jack is walking along the beach back to his rock.)

Jack: Time to show me your secrets.

(He tries to lift it several times)

Will: Jack? What are you doing?

(Jack tries to lift it even more)

Jack: Make yourself useful.

(He and Will lift the rock only for it to tumble over and reveal a small opening on the bottom. It is not a rock at all, but a cleverly disguised chest)

Jack: All's fine now, don't need you anymore.

Will: What have you hidden from everyone?

Jack: The question is, what did someone hide from all of US?

(Jack opens the little door and looks inside. He and Will are floored.)

Will: That's incredible.

Jack: Thank you, Jack, for finding such a thing.

(Will is NOT going to say that)

Will: I supposed we should go get the others.

Jack: Let them have tonight, mate. And then.....the horizon!

YAAAAAAAAY!!! loving it! is it the end? it was a really great ending! cliffi but also a closer. loved that last line it really touched me "And then....the horizon!"

OH BRILLIANT!!! that was SUCH a perfect ending... a bit of casablanca or something--- just AMAZING.... 🙂 I'm so, so glad. This was such a great, fun story. are we for putting it on fanfic then?