Poetry

Post your poetry... Here is a link to mine

http://gurlpages.com/luciferlover/poems.html

And also a story I have not completed yet...

http://gurlpages.com/luciferlover/begining.html

You've posted this in the wrong place girl!

Yep I know opps... Dang stupid brother... Bothering me while I was posting.... That shows how i can be distracted. lol

've read some on your story; interesting!

this is so spaming but I leave it for this forum mods to deal with it

its not; it's for everyone to post their poetry. there's been threads similar before, only difference is that people have copy/pasted in their things. no difference.

it is on VP site right?

Actually its because I posted in the wrong forum. Thats my fault I was not paying attention. Spamming is when its something useless like an all smile thread.

Thanks mah!

Yeah its my site thats only because its very long I did not want to take up space.

spaming is to promote own web sites, if these things aint your site it is ok. But is it for own personal hits it is spaming

I am not promoting it. Its my poetry. Fine you want me to cut and past it then I will. I thought it would be easier. Its not hurting anyone.

This is spamming what we are doing know so please if you have opinions on my poetry or you have your own post them.

Yeah Finti, dont be such a negative Nancy! 😛

(The Lover)

Her heart burned with the fire of a thousand suns,
and the tears in her heart had only begun.
Her face was tired but filled with hope,
while on her own she could barely cope.
Her hair was long, and wispy too,
if she desired your heart she'd play with you.
She'd playfully bat her big blue eyes,
leaving men to speak only a sigh.
She was a lover, not a fighter,
but the scars on her skin rose higher and higher.
Her body was thin, not weak, but strong,
the look in her eyes showed she'd been wronged.
She walked with the grace of a gliding ghost,
her smile brought out the boy inside most.
She cocked her head to one side whenever she spoke,
her laugh would echo if one told a joke.
She'd hold her head high as she'd fade from your sight,
on her way home for another lonely night.

~~~The most recent...not exactly the best I admit~~~

tis good.

my poetry-skills are non-existing

it seems you are not alone there Mah 😂

well I havent written anything recently, but at the moment I'm trying to perfect the art of writting songs.
maybe I'll find some thing that hasnt been post here yet, I'll have a look tonight.

violetts are blue and so are .........

wo there finti! alot missing there!

is it me or you writing that poem?

what!?

I asked if it was me or you writing that poem since you said alot was missing.